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Hermione POV:
"Calm own Hermione! It's going to be fine," my best friend Ginny said. We are currently in the girl's dorm room. Tonight we are having a Halloween Ball. And I'm totally freaking out.
"No its not! My hair is unmanageable, my makeup is horrible, my costume is lame- I'll look ridiculous!'' I said as I sat down. My hair was sticking up everywhere, my makeup was smudged, and I look stupid.
Ginny looked at me. "We are doing a makeover on you then." I began to argue, "And you don't have a say in it," She said looking at me.
I groaned, "Fine, just don't make me look like a clown."
She only laughed. "Okay, I promise." She led me to a chair and made me sit.
"First, I'm going to work on your hair," Ginny said to me. She wet it down and combed it out. She used Sleekeazy's hair products to tame my curls. Then she put a bit of moose in it to take out the frizz. She braided my bangs, and clipped it in the back. She spritzed a little hairspray to hold it in place. Then, she put a golden hairband around my head, on my forehead.
"Gorgeous!" Ginny exclaimed.
"Now for your make up," Ginny told me. "You have great skin, so no foundation for you!" She put a pale pink blush on my cheeks. When she was done with that, she got started on my eye makeup. For eye shadow, she put a shimmery gold on my eye lids.
"We are going for a soft, sweet look for you," She told me. "So we are going to put a brown eye liner on you." I closed my eyes and felt her put it on. It went to the middle of my eye. She did the same thing on the bottom lid. She also pulled out brown mascara and out it on me. To top it off, she put clear lip gloss on me.
"There finished. Now let me help you into your costume," Ginny said. My costume was a Greek Goddess, a white gown, with gold lining.
"Okay, now look at yourself!" She demanded.
"Oh my Merlin! I look, look- ''
"Gorgeous, I know…I'm an artist," Ginny laughed.
I went up to her and hugged her. "Thank you so much!"
"You're welcome, now let me get ready!" Ginny cried. She put glittery red eye shadow on, and black eye liner and mascara. She left her hair down. She then, shimmied into her devil's costume.
"How do I look?" She asked me.
"Simply gorgeous! Harry is going to faint when he sees you!" I said.
"Ha, thanks. But we got to go! We're going to be late!" Ginny cried. I looked at the clock; yep we were, if we didn't leave now.
We ran out of the Griffindor common room. The ball was being held in the Great Hall. We got to the two huge oak doors.
"Ready Goddess?" Ginny asked me.
"Are YOU ready Little Devil?" I asked her. She only laughed and pushed the doors. When we walked in, everyone looked at us. I only blushed. Ginny found Harry, and walked towards him. His eyes widened as he saw her. I giggled.
"What are you giggling at my Goddess?" a silky voice asked. I turned around and saw a man in front of me. He was dressed as Prince Charming. He had platinum blonde hair and gray/silver eyes. He also wore a mask.
"Nothing of importance," I answered.
"Okay then. Would you like to dance?" Prince Charming asked. He held out his hand.
I took it. "I would love to," I answered. We walked over to the dance floor. He put his hands on my waist, and I wrapped my arms around his neck. We started to sway.
"So, what's your name?" He asked.
"Hermione, what's you name?"
"If I told you, it wouldn't be a surprise, now would it?" He smirked.
I rolled my eyes. "I guess," I said. It was silent for a few moments.
"Why are you wearing a mask? This isn't a masquerade ball," I questioned.
He chuckled. "I just felt like wearing one."
I giggled. "Alrighty then." We talked about anything and everything. Laughing most of the time.
"Okay, everyone this is the last song of the night." The Dark Waltz by Haley Williams came on.
"I love this song!" I exclaimed. I started to hum to it.
We are the lucky ones
We shine like a thousand suns
When all of the color runs together
"You have a lovely voice," he said.
"Thank you," I said.
I'll keep you company
In one glorious harmony
Waltzing with destiny forever
Dance me into the night
Underneath the moon shining so bright
Turning me into the light
Time dances whirling past
I gaze through the looking glass
And feel just beyond my grasp is heaven
I am really curious. Who is this Prince Charming? Who is he?
Sacred geometry
Where movement is poetry
Visions of you and me forever
Dance me into the night
Underneath the moon shining so bright
Turning me into the light
When the song was over, I removed the mask. I gasped. It was Draco Malfoy!
''I know what you're thinking but...'' he tried to say.
''I was dancing with you. WITH YOU! And you didn't do anything?" I exclaimed. Hesitantly he took a step forward.
''I like you Hermione, I liked you since 3rd year when you broke my nose,'' he said.
''Really?'' I said. I liked Draco to. Since 5th year actually. And hearing that he liked me was unbelievable.
He took another step forward. ''Really,'' he said in a low whisper. He put his arms around my waist, and I put my arms around his neck. His head was lowering to mine at a fast pace. His lips were on mine and it felt so incredible. Draco's lips were on mine, molding to mine. His tongue asked for entrance on my lower lip. I granted it to him, and our tongues with wrestling to see who would gain dominance. Finally breathing was not a question. We broke away and his face looked to be in total bliss. I can honestly say that I felt that I was to.
''Be my girlfriend,'' he said asking it of me.
''How could I say no?'' I answered and went in for another kiss.
Dance me into the night
Underneath the moon shining so bright
Let the dark waltz begin
Oh let me wheel - let me spin
Let it take me again
Turning me into the light
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