Bit-sized: The Beginnings

by Assassinforhire2

Mello and Matt have tortured Near to the end of his rope. When he finally does the unthinkable, take revenge, he grows unbelievably small. Now Matt and Mello have to find a way to get him back to normal size before L comes back to check up on the troublesome trio.A MelloxNearxMatt fanfic. Threshie has given me the permission to write a story similar to this, thanks Threshie.

7. That time

So it's that time, what time may you be asking? Oh! This time! The time where I am going to ask a few simple questions and I would like a few simple responses. Questions you say? Well, questions like... MY STORIES OF COURSE! Now for as of specifically a question you will just have to take the survey to know those. So let me explain myself here, I am to a point where I get readers every so often and a review every so often, I used to think that was amazing, and I still do don't get me wrong, but it's not enough feedback! I need to know from you, my audience on exactly what you think I need to improve and what I need to include or you would like me to include in my stories. Now it can be positive and negative feedback, I will read it all and write back, but I would like the negative feedback explained.

For questions, you may choose to answer as many as you would like or none at all. Maybe you just want to do a review? Then do a review. But I will tell you, if you write a review and it is a well thought out. I will draw either a picture for you on whatever DN character pairing you want or single character, or I will write you a story that you would like to read. But the review must include: A thought out review of one or both off my stories or at least two things that you would like to see improved. Then, if you have more, by gosh darn it! Include more! I love to read them and know what you like or don't like. Please take this opportunity into consideration and make my life of writing more enjoyable to you and me.

Questions: Please answer if you will! I would really like to hear the responses.

1. Why did you decide to read this particular story? Was it by random or maybe it interested you? Please let me know! I need to know what draws people in.

2. What would you like to see changed or taken out? My mom tells me that I describe too much, which is something I tend to go off about. Please tell me if this becomes a problem or another area needs to be fixed.

3. Are things too 'wordy'?

4. Do I need OCs? A lot of people use OCs or original characters, but I try not to use them. They always seem to be in the way! Doesn't anyone agree?

5. Are my characters, TOO out of character? Pretty self explanatory.

6. Comments? Please tell me what you think! I would also like to know what you want to see continued. I am thinking about dropping my current stories to work on others, please let me know if you would like to see a certain story continued. I myself hate it when writers stop making a story that I really liked, so to avoid this please tell me now.

7. If you have read both which do you like better? And possibly...why?

Thanks again everyone! Please answer these honestly! When you finish please tell me what you would like drawn or written. Then I will get back to you ASAP.