Author's Notes: Omg I got so many views, unbelievable, I thought I would have to wait like a month to get this many views. The reason Hinata was so unmerciful in the earlier chapters was because her 'Inner' was in control more, and control was given more to the real Hinata (though they are both real) more in the Second chapter. Ok, now I have a few ppl to thank 4 their support and 2 for helping me. The supporting ones would be my Fr's omegagameblade from roblox and Cutetwinkletoes1211 and bossawesomedude, and the other's I want to thank is Uzumaki Ricky, my beta and also SinOfDisaster, as he also gave me a few great ideas. Everyone's been pretty helpful, also my torture scenes may just get even graphical (if that's a word) more-or-less, as I want my readers to understand this much more, and to make it longer. (3000 words is a pain I have to say) I might also add Naruto's P.O.V more often, awesome right? Well, that's all, anything else i'll add in as a chapter update. Well now for the disclaimer:

Hm... What's my name, NaruHinalover22 or Masashi Kishimoto? And also I never knew HE was female and Nigerian. I also suck at animating and manganating (if that's a word ^.^), so I don't think we'll EVER be confused with each other (add the fact that I'm a teen and he's not even CLOSE to my age) and you got a disclaimer

Tadaa, now back to the story :D

Naruto's P.O.V (it was promised, and it's narrator style)

I looked at the lights above me, willing them not to turn on anytime soon because I knew what would happen when they go do. Anyone who stayed in this Hell hole would. It would signify that SHE had woken up, and when she wakes up bright and happy, I will end up in pain. ALOT of pain.

Sadly in this world, what you want usually gets you want you don't want. Here's a good example; the lights started flickering until they stayed on. Usually most people prefer the light, but now I prefer the dark. In the dark I can think without feeling too much pain, like when she tortures me.

Personally I'm not sure how long I can hold out with this. I mean, it would be so easy just to give in to her demands, whether I want it or not be damned. I know for a fact I will not last too long with this physical torture she's putting me through. It would be better to just end my life as it is, but my stupid demon won't let me.

Hasn't Kami-sama made me suffer enough in life? Why would he do this to me? After all this, I better get into Heaven after I die, but by the footsteps coming closer, I have a feeling it may be soon. 'Crap, she's coming! I don't want to go there again! Why do I always have to suffer?

Soon my thoughts all stopped when I saw her face. HER. Hinata's. I quickly darted my eyes, forcing myself to look at the floor instead of at my tormentor's face. Phantom memories of the pain she gave me kept appearing in my mind as my eyes grew misty. I knew I shouldn't bother yelling, I could feel the dehydration preventing me from it. Still though...

I could feel her eyes burning into mine as she unhooked the device on my neck. She swiftly slapped me across my face. My face was heating up, and not in a pleasant way, stinging and burning at the now angry mark on it.

I let the bangs from my uncovered forehead cover my eyes so she couldn't see them. I waited for her to do something, to say something, anything, because I'm not going to be able to unless she gives me a drink. Then again, everyone has so much they can take before they get annoyed. I looked at her, eyes showing cold fury, anger and let's not forget the annoyance. As if she understood my silent message she took me to the bathroom, hooking the chain around my neck to one in the bathroom. Then she left.

I could feel my eyes closing. How sleep was so tempting, as if it was calling for me to visit it, but I know I can't sleep, if I do, my punishment will be worse then what I go through now. Still though... very tempting.

(Mindscape)

I was walking in an empty blank plain. Then I saw Sakura. I could feel my blood boiling. It was her fault, her damn fault that I'm in this. I could feel in my heart that I knew she didn't really do anything but still; I have to pin the blame on anyone but myself. Or else I wouldn't survive the next session sane...

I then saw all of them. Every single person that I considered my friend, and I hated them, I hated them all, they were never there for me. Kakashi never actually trained me, ero-sannin wasn't in my life until it was Chuunin exams, Sakura always hit me, Kiba resented me, Sasuke betrayed me and no one even LOOKED for , No one. No one understood at all what it was like to live my life in abuse, and now this?

If only I could end my suffering...

(Real world)

Water was on my face and I was choking. Hinata had apparently splashed water on my face to wake me up. Crap I fell asleep; I'm in for it now.

"Naruto-kun" She said, glaring at me lightly "You've been very bad, falling asleep when you know you use this time to use this time to prepare yourself for what's to come." She sighed at me and I could feel a shiver stretch from my toes all the way to the tip of my spine. She was playing with me; we both know I knew what's going to happen, as she had explained it the first day.

I'm going to die here, or end up crazy, all because I couldn't stay awake, and it's all her fault! … Or, is it mine…?

"NO KIT, DON'T YOU DARE GO CRAZY ON ME, I PLAN TO SURVIVE, SO YOU MUST TO!"

At that the voice in my head did something to me that felt familiar. Could it be…? Kyuubi? If he's back why can't he help me escape, and why is the chakra I'm receiving so little?

Contrary to the popular belief I'm very smart, able to figure things out and learn thing exceptionally fast, but always having to keep it down so I wouldn't get assassinated as a 'threat' to the villages' safety.

Now I had a hunch, that these cuffs were what was making it so hard for kyuubi to help me, but I had another feeling it was the secret seals on me.

These were my thoughts as I was she unhooked my chain and I was forced to crawl, wincing and hissing all the way. I finally stopped in front of a door, it was white, almost glowing if you look close enough, but if you weren't it was just a bright coloured door, and that was what frightened me. What could she be planning in her mind?

We soon entered the room; after all, a taste of her Chakra was all the door needed for it the let us through. It was...unusual in the room, all bare and padded, and all white. What would we be doing here?

She dropped me into the room and locked my chakra away with a seal, which made me pass out

Minutes Later

I was still in the room from before but my chains were off. Hinata was nowhere as far as I could see, but she could be camouflaged and right beside me for all I know. I may not be Shikamaru-smart but you didn't need to be a genius to see that I was in a deep crap.

My slightly bleary eyes scanned the room, wondering where the door was, as it was nowhere in sight. All of a sudden the already eye-burning room mixed into a white universe. I could feel the changes as my bottom became slightly wet from sitting on the wet-paint covering the ground. I said many colourful words because of the coldness. Then in front of me were a robe and a gag, which flew onto where they belong. Just what I needed, to have my speech taken away again!

This is HER work, isn't it? She's trying to drive me insane right? Well it's not working, nope, definantally not, as I'm going to survive this and I'm going to get her sorry (bleep) into court, get her arrested and kill her myself.

As if someone heard what I was think a voice spoke, echoing around the room

"No one loves you, No one cares for you, no one likes you, everyone wants you to die, the only one who cares is Hinata, Hinata cares, Hinata loves you, Show Hinata you care to, After all, if not her, who do you have?" The voice kept repeating itself, and I kept repeating in my head the list of people who DO care. Sadly, though, that list was slowly dwindling.

Shikamaru, Chouji, Konohamaru, Meogi, Udon, the Third, Tsunade, Jiraiya, they all like me... right?

My list went from that small number to the third, Konohamaru, Tsunade and Jiraiya, only 4 people, and it kept on decreasing because of the hypnotising voice. Soon it was only the Third and then that was that. He was dead, I was all alone. Stuck with a psychopathic Hinata, with no one knowing I'm here. I should have been allowed to vote for whether I live or not after the Kyuubi attack; I would have been calling for my death if it would've saved me from this fate.

Kyuubi, Kyuubi, Kyuubi! If it wasn't for Kyuubi I'd have a family, maybe even a sibling. I wouldn't have been hated and almost assassinated all those times. No beatings, no starving and definitely more training.

All of this was his fault and because of him, i'm going insane. In fact I bet the mental scroll in my head, keeping my sanity intact was detoriating. POP, and as it is my sanity is disappearing, along with the last bit of my self-pride and happiness. I'm seeing the world in a new light, and that light is dark.

BREAK

Hinata's P.O.V (Narrator style)

I was inside the room in a secret compartment, built for hiding my presence. Naruto didn't know I was here but he did hear my voice. It seemed he was being lulled into it, just as I was mental state was weakening and I just need to push a little more over the course of two weeks, and he will be mine to mold, sooner if all goes well.

Using Chakra to change my voice into a hypnotic one was pure genius if you ask me, and I sounded very well too, too bad my dear Naruto-kun didn't hear it the way I did. Surely he would be glad that he heard my voice. I was watching him clearly as I replayed the recording over and over again.

After all, who would think that I would continuously waste my breath saying that over and over again?

Ne, Kurai-chan, do you think I should take Naruto-kun to a flower field, when we fully break him?

"Yes, that would be a great time to test his loyalty to us; hopefully we can do that in several weeks."

Hai, Kurai-chan, he was always spirited, but even he can't stay sane with extended periods of this.

"Being able to control time and space with those manipulation seals you put on him made this so much easier."

It was nothing, Kurai-chan, as you did lend me some of your power and knowledge to do it. Although I can't help but feel I'm doing something wrong. What if it doesn't work and Naruto-kun doesn't like me? I would end my own life... and his if necessary

"Don't worry, Outer, it'll work, if we must use an extended period of time to do this, then we will. I refuse to have an Outer doubting herself, so either Hyuuga up or give ME control."

I made a horrified look at this, whenever I give Kurai control, something bad ALWAYS happens, and letting would probably end up with Naruto committing seppuku. I made my mind's voice hard, letting kurai know that I understood.

Hai, kurai-chan, if I doubt myself then what would happen, I might end up letting Naruto-kun go and at this stage of the plan, he MAY not respond well to other's but he wouldn't be loyal to us either. You words have helped me, and for that I am grateful.

"Outer, make your voice more hypnotic and then go to bed, I'll adjust to chakra output to create an illusion in your sleep."

Listening to My inner's word, I powered up my voice, giving it a more dangerous tune to it than before. Thank you Kami-sama for having Kurai, as that mean I won't have to make and maintain an illusion during my sleep, which is even harder than it sounds. I then headed off to bed, letting my inner take control of my mindscape.

Kurai's P.O.V (narrator style)

I gazed at the mirror in MY part of the mindscape, looking at my gorgeous features. My blood red eyes, similar to my outer, but still different nonetheless, gleaming at me. My long hair, which instead of Indigo was black, black as Night and dark as Yami-sama. My Outer's skin may be pale but nothing compares to my paper-white skin. Ruby red lipstick decorating my grinning face and a light coating of black-ish red eye-shadow completed my face, and there you have me.

I walked into my closet, picking out a pair of clothes, a skin tight red undershirt and black leather jacket and pants, with steel-toed boots, black of course. Perfect.

That idiot boy my outer likes, thinks' that everyone abandoned him, but… it's not true. I may have helped Outer pull a few chakra strings, and violà, you got a blood clone. It may not have been as simple as it sounded but here's how we did it.

FLASHBACK NO JUTSU

Hinata was absorbing the chakra coming from the handcuffs, and putting it to good use, like a chakra transmitting device. It transported the siphoned chakra from Naruto and using a fake Shodaime's Necklace, it went directly into Naruto's Clone, so it will live like him, stalling until she was done. Hinata did the same for herself, but combined her chakra with Naruto's so she wouldn't have to waste so much.

I started up the genjutsu with hand signs of my own: Demon, Cruel, Death, Light, Tiger, Frost and the final one: KURAI! I pushed my hands out, chakra filled with my dark essence spilling forth, into Hinata's hands and flowing into a machine that generated the specific illusion I wanted. A pain filled one.

In fact, I have one that I'm sure will leave him weeping and in tears. One where your only friends called you a demon to your face and abandoned you…

Naruto's P.O.V (NOT NARRATOR STYLE *for once*)

NO, NO, NO, how could you do this to me? You were my friends', I thought you cared? You were supposed to stay with me, support me in my time of need! NOW YOU BETRAY ME? I'll show you, I'll show you all! I'll show you what happens when you abandon ME, the Kyuubi no kitsune's JINCHUURIKI!

Sakura, do you mean it? Am I really just a demon to you, I saved the teme, I saved your life, I was ALWAYS there for you, and you HATE me? Why didn't I see the true you before?

Sasuke, I don't care what you say, you were a brother to me in all but blood, and you took that away, leaving me was bad enough, but joining Hebi-teme is even worse! I can't believe I considered you my Nii-san!

Tsunade, Jiraiya, you were my GODPARENTS! You left me alone to fend for myself, endure everything without even a peep until I became known. Why did I forgive both of you, you people brought me pain, pain and suffering, just more and more.

WHY DO YOU DO THIS? I ALWAYS SHOWED I APPRECIATED YOU, WHY WON'T YOU DO THE SAME? I'm not a demon, I'm Naruto Uzumaki! Held captive by Hinata Hyuuga! If you can't understand that, then you are more brain dead then a vegetable! If I lose my mind it's your entire fault!

Hinata's P.O.V (narrator style)

I woke up this morning bright and cheery and made my way into the lounge. I had a great meal, rice with Miso soup and a few side dishes, including cinnamon buns! When I walked into the compartment to watch Naruto I noticed a few things

1) The recording was still playing

2) Naruto was silent and

3) He was rocking himself

What could be wrong with him? Did the recording really hurt his feelings so much? Maybe I should go check on him~

"No, you must remain out of sight, if he see's you he will not break as we want him to, human contact MUST be avoided!"

Hai, Kurai-Chan, but I'm worried about him, why is he like that?

"I think he's breaking down Outer, soon you will have your man…and I will have the control I desire"

What was that Kurai-Chan, you didn't think loud enough?

"Outer, pay attention, I said soon you will have your man, and have the control you desire"

Oh, okay Kurai-Chan

"… Hinata"

You said my name…

"Hinata…"

Yes…?

"When he breaks you will keep your side of the deal right..?

Of course Kurai-Chan, Of course I would.

AN: HAPPY, I FINALLY FINISHED, THANK YOU KAMI-SAMA! XD, enjoy chappy, also… sorry it took so long, I had a month to work on it but I lost mah inspiration. I WILL continue it; it may just take some time since my beta wants longer chappys :P BYEZ

~NARUHINALOVER22 OUT!