I ended up reading through the story myself a couple of times and decided that I don't really like how it's turned out so far so I'm going to change it a little and rewrite probably most if not all of the chapters to simply make it a better read and explain a few things here and there that I missed. Story line will be the same for the most part and I'll be leaving all the current chapters up until I've at least written 5 or 6 chapters for this.