Author's Notes: Thx so much for the review, I think I will continue this, if I leave people hanging they'll hate me. I made the last chapter so short, but I think it did justice 4 mah 1st fanfic. I AM SO SORRY FOR BEING LATE! Also, I might have Naruto raped, though in a genjutsu, tell me what u think of that, and thanks everyone for being so patient with me and Blaze Release for helping me through this along with SinOfDisaster, but I think I'll change that idea a lot.

Disclaimer: (I've always wanted to do this, and this also has nothing to do with the plotline)

*Hinata walks towards me with Naruto*

Hinata: Go on Naruto, say it *cracks whip in hand*

Naruto: heh...heh... um... I belong to Hinata-sama, not Masashi Kishimoto or NaruHinalover22

Hinata: Good boy *smiles evilly*

Now on with the story :D

Hinata's P.O.V (narrator style)

Hmm... Seems like he resigned himself to his fate, gosh, I sound like Neji now. Alright, now what should I do today. Should I start with the whip? Maybe a Genjutsu to break him in? Abacination? Yes that will work... After giving him some pills, I put earmuffs and nose plug's in him and took off the blindfold.

His eyes were not as filled with fear as I assumed but were filled with anger, fear was there of course, but the anger was overwhelming. After he noticed his eyes were uncovered he started yelling obscenities, and I put the gag back in. He continued yelling and I grabbed my whip in a flash and struck him on the face.

Finally, he became quiet and I walked to the other side of the room. I was at the furnace. It was burning in all its glory and I was grinning when I found what I was looking for. Pliers holding a hot metal rod. I slowly walked back to my pet and held it before me.

His eyes just narrowed, as if daring to attack me. Oh, he dared mock me? I'll show him who truly owns him. ME. I put the rod right against his eyes, letting it burn/cook his eyes slowly. I grinned, hearing the muffled screams coming from his mouth.

Once his eyes were to the point of being damaged beyond repair I went to the next part of his torture: branding him. I used the pliers to pick up a thin metal rod and used my chakra to hold it. Then I slowly carved into the soft skin of his neck: 'this body belongs to HINATA HYUUGA' pressing deeply into his skin for increased pain.

It was all I could do not to cackle with glee when I saw him press against his restraints and scream around the gag, yes it shows how well it was working, but still, his moving made the carving hard so I have to make it so he can't move, but how... yes I know. I'll hit him with my 'gentle (what a joke) fist'. I quickly whispered the taijutsu stance "gentle FIST" and closed every single tenketsu that wouldn't interfere with the amount of pain he receives.

Once that was over he went as limp as a newborn baby, save for him glaring at me. Why won't he stop? Why? Doesn't he know I'm doing this for us? For him?

I growled lowly, displeasure very obvious. Maybe he's just being the same old knuckleheaded ninja I know, I just need to tell him why this is happening. Yes, that would work, I'm sure. I looked at the ground the frowned at him. I took off his gag so we could converse.

"Naruto-kun..." I started "Why won't you just submit to me, why? I just want us to be happy together, is that so much to a-" I was cut off again.

"So you have to torture me do you? Why? I'm sorry I never answered your confession but you didn't have to do this!" Despite the bonds and closed tenketsu's he started moving again "I hate this, I hate you, and I hate this kami-forsaken place, why can't you leave me alone!" Tears started falling down his face, steam coming from his partially cooked eyes.

My eyes started watering, but in anger "Why don't you understand I'm doing this for you? All of this, for you Naruto-kun... I'll make you understand!" I scowled "I WILL!" One way... or another...

I petted Naruto's steaming eyelids and reopened his tenketsu's near it, so his healing would start. After his eyes were sufficently healed I restarted my torture. I put the gag in once again. I slowly pulled out each of his fingernails, knowing they would grow back. I watched through my angry tear-stained eyes him yelping around his gag.

It was so nice to see Naruto responding to my signs of affection. I then took the pliers from before and pulled out a random tooth. By the time I was done he had 3 teeth missing and his mouth was a bloody mess.

I took ninja wire and plunged it into his muscles and with a quick jutsu, sent 5000 volts of energy through his veins, enough to kill a lesser ninja, but would only give my Naruto-kun a painful experience.

His hair was now standing fully up, his eyes were wide, pupils small, and his face was almost fully covered in blood and slime. I could still faintly see the tear streaks going down his face, tears now spent. I was smiling now, his charm making me blush.

Focus on the task at hand and make him realize that he is in love with you. He needs to notice your kindness and caring nature. But you must break him for that to happen. Yes, nothing will keep you apart.

I nodded my head thankfully to my inner, happy that it still supports me.

Deciding my inner was right I went along with my plan to break him; step 1 of physical torture was almost done; only a few days more and he'd be ready for step 2. But I will need to keep up with my ministrations.

Time for the thumbscrew.

As I walked to the edge of the room, picking up the needed object from one of its objects, I thought once again about my pet. He's a skilled shinobi, and very stubborn. It's going to be very hard to break him... Stop it Hinata, you are spacing out to much and one of these days he may escape because of it. You can't afford to let him get free; after all he still outranks you in terms of skill. I nodded at my inners' words, giving a mental apology.

I put his thumbs in the thumbscrew and SLOWLY ground his fingers. His screams around the gag loud enough for me to check to make sure it was still on. Pay attention to his face, he looks like he's trying to say something. I quickly unwound the thumbscrew's top and took it off his thumbs, as well as the gag. He started to speak, even though they came out more as croaks.

"It hurts Hinata, It hurts!"

I looked at him sadly but my inner egged me to continue, so I did. My eyes hardening, I decided that one last method would be used. The water cure. I brought a tank full of water and changed the table he was on until he was facing upside down. I slowly lowered him into the bowl of water, drowning him. When it looked like he was soon going to pass out I brought him up, only to continue doing it.

After almost 30 minutes of doing it I decided that Naruto-kun needed a meal and some rest, since he wasn't eating at all. I unchained him and dragged him towards his room. As soon as we got there I strapped him on another table, and putting another torture device on him. It was strapped to his neck, one end facing his chest and the other, his neck. I wouldn't let him sleep if he didn't eat, so convinced this would work I brought in his food. It was filled with pills of course, but nonetheless it was good food.

Half the time I was trying to force feed him but it didn't work as he refused to open his mouth. He is going to end up dead in 3 weeks if this continues. Although that'll be enough time for me to finish each of the stages it still wouldn't be healthy for when I have to nurse him back to heath.

"Fine Naruto-kun" I stated "If you won't eat then you won't sleep" He just looked away from me. "I will come back in 2 hours in case you change your mind, ok?" Naruto just nodded, not willing to strike up my ire I assume. I smiled at him.

(2 hours later)

I returned to check on Naruto-kun to see how he was doing. He didn't seem to be doing very well. Though I felt no sympathy for him, I gave him a small smile. He just continued staring at me, and I noticed the bags underneath his eyes. Ahh... Seems like this is doing the trick. He should want to food now, after I warmed it again it smelt pretty good.

I held it in front of his face and asked him once again if he wanted it. He shook his head slightly, so as not to pierce it on the device. I huffed in impatience and demanded an answer. He just swallowed and opened his mouth as little as possible to speak.

"Because, death seems more tolerable than this"

At this I grew very angry, but I couldn't damage him anymore tonight, as this could kill him, even with the fox... oh my kami-sama, I forgot to reopen the rest of his tenketsus'! I quickly reopened them and felt slight heat as kyuubi's chakra repaired his body.

He breathed out a sigh of relief. He's lucky I'm so kind! At this point I was also tired, so I left the food tray in his room in arms reach, with a kage bunshin to feed him if he changes his mind.

Soon I fell asleep, thinking of the torture he'd experience tomorrow

Author's Notes: Finally I finished, thanks everybody for your support, making this chapter was tough because I'm not experienced at all in story-writing but I tried my best. Reviews are more than welcome :D

NaruHinalover22 OUT!