ATTENTION THIS STORY IS UNDER REVIEW AND WILL HOPEFULLY HAVE BETTER GRAMMAR AND SPELLING SOON THANK YOU PLEASE REVIEW!
Hello this is Minnie and I'd like to welcome you to my story world.
Disclaimer I do not own YYH
Hiei sat in his tree staring out at the boring city sky line. why did koenma have to put him in such a discussing place was beyond him. Having to babysit the moronic detective was bad but, being locked away in a city with no large forest and loud machinery was bull shit!
Hiei was snapped out of his inner ranting by a dark chuckle quickly drawing his sword hiei looked for the intruder. in a shadow was a man, no demon dressed in a traditional samurai garb. He had dark yellow eyes and sharp teeth like a shark.
"sorry to interrupt your train of thought but I have a message from koenma " "what is it " Hiei said with a voice of cold indifference.
"well Mr. Hiei killing the messenger for the maze castle mission was a big no-no and koenma is rather unhappy you should have seen the tantrum he though when he heard what you did."
Hiei glared at the smiling demon not quite understanding what he wanted "I shall do the same to you if you don't get to the point" the demons smile only grew at the threat like he was getting a sick trill from keeping the angry fire demon waiting on edge.
pulling out a scroll of paper the demon cleared his voice and read the note "your punishment is a month with no powers and bound in a nonlethal body." Hiei could not believe his ears. 'a month with no power?! bound in another body?! that little bastard koenma has crossed the line! he can not do such a thing to me!'
the enraged demon tried to attack the messenger but His sword went though him like he was smoke. "what is this trickery!?" the angry one snarled The messenger laughed at Hiei and Hiei snarled and snapped back in reply.
"my, my what a temper. After the last time, do you think koenma wouldn't take precautions? No matter "the demon pulled a small bag out of his pocket and tossed it to Hiei. Grabbing it out of the air Hiei looked at the messenger
"what's this"? "that is the punishment. it will explode if you don't open it soon, so i would hurry up and open it if i where you" the grinning demon replied. Hiei was skeptical but he didn't want to have to heal burns as there actually rather painful for even the toughest fire demons. the irony that burns hurt fire demons. Opening the bag, powder exploded all over Hiei.
The effects were almost instantaneous Hiei started to feel sleepy and dizzy "W …..wha….what d..did you do to me ?" Hiei looked at the messenger "oh I forgot to tell you this is also a test for yusake to teach him responsibility"he said with that creepy smile"good luck" disappearing to thin air. Hiei feel out of his tree and landed with a soft thump. Looking up at the blue sky Hiei quickly slipped in to darkness.
So how's that for a first chapter?i know its short but i'm working on it any ideas will be great. Like, don't like. tell me oh and flames will be used to make cookies.
ok the first chapter is less of a disaster but i'm looking for a beta if you have suggestions review thanks for reading.