(AN: new chapter, introducing monsters/aliens! Bumbumbum! –link to image on my profile- thanks for my one review –jmarrero16- this ones for you!... quite literally.
don't forget to check the links on my profile, I update my DA pretty regulartly with pictures, also I'm almost ready to upload another one of Rayne's adventures involving her finding out River's dead. Let me know what you think as I love feedback!)
The Monster Rayne had seen in those tunnel's was something that The Doctor would instantly call "beautiful!" but Rayne wasn't delusional she had seen beautiful aliens; this was not one of them.
This creature of the dark was probably what had built the tunnels in the first place, though what it was doing on earth she couldn't begin to guess at. It was a soulless heartless creature which feeds one warm blooded beings, like humans! Like the tour groups that travelled down into its tunnels.
Her feet pumped against the tarmac, stumbling over the cracks and potholes, her mind raceing. The police car was delayed but it wouldn't take long and she couldn't run all the way to the prison, luckily the cat bus chose that time to stop in front of her.
'Bless you universe!' Rayne thought as she leapt onto the bus and up the back to sit down.
Sitting down was hard… her feet tapped impatiently on the seat in front of her, her fingers twisted the strap of her backpack as it sat on her lap.
it took maybe five minutes to get to a stop near the prison and then when Rayne jumped off and ran to the gates again, she had no idea what she was going to do.
it wasn't like she could teleport the creatures out, or anything like that! She had her vortex manipulator but not a clue how to use it to get them all out… besides her father had put a kind of safety lock on it like the child lock on the backdoor of a car; Rayne could only go to three co-ordinates: Stormcage, her mother's house or to the TARDIS, and only to a version of the doctor that she had only recently left. But she had to do something right? And she wanted to do it by herself, just to prove that she could!
The person watching the entrance didn't seem to notice Rayne as she slipped into the prison and down into the tunnels a second time, carrying her small torch in-between her teeth as she scaled down the ladder and into the murky depths. "alright mole-man let's get a good look at you." She talked openly, moving her way through a bit of tunnel she was sure you were supposed to have a boat for because water was suddenly lapping against her knees… lapping against her knees… lapping- like a tide, like the waves produced by a boat as it sails through the water- only nothing like that, much more jittery and erratic, something was slushing its way through the watery column and it was headed for her.
"Marco!" Rayne called humorously, "Fish out of water!" she went on moving towards the wall off the tunnel "no, because you're not a fishy are you? Oh no, no, no! Look at you!"
And she was looking at it!
The creature had a rock-hard mud-like texture to its tubatious body and three thick muscled arms all with tri clawed tips and its matching legs and feet, in the centre of its body sat one large orange screened eye, its round pupil retracting into a vertical slit as it met with Rayne's torchlight.
The light and smell of flesh angered the creature, and as it rumbled from somewhere deep inside itself Rayne watched in slight horror as the top half of its body split open to revile a massive hair of thick toothed jaws.
Luckily for Rayne the creature fully extended as it was only about the same size as her… unfortunately when noticing its blood and mud caked teeth Rayne made another terrific realisation.
it was what humans knew as a Urdlen, and Rayne had already noted that the creature fed on warm blooded creatures, like humans…. And… also… like Timmy~Wimmy River Storms…
she was so on its dinner menu!
(alright you brood on this short chapter while I go right down how Rayne is either to be slowly consumed by a mole-monster or possibly how she will run and through a series of events manipulate the creature into letting her past, and then she will join hand and claw with them and dance around the camp fire singing…. Yeeeeaaahhh… neither of those is going to happen. But few more chapters and The Doctor comes into play… not that that will really solve much. Don't forget to review and let me know how I could improve this chapter and the characters! Also there is a link to a picture of the monster on my profile in case you were utterly confused by my description… tubatious isn't a word.)
