Annabeth
Okay maybe it was my fault that I was in this situation, but that doesn't mean I should get in trouble for it, especially when I doesn't even remember how I got there in the first place.
Percy and I had simply gone to his cabin to get away from camp activities for a little while. Sure maybe we had kissed a few times, but I'm a daughter of Athena, I would never let us go as far as that. But apparently that was exactly what was about to happen because next thing I knew I was being pulled out from under my boyfriend with my shirt off and jeans unzipped.
It had taken me several seconds to clear my head and comprehend what was going on. Percy was on his bed in only boxers, his face was bright red, and he appeared to be cowering in fear. I felt a grip on my arm and turned to face whoever it was.
I was greeted by the same grey eyes as my own, the eyes of Athena.
"MOM!" I jumped back landing next to Percy, my face burning.
"Annabeth Chase what in the gods name do you think you're doing!?"
"I-I-"
"I've heard enough! Go to your cabin now!"
"But-but-" Suddenly I was being pulled by my hair towards the door. "Ow! Mom! At least let me get a shirt on!"
"Annabeth!" I heard Percy scramble to his feet, but he stopped midstride most likely after my mother glared at him.
She just tugged me out the door. At this point I figured I was going to die of embarrassment. It was bad enough that I was shirtless and being pulled out of my boyfriend's cabin, but the fact that it was my godly mother pulling me out of the door made it ten times worse.
I looked around as best I could to see and hear people laughing at me; I was never going to be able to live this one down.
I glanced up at the cabin to see my siblings in the door laughing at me. They won't be laughing tomorrow when I get them up and hour earlier for an extra long run.
When Athena pulled me into the cabin I could hear all my siblings scramble to their respective bunks while I was shoved into mine.
"I have come to a decision." She announced while I was regaining my balance.
"And that would be…" I said blatantly.
"You're all grounded!"
Lexie: Okay this is a sample of the rewrite, please tell me your honest opinions. With the rewrite I plan on alternating between Annabeth, Lexie, and possibly Sean's POV. Do you like it like this or do you think I should stick with just Lexie's POV and improve what I had already written? And I had originally written this in third person, do you think I should stick with first or swap to third? Let me know what you think and I appreciate it. Also I recently updated The Random Fact Book of Annabeth Chase, so if you haven't checked that out yet please do.