Wow! Long chapter!

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"The walls of Moria." Gimli looked at the wall in amazement.

As the moon and stars came out, an elegant, blue door appeared.
"It says; SPEAK FRIEND AND ENTER." Gandalf translated.

"What do we do?" Cecelia asked.

"Oh, it's quite simple. All you have to do is if you're a friend, you just speak the password, and the doors will open." Gandalf replied.

Gandalf tried many passwords. And eventually, no one wanted to watch any more.

Legolas set Jane down on the ground, and she opened her eyes. She sat up.

"Wha-Where am I?" She said.

"The Mines of Moria." Ana replied.

"The mines of what?" Jane looked dizzy.

"Moria" Lea said. Jane stood up.

Emerald, Pippin, Merry, and Cecelia were throwing stones into the water.

"Do not disturb the water." Aragorn caught Pippin's hand.

Jane looked at the water as Frodo stood up.

"What is it?" Ana asked.

"The water…" Jane jumped when the doors swung open.

"That was easy." Lea whispered.

Cecelia screamed. There were skeletons, everywhere.

"No, no, no!" Gimli ran around, looking around.

"These are no mines, it's a tomb!" Boromir said. Legolas picked up an arrow.

"Goblins!" He said.

Lea screamed as Frodo, Jane, Ana, and Cecelia got picked up by a huge octopus like monster.

"STRIDER!"

"ARAGORN!"

"Someone HEEEEELP!"

Aragorn and Boromir began cutting the arms off the giant monster. Jane screamed. Just then Cecelia was thrown towards Moria. Merry caught her, but he fell over, and Pippin caught him.

"Thanks." Cecelia blushed.

Frodo almost fell into the monster's mouth but was caught by Boromir instead.

"HEEEEELP!" Jane and Ana screamed. The monster had no interest in eating Jane or Ana, so he threw them away. Legolas caught Jane just as Aragorn caught Ana. Legolas put Jane down, shot the monster, and picked her back up.

"INTO THE MINES!" Gandalf screamed.

They ran through the doors, and the monster shut the entrance by creating an avalanche.

"We have but one choice, to face the long and dark of Moria." Gandalf said, lighting his staff.

"Be on your guard, there are fouler things than orcs in the deep places of the world."

Jane and Ana walked over to Lea, Cecelia, and Emerald. Cecelia had her sword drawn, she was shaking, and she turned around several times to see if anyone was there.

Ana and Jane were also shaking, but weren't as shaky as Cecelia.

Gandalf stopped.

"I don't remember this place." Gandalf mumbled. Emerald groaned and plopped down on a rock. Frodo walked over to Gandalf.

Cecelia gasped.

"Jane, can I use your bow?" She asked. Jane laughed.

"Of course not, why?"

"Look." Cecelia pointed down into the mines. Something was crawling along the walls.

"Aragorn!" Ana whispered, looking at the creature.

"Yes?"

"What's that?" She pointed to the creature.

"Gollum, he's been tracking us since we entered Moria."

"It's that way." Gandalf said, pointing.

"He's remembered!" Merry said, standing up.

"The air doesn't smell so foul down here! In doubt, Meriadoc, always follow your noes!" Gandalf said.

"Let me risk a little more light." Gandalf said, and his staff brightened.

"Behold! The great realm and Dwarf City of Dwarrodwelf!"

"Whoa." Ana gasped. There were pillars everywhere.

They came across a room, and inside was a coffin. Gimli gasped. He ran into the room.

"Gimli!" Gandalf shouted. They followed him into the room.

"No… No! No." Gimli began sobbing.

Gandalf read the markings on the coffin.

"Here lies Balin, son of Fundin, Lord of Moria. So he is dead, then. It's as I've feared." He picked up an ancient book.

"We must move on, we cannot linger." Legolas said. Jane nodded.

"They have taken the Bridge and the second hall. We have barred the gates but we cannot hold them for long. The ground shakes, drums in the deep. We cannot get out. A shadow moves in the dark. Will none save us? They are coming." Gandalf read from the book.

Jane jumped as a loud clatter filled the air. Pippin had knocked a skeleton down a well.

"Fool of a Took! Throw yourself in next time and rid us of your stupidity!" Gandalf said, grabbing his hat and staff back.

Ana jumped. They heard rumbling… Growing closer and closer… Louder and louder…

"Mr. Frodo!" Sam looked at Frodo. His sword was glowing blue.

"Orcs!" Legolas said.

"Get back! Stay close to Gandalf!" Aragorn shouted at the hobbits. They did as he said.

Jane, Boromir, Ana, Aragorn, and Legolas ran to shut the door, they put spears, boards, and anything possible to keep the door shut.

"They have a cave troll." Boromir said, facing the Hobbits and Gandalf.

Jane backed up, and loaded her bow. Ana drew her sword and stood beside Jane. The Hobbits drew theirs as well. Aragorn and Legolas had their own bows loaded, as Boromir stood beside them.

Orcs pounded on the door. They managed to make a hole in the door. Arrows shot through the gate. Jane shot an arrow through the hole and managed to kill an orc. Legolas and Aragorn did the same. They kept shooting until the orcs slammed down the door. The fight started.

And to make things worse, a Cave Troll barged into the room. It roared. It stepped on an orc. That Ana was currently killing, and the impact sent her flying across the room. Jane ran to her aid.

"Aragorn!" They heard Frodo yell. Everyone turned to see the Troll stabbing Frodo with a spear, and Aragorn unconscious on the ground beside him.

"FRODO!" Everyone screamed. Lea was in shock. Pippin and Merry jumped on the troll as Legolas shot its head. The troll pulled the arrow out of its head, groaned, and fell on the floor, dead.

Everyone ran to Frodo. He opened his eyes.

"He's alive." Sam sighed. Lea smiled.

Frodo panted slightly, trying to regain his breath.

"How did he do it…?" Jane whispered.

Frodo opened his shirt to reveal white, shining chain-mail.

"Mithril…" Gimli whispered.

"Whoa." Ana gasped.

The rumbling started again.

"Great." Emerald mumbled.

"To the bridge of Khaza-dum!" Gandalf said.

The Fellowship sprinted out of the room.

Orcs and Goblins came pouring out of holes in the ground, roof, and walls. They stopped, they were surrounded.

Just then a deep roar filled the hall. A light danced through the hall, casting strange shadows. Cecelia grabbed Merry's sleeve.

"What is this new devilry?" Boromir whispered.

"A balrog. A demon of the ancient world." Gandalf said. The balrog roared again. Cecelia grabbed Merry's hand. They looked at each other, and stepped away, blushing. (All Harry Potter fans know where that one's from.)

"This foe is beyond all of you, RUN!" Gandalf yelled. Emerald grabbed Cecelia's arm and dragged her towards the door. Boromir ran towards the stairs, but there was a cliff instead. Jane and Legolas caught him and dragged him back.

"Lead them on Aragorn, the bridge is near." Gandalf said. Aragorn hesitated.

"Do as I say! Swords are no more use here." Gandalf shoved him.

They kept running until they reached a gap in the stairs. Jane and Legolas jumped across. They were silent for a moment.

"Gandalf!" Jane called. He jumped across. They kept jumping and catching people until the bridge crumbled. Frodo and Aragorn were still on the other side. The balrog roared. A rock fell and the bridge began to fall. Aragorn and Frodo leaned forward and the bridge crashed onto the other side. They kept running, until they saw the bridge.

The balrog was behind them.

"Over the bridge! Fly!" Gandalf instructed. They did as he said. Gandalf stopped in the middle.

"You cannot pass!" He shouted at the Balrog.

"GANDALF!" Frodo and Lea screamed at the same time. Gandalf mumbled something and a magic shield appeared which protected him from the Balrog's sword.

"YOU! SHALL NOT, PASS!" Gandalf screamed, slamming his staff onto the bridge. Cracks appeared. The Balrog stepped forward, and the bridge crumbled. The Balrog fell. Gandalf turned around.

Just then the Balrog's whip appeared and pulled Gandalf off the bridge. He clung on.

"GANDALF!" Frodo screamed. Boromir caught him as he tried to run to his aid.

"Fly you fools!" Gandalf said as he let go of the bridge and fell into the darkness below.

"NO!" Frodo cried as his friend fell.

They ran outside. The girls fell onto the ground, sobbing, while Boromir tried to stop Gimli from running back into the mines.

"Legolas, get them up!" Aragorn said.

"Give them a moment for pity's sake!" Boromir yelled at him.

"By nightfall these hills will be swarming with orcs!" He yelled back.

Lea looked around, she saw Frodo walking away.

"Frodo!" She called. He turned around. No one could miss the silvery tear sliding down his cheek.


NO! Gandalf died! DX

Poor Frodo.

I think there was some typos in this chapter...

Oh well!

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