WARNING: The first chapter's been extended and revised (twice). Read the first chapter first before continuing with this new update.
Author's Notes: This chapter still needs cleaning up, but I'm releasing it anyway since it's been a year. Enjoy and review. Don't mind the mistakes, since I'll fix them up later, AFTER I go to sleep. I'm sleepy.
-Review Responses
Guest (9/17/2012) – This will not be an OC type story, and I'm not changing Naruto's name.
Blaze – Harem list is on the top of the first chapter, but the update one is on the bottom.
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Story Title Change: Freezing Maelstrom to Freezing Maelstrom: Nova Destroyers
UPDATED HAREM (up to the E-Pandora arcs)
OC: Shura Yukihime (Advanced Pandora), Rosa Satonaka (Female Limiter), Olivia Elliot Irwin (Advanced Pandora), Ashley Coulson (Advanced E-Pandora)
Pandora: Satellizer el Bridget, Maria Lancelot-Namikaze, Kazuha Aoi, Suna Yi, Chiffon Fairchild, Ticy Phenyl, Kaho Hiiragi, Elizabeth Mably, Cassie Lockhart, Roxanne Elipton, Charles Bonaparte, Julia Munberk, Yumi Kim, Elize Schmitz, Audrey Duval, Akia Takeuchi, Trish McKenzie
E-Pandora: Amelia Evans
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About Advanced Pandora: There are Pandora endued with different power usually seen in Tokusatsu shows like Kamen Rider and Super Sentai, but mostly Kamen Rider. Made in Spiral Corp, they're still in the beta-testing stage, and only a special select few get to test their powers. This idea came while creating original characters for a previous Freezing story years ago when it start came out when I was still a big fan of Kamen Rider, yuri, etc.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY, NARUTO UZUMAKI!
Last time on Freezing Maelstrom: Nova Destroyers…
"Huh? Wait a minute! Satella? Is that you?" a shocked Rosa asked, as Shura grabbed the back of Kazuya's uniform to pull him off of her friend, but a grid-like pattern spread itself on the ground from Kazuya, rendering her, Satellizer, and Rosa unable to move.
"What the? I can't move!" Rosa cried.
"What kind of Freezing is this?" Shura growled, "It's too powerful!"
"An enhanced Freezing?" Satellizer thought, panicking, "What's the meaning of this?My body can't-"
"Watch out!" Rosa screamed, pointing upwards at an attacking Ganessa.
"Wide open!" Ganessa shouted in glory as she bought her chains down for the kill, "This is my victory!"
"Oh crap!"
"I can't move!"
One second later, the scene was covered in red.
…
"So this is the cesspool of Genetics Academies, West Genetics Japan, eh?"
Decked out in the standard West Genetics male uniform, Naruto made his way through the hallway, on his way to his old friend Sister Margaret's office.
"How did she allow it to get so bad? This place reeks of arrogance, that like that place from long ago…" Naruto thought, holding his nose for a bit.
"Think you'll be able to find a new student and partner here at this wretched hive of scum and villainy?" the nine-tailed fox vixen, Kiyomi, in Naruto's mindscape asked.
"Who knows…" Naruto shrugged, as the bell sounded, and the students of West Genetics Japan moved to their next respective classes, just as the PA system sounded off.
"Breaking news! The Queen and Princess has met their first defeat! One loss each recorded at the second-year student Carnival. The Untouchable Queen and the Nightmare Princess has both met a stinging lost at this year Carnival battle!"
Everyone in the school and on the grounds stopped in shock of this news, as the nearby TV's turned on, showing the winner of the Carnival, with Naruto looking on in interest.
"Satellizer el Bridget and Shura Yukihime has both finally been dethroned from their first and second rank respectively. What happened?"
"Of all things," a student on the TV said, "It's seems an intruder suddenly appeared in the middle of the battle and grabbed the Untouchable Queen out of nowhere during the battle. Whoever it was must've been out of his mind!"
The reporter nodded and said, "The outcome, the one who defeated the two top second year Pandoras at the same time claimed victory in this round's Carnival is Ganessa Roland, the Angel of Confinement!"
A new first rank second-year Pandora was all good, but there's just one question on everyone's minds right now.
"What moron would be stupid enough to interfere with the Untouchable Nightmares' match? Who the hell would want to die that badly?!"
Meanwhile, Naruto was surprised to hear the name of the two former top-ranked Pandora.
"Well, I'll be damned. Satella-chan's here, so is her. Yukihime Shura? Nice alias. Can't wait to see you two again after all this time. Looks like things are gonna get interesting!"
Chapter 02: Return of the Legendary Nova Slayer
(West Genetics)
Originally, Genetics was widely known as the study of Genome in the scientific community, but now its has a different meaning: a worldwide organization founded to train and provide soldiers (Pandora and Limiters) to fight the Nova. It is a series of military academies that operate under military discipline, and replaces senior high school, substituting for grades 9, 10, 11, and 12, and it is part of the Chevalier origination.
But the problem is that some people take military way too literally, and that's where he comes in.
Teaching the next generation how to fight and work together for a common cause, no one in the world does it better than the leader of Uzu Island, Uzumaki-Namikaze Naruto Sparda, the co-founder, CEO, and President of Spiral Corporation International. He is also the Chief Administrator of Spiral Genetics Academy located on Uzu Island, the only Genetics Academy not under the Chevalier's jurisdiction, much their chagrin. Spiral Genetics may operate under military discipline like other Genetics Academy, but there, they don't have to be best friends, but trust and watch each other's back, creating a mutual friendship in the process.
Too bad the other Academies don't share their outlook.
West Genetics. Believe it or not, this is the first time Naruto visited this academy for Pandora-in-training and Limiters-in-training. He visited others, but this one he has not, except for his sisters and wives, who visit and did recon of the academy on more than one occasion for various reasons.
His family's reviews of the place were not very encouraging, and he could sense exactly why. The stench of the school was filled to the brim with arrogance and the suffering of those receiving the blunt of it, corrupting them as they get older in the process. And worse of all, he hasn't smelled this much arrogance in years, since the Age of Shinobi when he was living in that cesspool called Konohagakure, where this early days had been hell.
"You know your actions are gonna piss everyone off here. You're basically gonna be the Jon Taffer of "rescuing" Genetics Academies." the voice of Kurami, the Yin side of the Kyuubi no Kitsune, sounded off within his mind.
"And?" Naruto questioned, mentally raising an eyebrow at his foxy wife within his mindscape, who gave a sexy smirk.
"Just letting you know, my darling husband." she said, giggling.
"I know, I know, and you know I could care less." Naruto told her, "The fact that Kazuha-chan came from this arrogant-filled academy pisses me off. What kind of school degrades progress? Are you trying to contribute to the Nova destroying the Earth? This place won't get changed overnight, but I do look forward to raising some hell to knock everyone off there high horse."
"That and add some new members to your harem," a black, gooey substance next to Kurami called a symbiote said with a perverted giggle.
"Ero kitsune-chan…" Naruto muttered, shaking his head as he made his way towards the office of Sister Margaret.
(Headmistress's Office, an hour later)
Inside the headmistress's office are three veteran Pandora who're the faculty staff of West Genetics Japan.
One of them is Sister Margaret, and elderly woman in her 50s who's the headmistress of West Genetics, her form covered in a white and mahogany robe with gold trim.
The other is Yumi Kim, the 5'4.5" 23-year-old physics teacher and training instructor from Korea at West Genetics. She's a very proud, dedicated, and strong-minded buxom woman in her 20's, with short, light brown hair with a greenish tint and dark brown eyes. Her hair extends down to her neck, while the rest comes further down into her face in several bangs as well as leaving her ears viewable at the sides. She is known for her buxom figure and large breasts, ironically having a weakness when touched there. Her outfit consists of a pale blue, long-sleeved shirt with a navy blue tie and matching skirt, accompanied with long brown stockings and a pair of black, high-heeled shoes.
And finally Elize Schmitz, the 5'9" 23-year-old, laid-back German doctor who's the school nurse of West Genetics, responsible of healing the Pandoras when they're injured in combat. She is a tall woman with short green hair that reaches her neck with several bangs coming down onto her face, and a ponytail tied up in the back, dark eyes, and a slender figure with medium-sized breasts. Her usual outfit consists of a white lab coat over a lavender, long-sleeved, button-down shirt, a dark brown skirt, light brown stockings and light brown boots. Unlike her partner Yumi who is known for her splendid curves, Elize is not as buxom as her.
The last two are former members of the elite Pandora's Number unit comprised out of 4 people with one of them being Naruto's old partner, Kazuha.
"The school is getting an evaluator? Why?" Yumi asked, curious.
"It would appear that our school is getting less than positive reviews from the outgoing students who transferred out. And those of them reached a former ally of ours, who is not happy." Margaret explained, "While I believe there's no need, inside I know that ignoring the older students antics has seriously hurt this school reputation."
"I agree with you, but didn't the Chevalier found it necessary?" Elize questioned, "This is a military school, where the students are trained to fight the Nova."
"Who is this "former ally" of our anyway?" Yumi asked, as the phone on Sister Margaret's office rang.
"West Genetics, Sister Margaret- ... Yes… I see…uh, yes... Thank you…"
Margaret sighed as she hanged up the phone, making Yumi and Elize concerned as an anime raincloud appeared over the headmistress's head.
"Who was that?"
"Someone who the Chevalier immaturely declared was dead after the 8th Nova Clash." Margaret answered as the cloud started pouring rain on her, with Yumi and Elize knowing just who was coming to their school, and making the former horrified.
"Oh, he really is still alive? Not that I thought he was dead, but she was hoping." Elize said, motioning towards Yumi who was paling, "When's he due in?"
"Now."
The two members of the elite Number Division jumped and whipped around to find a Cheshire Cat-smirking Naruto, decked out in a West Genetic uniform in his 18-year-old disguise. Before they could ask, Naruto shifted to his original form and back again to show that it's really him.
"And don't let me you weren't prepared because I rang ahead." he continued, waving his Uzu Island smartphone around mockingly, "It's been four years since the 8th Nova Clash hasn't it? It's good to see you again Elize, and I see you still hate my guts, Yumi."
Elize nodded, having no problem with her former comrade except for Yumi, who can't stand Naruto for his personality that contrasts her own, and for choosing her beloved friend Kazuha to be his partner. Because of that they have relationship akin to that of a love-hate relationship.
"What are you doing here, Namikaze?" she growled angrily.
"What? Margaret hasn't explained it to you yet, or has she? Guess all that pride is still making you slow, Yumi." Naruto answered as he pasted a now pissed off Yumi,
"I'll show you slow!" she shrieked as she was being held back by Elize, who had an amused look on her face.
"Ma, maa..."
Some things never change.
"It's good to see you again, Naruto-san. Still as young as ever I see because of your unique heritage that I still have hard time believing to this very day."
"And I see you're gaining some wrinkles on that lovely face of yours, Margaret-baa-chan. What have I told you about frowning constantly whenever the higher-ups of the Chevalier twist your knots in a bunch?"
"Well, not everyone can be as young as you, Naruto-san…" Margaret replied sweetly while gaining a tickmark on her head, "While immortal, you can be such a smart aleck sometimes. No respect these days…"
"Yet my family and I experience history that's still butchered by skewed recounts, so sue me." Naruto countered before turning serious, "In any case, you know why I'm here…"
"I do, although I'm sure some of the stories from the students transferring to your school, Spiral Genetics, are highly exaggerated. It's not that…bad…here…" Margaret started to explain, but faltered under the Namikaze's look.
"Some of the students at my school says different, and the closing moments of that Carnival didn't help either. Long story short, I'm just here to see exactly what's broken since it appears that you and the staff here seems to be blind to what's going on. What better way than to do it as a student; but don't think that will give you power over me. If either you three or any of the other staff attempt to pull rank on me, and I will remind you why not only do I hold the title of Number One Prankster in the world, but why you should never have me as an enemy. Don't test me." Naruto said coolly, making the headmistress, the teacher, and doctor of West Genetics shiver, recalling the pranking spree Naruto went on years ago when the Chevalier first pissed him off, as well as the various corrupt companies he and his family buried when they went after Spiral Corp.
Some of the victims, including them, and most of the members of the Chevalier, were still scarred for life. The corrupt companies however, ruined until the end of time.
"We promise to stay out of your way, Naruto-san." Margaret promised, finding no reason to piss Naruto off, "I'll even go as far as to give you a free rein, but please don't maim my students so much."
"Good. Just don't push me, and I won't push any of you." Naruto stated, looking at Margaret and then Yumi when he said that. "The time for upperclassmen putting down their underclassmen whenever they show their potential, just to keep them humbled is over."
Nodding to Elize, who waved meekly, Naruto left the office, letting Margaret breathe normally again.
"Are you really letting them run rampant around here?!" Yumi shrieked, "The school won't be left standing after this!"
"I'm going to be working overtime. I just know it." Elize groaned, making a note to herself to keep several beds prepared for the bodies Naruto's actions will be dropping off.
Margaret sighed, "Heh, now I know what Mito-san, Jiraiya-san, and Tsunade-san means when they say it: I'm getting too old for this shit. Even so, this school needs to be cleansed by the maelstrom that is to come."
(With Naruto, a few minutes later)
"Yumi still hates you, Naruto-kun. You better be careful around her." Kurami warned, "Just remember that she's not the only one who thinks in their mind that you're partially responsible for Kazuha-chan's demise just because as her partner, you should've been there to stop her from sacrificing herself."
"I could care less what they think. Kazuha died the way she lived to allow humanity to survive the 8th Clash. If her little brother Kazuya and Yumi can't understand that, then that's too damn bad." Naruto countered as he arrived outside the school building, "If only Konoha haven't gotten in my way at the time…"
"Just never underestimate the power of stupid people in large groups." Kiyomi added, making Naruto chuckle.
"Duly noted… Hmm?"
Naruto's ear twitched when he heard a loud *BOOM* coming from an area of the school ground.
"Trouble already?" Naruto wondered, looking towards the school building where smoke was billowing from the back area.
"That was quick. I swear my vessel, your very presence influences chaos around you." the symbiote inside Naruto noted, as the latter gave his tenant a mental middle finger before disappearing via Kamui, teleporting via swirling distortion.
(Behind the School Grounds)
Today was a really bad day for Yukihime Shura and Satellizer el Bridget. They lost the Carnival and were both taken down a rank because of a lucky shot from the most annoying second-year in the school, the Angel of Confinement, Ganessa Roland. All thanks to some brat that tackled Satellizer due to a case of mistaken identity, throwing everything into disarray.
After the incident, both Pandora's were taken to the nearly medical facility, being treated for various stab wounds that Ganessa's Volt Weapon, Chain of Binding, inflicted on their bodies. After they were healed up, with Shura's upper body and limbs wrapped in bandages and Satellizer's sporting bandages on her forehead and eye, they took a bus back to the school grounds, and were heading to the dorm they shared when they ran into the Student Council, Chiffon Fairchild and Ticy Phenyl, who were showing the new students, Aoi Kazuya and Rosa Satonaka, around the campus.
Shura and Satellizer paid them no mind, especially the former who was looking to be as far away from Kazuya as possible. Unfortunately, the boy had a strange case of grabby hands, as he grabbed both Shura and Satellizer arms to keep them from walking away to apologize, only for him to stare at the end of their blades after making them blunter, and received warnings from the two never to come near them again.
To make their day even more miserable, Ganessa arrived to taunt them about her victory over them and how is the number one Pandora in their year. While the two Pandora's would usually ignore their loudmouth classmate, this time they made an exception since Ganessa's taunting words were now grinding on their last nerves that snapped then Ganessa summoned her Volt Weapon and attacked them when they tried to leave.
They didn't care if there were bystanders. They didn't care if the Student Council President and Vice President were watching.
They just want her to shut up!
"I'll entertain you two and take you on. If by a miracle that you do win, your ranks won't change. It doesn't matter since it's already as plain as black and white which of the three of us is more superior!" Ganessa bloated as she summoned her six Chains of Binding, "You two can fighting together if you want, since I don't have the slightest intention of letting you two win against me!"
Shura sighed as Satellizer readied her weapon, "To tell the truth Ganessa, you were nothing more than an annoying loudmouth that was easily ignored. All bark and no bite. But now…your continued gloating of a win you barely deserved has finally grated on our last nerve." she said coldly as she unsheathed her two katana, "Just remember that you're the one who started this fight, and we're responding in self-defense! Satella-chan, it's time to Link Up!"
"Understood." Satellizer nodded as she and Shura grabbed their chests and focused on each other until a blue-green colored line connected them until it disappeared, linking their thoughts together.
"Why you! Prepare yourself!"
Ganessa unleashed her chained flails on Shura and Satellizer, who weaved through and dodged the obvious paths of the chain with ease with bored looks on their faces, with the chains making the ground explode and tremble on impact.
"You really think you two can run from me?! This time I'll be sure leave you both with scars! The symbols of your defeat will be engraved not just on your faces but your entire bodies as well!" Ganessa shouted as she brought her chained flails together to create a large point to attack the duo.
Both Shura and Satellizer moved away two avoid the flails that made contact on the ground, but Ganessa spilt them apart to their normal state and fire one off through the dust of smoke, hoping to catch one of them off guard.
The attempted failed as the dust cleared, with West Genetics strongest second-years looking unharmed from the attack.
"Is that all you got?" Shura deadpanned as she made a 'come and get us' motion with her Darkness Izanagi okatana-whip.
Ganessa spat on the ground and jumped high into the air, being her chains down on the two friends/rivals.
"Die… Just die!" Ganessa yelled in frustration as her opponents easily blocked her incoming chains with their Volt Weapons, "Drop dead! Shura Yukihime! Satellizer el Bridget!"
She kept the relentless onslaught up for about a minute, with Shura and Satellier still unharmed.
"No way! How could they deflect all my chains?" she asked in disbelief as Shura and Satellizer charged at her with tremendous speed, initiating a Link Arte.
"FINAL GALE!" they shouted, with both slashing diagonally, creating an X-shaped energy blade that went through and shattered Ganessa's weapon, allowing them to slash her in the chest, drawing blood as their blade tore through her flesh and uniform.
"A…gh?!"
Ganessa fell knees-first before collapsing onto the ground, bleeding.
"Game, set, match. Let's go, Satella-chan." Shura declared, with Satellizer nodding and following her as they deactivated their Link.
Nearby on the roof on the school, a figure witnessed the fight and smiled.
"You've gotten beautiful and strong, Satella-chan. The Untouchable Queen, huh? It's appears that gaki Louis-teme ignored my previous warning and really did a number on her. I knew I should've gotten you out of that house, but your ailing mother had to stop me… At least Violet-chan succeeded where I failed. And there's the Nightmare Princess, Yukihime Shura. Heh, she didn't need to use her Advanced Pandora power on that weakling. They truly make a formidable duo. But…"
The figure then looked at Chiffon.
"…This is odd. Why does West Genetics have the rep it has with her as the Student Council President? There shouldn't be any trouble here at all! Heads are really gonna roll if I don't get some answers…"
"They're strong…" Kazuya noted.
"Oh~, I knew it would turn out like this." Chiffon said, shaking her head, "Poor Roland-san…"
"Serious Prez? Ganessa Roland's the one who started the fight, not them. They just finished it." Rosa countered, "As soon as they Linked Up with their Lilium Arrowcell Orbs, Ganessa Roland stood no chance."
"Lilium Arrowcell Orbs? You mean the ones the soldiers on Uzu Island uses?" Kazuya questioned, "How do they have them? They don't even sell them."
"Guess they have connections." Rosa shrugged as Ganessa struggled to her feet, "Oh look, she's getting back up."
"At least she's okay. We should take her to the infirmary-" Ticy started, but her hopes were dashed when she called out to Shura and Satellizer, making them stop.
"Satellizer…el Bridget… Shura… Yukihime…" Ganesaa growled out as she managed to get to her feet.
"You really should stay down. With the injuries you have, you'll be hardpressed to eke out a win against us." Shura told her, but Ganessa laughed at that, "What's so funny?"
"Hahahahaha! You really think winning against me, the new number one ranked Pandora of our year, was gonna be that easy! Ha, so naïve! Now that it's come down to this, I don't care if I have to break the rules!" Ganessa screamed with she started to glow.
"What?! No way! She isn't going to use that is she?!" Chiffon cried in horror as Kazuya looked alarmed at what's happened.
"Use what? What is she-" Rosa started to asked, but finally realized what going on as Ganessa's clothes shredded, showing off her naked body as the three seikon on her back glowed, "Wait, she can't be that stupid, can she?"
"PANDORA MODE, INITIATE!"
"That fool!" Satellizer whispered angrily, "To think she'd go this far…"
"Who's the dumbass that gave her a Pandora Mode Chip to begin with?" Shura wondered, preparing for Round 2 as the wind blew about violently.
"Stop this, Roland-san! You can't use Pandora Mode without authorization from the school administration! It's only allowed under actual live combat situations!" Chiffon shouted angrily, but Ganessa didn't let up.
"Ha! For me, this fight is as real as it gets!" Ganessa answered back, energy swirling around her bare form as a bright light engulfed her and the area.
"Gah!/Argh!"
Shura and Satellizer were blown back by the force of Ganessa's transformation and crashed into the school, being disarmed of their weapons.
"Damn crazy bitch! She's really going the extra mile!" Shura growled, quickly summoning back her weapons and getting up, "If only I can access my Advanced Pandora power… Satella-chan, can you still fight?"
"Yes, but we'll be in trouble at this rate." Satellizer answered as she pushed herself off the wall.
"Satellizer-senpai! Shura-senpai! Are you alright?" Kazuya asked as he went up to them.
He made a move to touch Satellizer, but Shura slapped his knuckles with the flat side of Shining Izanami, making his hand sting.
"Ow! What was that for?" Kazuya complained, but the look Shura gave him shut him up.
"Get back gaki! You already caused enough trouble for us. We don't need you in the crossfire." Shura snapped, glaring at the male transfer student.
"What with you and touching girls? Do you have the case of the "grabby hands" or something? It's best to stay out of their way." Rosa said crossly, going up to Kazuya and dragged him to a safe distance.
"But still…" Kazuya started, but Rosa glared at him, shutting him up, and flashed a smiled at Satellizer, who's face flushed at the cute smile.
"Keh, I don't know who that girl is, but I like her already. She also seems to know you." Shura noted as she and Satellizer Linked Up.
"Yes, she does, but I'll explain later!" Satellizer replied, picking her weapon up as she and Shura then jumped away from two chains that came out of the dust.
When the dust cleared, Ganessa appeared in a black armored exoskeleton power suit with her pig tails showing; two her chained flails floating behind her with two additional chains that have circular saws, spinning around and buzzing.
Wait…two chained flails floating behind her?
As the two dodged the chainsaws, they finally noticed that Ganessa's two missing chains buried themselves on the ground, but weren't holding her in place, just as the said chains popped out from the ground, blindsiding them.
"Ahh, dammit!" Shura shouted as all four chains wrapped themselves around Satellizer and Shura's bodies, trapping them back-to-back.
"What wrong Shura Yukihime, Satellizer el Bridget? You're slipping up. Does that mean you're not taking me seriously, even while I entered Pandora Mode?! You're both going to pay dearly for that!" Ganessa snarled as the chain tightened around her two opponents.
"Stop it! As Student Council president, I order you cease this at one!" Chiffon shouted, but Ganessa paid no mind.
"What is that suit she's wearing?" Kazuya asked while Rosa was grimacing.
"Pandora Mode. It bring out the true battle potential of the Volt Texture used to fight the Nova. It's a special power-up that allows a Pandora to move freely in a Freezing area without a Limiter. In addition, it also grants the Pandora an extra boost of power. Though its destructive power is far beyond normal methods, I heard that in the end, there's still testing suits, and there may be side effects, which is why she shouldn've activated it!"
"I'll stop… As soon as I'm through with these bitches so that they're nothing more than strips of meat!" Ganessa laughed as she struck Shura and Satellizer with her chained saw.
Shura grunted while Satellizer cried out in pain with each strike as blood splattered to the ground.
"Damn Yumi-sensei! She had no right to lock away my Advanced Pandora powers during my first Carnival when I fought Satella-chan!" Shura thought angrily as some of her wounds began to reopen, "If I was free to use them, this wouldn't be happening!"
"Ahahahahahaha! How does it feel, Shura-san?! Satellizer-san?! If you don't yield soon, your bodies really will become bloody pulps! I'm sure you've realized by now that as the number one ranked Pandora of our year, I'm not someone you should go up against!"
After a barrage of attacks, Ganessa hung Shura and Satellizer loosely by their arms, both not moving and their uniform torn apart, showing parts of their underwear, making Ganessa laugh.
"I won! I really won!" she declared triumphantly, "I really beat Shura and Satellizer at the same time!"
"And I'm sure we'll never hear the end of it." Rosa muttered to herself, already disliking Ganessa, and even more so when she had to resort to Pandora Mode to defeat her old friend Satellizer and her friend Shura.
"Pandora Mode really is something. As long as I have this mode, I can defeat anyone!" Ganesaa bloated, "Well then Shura-san and Satellizer-san, to acknowledge my complete victory… I'll chop both your arms off to keep as trophies!" Ganesaa gloated as her remaining chained flails snaked their way to their arms.
"ENOUGH!"
"Huh?"
Ganessa turned to the one who dare interrupted her, only to get hit in the face with a textbook. The onlookers looked on in shock as Rosa charged at Ganessa, leapt up, and hit a flying roundhouse kick on Ganessa, forcing her chains to let go of Shura and Satellizer as she was sent skipping on the ground with the other two landing in a heap on the ground.
(A/N: for those who watched Clannad, imagine Rosa kicking Ganessa the same way Kyou kicked Sunohara)
"Is this how a Rank 1 Pandora's supposed to act?! You already won so knock it off already, Ganessa Roland!" Rosa snapped as she stood in front of Shura and Satellizer, and stamped her foot on the ground.
"Rosa…" Satellizer said, shocked that her old friend interjected herself between their fight.
"You…" Shura said, impressed at the guts of the newcomer, and more so at that powerful kick.
As Ganessa picked herself up, was enraged at the audacity of the girl who outright attacked her, and felt humiliation that she was sent flying by the girl's kick, even in her Pandora Mode state, further adding to the embarrassment.
"You…little…bitch… How dare you… HOW DARE YOU! INTERUPTING ME DURING MY VICTORY! I'M TEAR YOU APART!" Ganessa screamed as her sent her chained flails at the female transfer student.
"Roland-san, no!" Chiffon cried as she ran forward to try and help Rosa.
"Look out!" Ticy cried as the pointed flails got closer to Rosa.
"Get out of the way, Rosa-san!" Kazuya shouted when Rosa showed no signs of getting out of the way.
"Heh… To think I'm being attacked by a Pandora who's training to protect humanity from the Nova." Rosa growled as her eyes flashed blue and her Stigmata glowed behind her back, "Freezing Shield!"
A blue honeycomb-like structure in the shape of a round shield appear in front of Rosa, making the chained flails bounce of it but leaving cracks in it. Rosa flinched at the impact, not out of fear, but at the recoil of the impact.
As her shield went down, the shock was mutual around the onlookers after witnessing what Rosa just did. Ganessa was the one who was shocked most of all at her Pandora Mode-enhanced attack just blocked by a shield that looked similar to a Freezing field.
"Freezing!"
Rosa then furthered shocked everyone by raising her hand and deployed an actual Freezing field.
"What?! Impossible! How can a girl use Freezing?!" Ganessa shouted as the Freezing field appeared under her, "Wait, that mean's that you're that girl who's the first female Limiter! No matter! I'm in Pandora Mode, so…huh?"
Ganessa found herself unable to move while Rosa's Freezing field was in effect, despite being in Pandora Mode that was suppose to allow her to move within them.
"A Freezing that binds Pandora in Pandora Mode?! No way! But how?!" Ganessa thought fanatically as Rosa drew her hand back.
"Eat this! Freezing Explosion!" Rosa shouted, snapping her fingers.
The Freezing field turned from blue to bright red before shattering, creating a large fiery explosion that engulfed Ganessa, making the ground shake violently that caused everyone to fall to the ground. Suddenly, Rosa felt weak and lightheaded, wobbling before collapsing on one knee.
"Damn. Still gotta work on my stamina to pull off two special Freezing's one after the another." she panted as she tried to recovered, knowing that the technique she pulled off wouldn't keep Ganessa down for long.
"You…you're that first female Limiter we all heard so much about. What the hell was that?" Shura asked, "I never seen a Limiter do something like that. How'd you do it?"
"Yes, I am that female Limiter you've heard on the news. As for what I just did, I refuse to tell on the grounds that I don't want to tell…yet." Rosa replied sarcastically, "A normal and omnidirectional Freezing I can do easily, but anything else is a one-off."
"Omnidirectional?" Shura questioned while Satellizer looked confused, "Only a Nova can do something like that-"
"YOU BITCH!"
The cloud of dust the explosion created blew apart as four chained flails and two chained saws were sent at Shura, Satellizer and Rosa with the intent to kill by Ganessa, who was enraged at being humiliated. Shura and Satellizer quickly used the strength they recovered to use their bodies to shield Rosa.
Finally having the brains to see that enough in enough, Chiffon and Ticy proceeded to do their jobs as Student Council to stop the fight and rushed forward to intercept the weapons, about to summon their own Volt Weapons…when the chains of Ganessa's Volt Weapon suddenly shattered, with the flails and saws dropping like flies before also shattering.
"Huh?" Ganessa blinked under her helmet to see her Volt Weapon get destroyed.
"What?" Shura, Satellizer, and Rosa looked confused at what happened, until a strong presence flooded the area, putting everyone on edge as their instincts told almost everyone to run.
Shura, Satellizer, and Rosa however, felt something from their Stigmata; more specifically from their Heroic Stigmata. Just like Shura, Satellizer and Rosa also carry Heroic Stigmata, with Satellizer carrying six and Rosa carrying only one in addition to her three normal ones. All three of them felt joy radiating from their Heroic Stigmata at the energy washing over the area.
"This feeling… Naruto nii-sama?!" Satellizer thought, remember the one who she regretted not going with when she had the chance to escape the hell that was her childhood.
"No way! He's here?/What's he doing here?!" Shura and Chiffon thought as they both recognized the energy signature. While the former was surprised, the latter was horrified, knowing exactly who was here, and that things are now about to spiral completely out of her control.
Not that she had any to begin with.
"He always knew how to make an entrance..." a voice echoed inside Shura and Satellizer's heads, making them look around wildly.
"It's that voice again!" they thought as one, recognizing the voice that plagued them ever since the 9th Nova Clash last year during the training exercise that gone wrong.
"First day here at West Genetics, and already things are going straight to hell with the so-called Rank 1 of the second year Pandora's resorting to Pandora Mode when she lost a fight she started, and trying to strike an opponent that's already down. First impressions are very important, and what I'm seeing here fails in that aspect."
Everyone turned to the speak to see a 5'8" young man with dark blond hair with black tips, bright green eyes, and wearing the traditional male uniform of West Genetics with a black guitar case on his back and a heavily modified Smith and Wesson 500 double-action revolver with a over and under barrel design named Blue Rose, a weapon that can only be found at Uzu Island.
It was Naruto in his student disguise.
"It's hard to tell what more pathetic Ganessa Roland: you as a Pandora, or your ego. But if you have any more brain cells left, I strongly suggest that you disable Pandora Mode, as those old model suits are still in the testing phase, and there's not many backups."
"Who are you, TO ORDER ME WHAT TO DO!" Ganessa screamed, losing herself to rage when she regenerated her Volt Weapon and attacked the blond with them.
Naruto rolled his eyes and shot down the chained flails and saws.
"If you really want to know, the name's Menma Arashi, a third-year exchange student from Spiral Genetics. Here now until the high-ups at the school decides I've suffered enough in this cesspool." Naruto replied flatly, coming up with his alias' profile on the fly with everyone stiffening at the name Spiral Genetics.
"He's not...Naruto, but they look so similar…" Kazuya thought, but was relived that it wasn't that person he believed was responsible for his beloved sister's death.
What an idiot on all counts.
"Menma Arashi?" Satellizer thought, feeling downtrodden for a bit, "But...is he related to Naruto nii-sama? Then why is my Stigmata happy to see him?"
"Who wouldn't be happy at seeing an old comrade again?"
Shura and Satellizer blinked at what the voice in their heads just said.
Old comrade...
"Oh come on Shuri, Satelli. I know you're two are smarter than that... I thought after all this time you know who I am, considering the former owner of the Stigmata you carry..." the voice chided, making Shura and Satellizer widen their eyes.
"It can't be/No way, you're...!" Shura and Satellizer realized, as Naruto continued his tirade against Ganessa.
"And I wasn't ordering you. I was only suggesting. Besides, you're in enough trouble as it is, making this school look bad in the process. Some Pandora you are, Ganessa Roland, but I'm surprised this fight isn't over, considering that you're fighting against an Advanced Pandora." Naruto added, looking at Shura as he said the last part.
"It's not my fault! Yumi-sensei locked away my Advanced Pandora powers during my first Carnival when I used them fighting Satella-chan! I never abused them, and only vowed to use them as a last resort!" Shura explained angrily, as Naruto narrowed his eyes.
"What? Why the hell did Yumi do that? Did Shura's other self come out again?" Naruto wondered as he walked over to her, Satellizer, and Rosa, "I'll ask to find out later… Guess we'll have fix that won't we?"
"Wha-"
Naruto pulled out a special-looking black card and made a swiping motion with it behind Shura's back where her Stigmata are.
"A present from the Headmistress of Spiral Genetics. The Advanced Pandora system was made in Spiral Corp after all."
Shura blinked before feeling a familiar power flow back inside her, realizing that she has finally regained her original powers as an Advanced Pandora; the powers that Yumi had sealed under the pitiful excuse of protecting her from other upperclassmen who would have a problem with her powers. As the power flowed out of her, it aided in the recovery of Satellizer and Rosa.
Shura suddenly felt a sense of déjà vu, looking to the sky to see Ganessa, still in Pandora Mode, attacking from above the same way during the end of the Carnival.
"DIE!" she screamed, shooting her flails and saw towards the four.
Naruto just turned to look at Ganessa with a bored expression as Shura got up and used her Izanagi Darkness Volt Weapon in swordwhip form to deflect the frails while Satellizer got up as well and managed to deflect the saws away with Nova Blood from a still recovering Rosa.
"I just had about enough of you, Ganessa Roland! You may have the number one rank, but it's merely an ego booster! Allow me to show you the power of an Advanced Pandora! Advanced Pandora System, Drive Install!" Shura declared as blue energy surrounded her form in a fiery-like manner as a driver-like device appeared on her waist.
Flicking her wrist down, three small different colored-green coins appeared in her hand and inserted them into the driver, "HENSHIN!"
The blue energy turned green and enveloped Shura form as the driver announced in a metallic feminine tone, "Kuwagata (Stag Beetle)! Kamakiri (Praying Mantis)! Batta (Grasshopper)! Ga~ta-Gata-Gata-Kiri-Ba! Gatakiriba!"
When the energy died down, most of Shura's appearance changed. She now has green hair that formed into spiky, low ponytails with electricity dancing and arcing off it, orange hair accessories shaped like Kamen Rider eyes on the sides of her bangs framing her face, glowing green eyes, traces of green on her uniform and Anti-Nova armor that consisted of wristguards, pauldrons, corset armor, greaves, boots, and wielding Izanagi Darkness and Izanami Shining in a reversed-handed grip.
"What is that form?" the bystanders wondered.
"It that same technique she used during her first Carnival when she fought Satellizer, but that's a different form!" Ticy said.
"What the hell is that!?" Ganessa shrieked, pointing a shaking finger at Shura.
"A faction of my Advanced Pandora powers…" Shura responded simply as Satellizer got next to her, energy also flowing around her form.
"I'll go too. Pandora Mode, initiate!"
Energy exploded around her form, with Shura keeping her ground while Rosa was blown back into Naruto, who caught her and jumped back to give the two Pandora's room. When the energy died down, Satellizer stood next to Shura in her own Pandora Mode armor that's slightly the same as Ganessa's except her blonde hair was flowing freely out and her Nova Blood Volt Blood was attached her wrist.
"Th… That's no possible… All this time… You also had the ability… to activate Pandora Mode?!" Ganessa asked in shock, realizing that her "victory" was not as absolute as it seemed, "DAMN YOU!"
Ganessa tried to attack, but Shura used Izanagi Darkness to wrap the blade around Ganessa's throat and channeled the Strong Drive's lightning-element through the blade to shock the crap out of Ganessa. She then used an ability called Branch Shade to create numerous clones of herself to charge at Ganessa. Before she could question the technique, she was attacked from all sides by Shura's Branch Shade clones for several seconds, her Pandora Mode Power Suit being severely damaged.
Satellizer then charged forward and slashed upwards, launching Ganessa in the air as Shura activated her Limit Break. Her Branch Shade clones responded as they jumped into the air with Ganessa, their Volt Weapons emitting electricity as they slashed at Ganessa multiple times, disappearing back into Shura when then deed was done as Ganessa fell into the ground. She hit the ground and bounced off it, just as Satellizer spun around with a slash and a devastating spin kick to the face, sending Ganessa sprawling as her Pandora Mode suits shattered, revealing her shredded uniform that failed to cover her naked form.
"ARGH! I WON'T LOSE AGAIN! NOT TO YOU TWO!" Ganessa shrieked in defiance as she sent her flails to attack, "SHURA YUKIHIME, SATELLIZER EL BRIDGET!"
"Looks like somebody doesn't know the definition of insanity…" Shura muttered as she and Satellizer spun their weapons between their fingers.
This time, the chained flails hit true, hitting Shura and Satellizer in their vital areas while they just stood here, much to the delight of Ganessa. But before she should rejoice, both Pandora's faded away as an X-slash mark appeared on her chest, with Shura and Satellizer appeared behind her.
"Uh?"
"Yagyu Shinkage-ryu: Ichi no Tachi - Zangetsu (Deadly Sword Technique Number One: Residual Moon)…" Shura and Satellizer said in unison as blood spurted from Ganessa's wound.
"It can't be… I… the highest ranked student… I…"
Ganessa fell to the ground, unmoving.
"Whew, it's over." Shura stated as she deactivated her Advanced Pandora form and restored her Volt Texture uniform.
"So it would seem…" Satellizer agreed as she deactivated her Pandora Mode and restored her uniform also.
"That was splendid teamwork there, ladies. You both look to be the only shining stars here in this school." Naruto praised as he walked towards them.
"Too bad the rest of the school thinks differently. Here, we're known as the Untouchable Nightmares, with me being the Nightmare Princess and Satella-chan here being the Untouchable Queen." Shura said, "So you can figure out for yourself how our school life is."
"Perhaps you both can tell me about it over lunch tomorrow. I have all the time in the world." Naruto offered, "You can also tell me more about this school."
"If you want to know Menma-san, you should ask the Student Council President and Vice President, Chiffon Fairchild and Ticy Phenyl."
Naruto blinked before turning to see Chiffon and Ticy, the former letting out a small "Eep!" when their eyes meet.
"Un-Unforgivable…"
"Huh? You can still move?!"
Naruto turned to see Rosa pointing at Ganessa, who was struggling to get up, and failing miserably.
"I won't accept this… I'll never accept this!" Ganessa screamed, still failed to get to her feet.
"Unfortunately for you, no one cares. Just stay there while we go get Elize-sensei to patch you up." Shura countered, motioning for Satellizer to follow, but she was staring at Naruto in his disguise instead, finding something familiar and comforting about him, "Satella-chan?"
"To hell with you! As the top ranked student, I can still go!" Ganessa snapped back, "Pandora Mode, initiate!"
She managed to transform, but her Powered-Suit was battered. However, she was stopped when two blades from a halberd and dagger pointed at her throat stopped her, owned by Yumi Kim and Elize Schmitz respectively.
"Wow, took them long enough…" Naruto thought in annoyance, "They should've been here when that Ganessa girl first activated her Pandora Mode. Aren't there sensors for that?"
"That's far enough, Ganessa Roland. Even your newfound rank as the number one Pandora of your year won't excuse you from this disturbance you started." Yumi said coldly.
"Deactivate your Pandora Mode right now." Elize ordered, "I'll sure you were told when you received it that it's still under experimentation for practical use, as we still don't understand what effects it may have."
"Geh…"
Ganessa growled in defiance, but knew that the teachers' words were law, and they caught her with Pandora Mode on dead to rights. With that, she deactivated Pandora Mode.
"Phew, it's finally over…" Rosa said as Kazuya came up to her.
"Rosa-san…" he said, offering his hand to help her up, but she picked herself up instead and dusted herself off, ignoring him.
"Are you okay, Rosa-san?" Chiffon asked as she went up to her and Kazuya.
"I'm fine, I'm fine." Rosa responded, "Who are those two?"
"Those two are the instructors at this academy; Training Instructor Kim Yumi-sensei and Medical Officer Elize Schmitz-sensei. Four years ago, the two of them played a major role in the 8th Nova Clash alongside Aoi-kun's sister and her partner." Chiffon answered as Rosa's eyes narrowed.
"I see. Four years ago, they're the ones who fought together with Kazuha-neesan…and him…" Kazuya muttered to himself, "They're the ones who came back safely…"
"They sure took their sweet time getting here. They should've got here sooner when Ganessa Roland activated Pandora Mode." Rosa said, clearly not impressed.
"Exactly what I was thinking." Naruto agreed as Rosa nodded with a "Mn, mn"
"How do we deal with this, Elize?" Yumi asked her comrade.
"They're fine, but a trip to the infirmary for them is preferable." Elize suggested, "I'll leave it up to you when I release them."
"Right. Ganessa Roland. Shura Yukihime. Satellizer el Bridget. All of you come see me afterwards for your punishments for violating the rules. A night in the brig ought to do you some good-" Yumi said, but a loud "WHAT?!" from Rosa interrupted her.
"That's not right! Ganessa Roland attacked them first and activated Pandora Mode when they first beat her!" Rosa exclaimed while pointing at Ganessa, not wanting this obvious injustice to happen.
"Mmm? I've never seen you before. Are you a student here?" Yumi asked, while Elize recognized her.
"Ah, Haven't you heard? She's Rosa Satonaka, the first female Limiter. And next to her is Kazuha's little brother."
"Oh… I see" Yumi said before clearing her throat, looking to answer Rosa's question, "Roland here may have started the fight, but Shura and Satellizer here should've just simply walked away."
"Tried that, Yumi-sensei, but the bitch wouldn't let us leave!" Shura countered angrily, "And it's not like we have your cellphone number to dial in a case of an emergency!"
"…It was only self-defense…" Satellizer put in her two cents.
"You call what you two did to her "self-defense"?" Yumi asked skeptically, pointing at a wounded Ganessa, who decided to act like she's seriously wounded; an act that was fooling nobody.
"Really? Really? Really? Really, Yumi-sensei?"
Yumi and Elize flinched, much to the confusion of everyone when Naruto spoke up.
"Seriously? They could've just walked away? I'm sure that kind of thing is hard to do when someone like this girl's attacking them first from what I've heard." Naruto deadpanned, "What were they suppose to do? Just stand there and take it?"
"…Uh…"
Yumi had no retort to give, while Elize just shook her head.
"Shura-san, Satellizer-san, Rosa-san, and Ganessa-san, please follow me to the infirmary." Elize ordered and left.
"Wait, I can't get up!" Ganessa protested, with Shura and Satellizer looking back at and to each other.
"I'm not carrying her." Shura said as he followed Elize, with Satellizer following moments later.
Rosa on the other hand went over to Ganessa, grabbed her leg, and proceeded to drag her.
"Hey! Carry me instead you little shit! I'm still the number one ranked-" Ganessa yelled angrily, but Rosa dug her nails into Ganessa's ankle, making her cry out in pain.
"I could care less." Rosa snapped back, "This is not how I imagined my first day at West Genetics."
"Ano, I can carry her." Kazuya offered, but Rosa shook her head.
"Don't fight me on this, Aoi Kazuya. Besides, haven't you groped enough girls for today, you pervert?"
With that parting shot, Rosa left with Ganessa in tow, who was still shouting at her, which only caused Rosa to tighten her grip on her ankle, painfully.
"Chotto matte, Rosa-san! What's that suppose to mean?" Kazuya cried as he chased after her.
"Things are going to be a pain from here on out. Menma-san, come to my and Elize's office later." Yumi told Naruto, who nodded curtly as she left the area as well, before shouting at the bystanders, "Don't you all have some studying to do?!"
The bystanders quickly left to do whatever it is they do, leaving Naruto, Chiffon, and Ticy alone.
"Ticy, can you head on without me? I need to talk with Menma-san here…"
"Uh…hai, Buchou…" Ticy said, bowing and leaving the two alone.
"…"
"…"
It was pretty semi-awkward moment as Naruto and Chiffon just looked at each other, before slightly opened her eyes, showing yellow eyes that have a strange, uneven line in the middle of each of her pupil.
"I know it's you, Naruto-sensei. It's been a long time hasn't it?" she said, as Naruto responded by changing his eye color from green to his usual stormy blue eyes before shifting them into his Rinnegan.
"Yes it has, Chiffon. But before we catch up on old times, I have a lot of questions, one of them being what is everyone's major malfunction here at West Genetics."
(Evening)
Way above the skies of West Genetics in the clouds is a large dark transport plane that in reality serves as a mobile command center and Naruto's residence, just like the one S.H.I.E.L.D. has for one of their team of agents back in America. It's called the Valhalla. (A/N: think of "The Bus" from Marvel's Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D. TV show)
The inside of the Valhalla is unlike a regular airplane one finds at the airport. It has a command center, a lounge area, a kitchen area, a master bedroom, an office, several bunks, a tech lab, a medical bay, a cargo/hanger area, and a medium-sized cockpit that fits around seven people, all in one plane.
Naruto, still in his Menma Arashi disguise, is currently sitting on the open hanger doors of the bottom-half of the Valhalla, eating a pizza while thinking back on what happened after the battle between Shura, Satellizer, and Ganessa Roland.
Chiffon confronted Naruto, asking why her old sensei was at West Genetics disguised as a student. Naruto responded that he was there to see if West Genetics was as bad as the transfer students at Spiral Genetics claims it to be, and from what he saw, he can see why. Chiffon then realizes that he was the evaluator Sister Margaret was talking before she went to pick up Rosa and Kazuya. Knowing that it would fruitless to convince Naruto that West Genetic wasn't as bad as everyone makes it out to be, Chiffon begged Naruto to not cause trouble, with Naruto countering that there won't be any trouble if everyone's on their best behavior, and warns her that if she reveals his identity, there would be hell to pay. The reason being that if everyone knew that he's there, everyone would falsify their personalities and suck up to him, something that he don't want to happen. As Naruto walked pasted her, she told him to at least keep the body count to a minimum, with Naruto replying that he can't promise that and that neither she nor the teachers have any control over him.
Next, Naruto met with Yumi, and their conversation was basically the same as their other conversations after Kazuha's death; yelling, screaming, and flaring tempers.
On Yumi's part that is, which is why Naruto was thankful for the Sound Barrier Jutsu he cast in her office she shared with Elize.
She was pissed due to Naruto making her look like an idiot in front of everyone, and warned him not to do that again or else. An annoyed Naruto's blatant response was Force Pushing her through several walls and out of the school as he left via Kamui.
The rest of the day was spent with Naruto walking around the island where West Genetics, getting a general layout on the area for future reference, all while getting the feeling that he was being followed. When it got dark, he used Kamui to leave, while feeling a couple others jumping into his technique.
When he reappeared inside Valhalla, he looked down to see Shura Yukihime and Satellizer el Bridget on the ground, completely dizzy and out of it from the experience of jumping into the Kamui technique prematurely. He laid them in the bunk beds to rest until they awakened.
"I wonder if they figured it out…" Naruto said out loud to himself as he took another slice of pizza from the box.
"Figure out what? That you're really not an exchange student from Spiral Genetics?"
Naruto turned to see Shura with an amused look on her face, and Satellizer with a hopeful one.
"Arashi Menma? That's subtle name. Whoever doesn't figure out the connection is a real dumbass, unlike me." Shura said with a fanged grin, "So what has the leader of the esteemed Nova Destroyers, Uzumaki-Namikaze Naruto, doing gracing West Genetics with his presence?"
"…"
Naruto just look at her and Satellizer before smirking and shifting into his normal appearance while getting to his feet.
"Why do we talk about it over pizza?" he offered, shaking the pizza box, "We have a lot to catch up on, Satella-chan, Shura-chan, …"
"I can think of one person who wants to do more than catch up-" Shura replied but a red blur went her spinning comically on the spot.
"O-tou!" Naruto said, dropping the pizza box on the floor as he caught Satellizer in his arms, who hugged him tightly.
"I-I can't believe you're really here!" Satellizer whispered as tears fell from her eyes, "I missed you so much, Naruto-niisama…"
"Satella-chan. You've gotten more beautiful since we last saw each other. I'm sorry I wasn't able to get you and your mother out of that cursed house; away from that damn gaki."
"It's all right, niisama. You've here now. That's all that matters…" Satellizer replied as Naruto stroked her hair.
"Heh… With this, Satella-chan's gonna need a new nickname…" Shura thought to herself, happy that Satellizer was smiling a true smile, "Things are really gonna be heating up."
(Unknown)
"Sophmores Shura Yukihime and Satellizer el Bridget? They're the ones that caused all the commotion today, aren't they? I know their names well. They're the famous Untouchable Nightmares after all. But I really don't like them. At least they've learned a bit of shame. What of the new Limiters that arrived? Are they worth giving my blessings to?"
"Here are their pictures, ma'am."
"Oh, that will do nicely."
"Which one?"
"…Very nice… So she's the only female Limiter. Along with this one, they're quite cute, but this one is handsome. …No matter, because they'll all be mine. Aoi Kazuya. Satonaka Rosa. Arashi Menma. They'll make fine additions to my collection. I'll make sure the only initiation they will ever accept will be from me, Kannazuki Miyabi, the Limiter Devourer…"
END OF CHAPTER TWO
Next time – Chapter Three: The Despicable Pandora
-The Limiter Eater, Kannazuki Miyabi looks to prey on Naruto, Rosa, and Kazuya. Little does she know what her actions will put her on the highway to hell.
Naruto: As much as I would like to put you in a coma Kannazuki Miyabi, I think those two already beat me to it.
-Upcoming Chapters
Chapter 04: Unnecessary Discipline
Chapter 05: Inside and Outside Problems
UPDATED HAREM (up to the E-Pandora arcs)
OC: Shura Yukihime (Advanced Pandora), Rosa Satonaka (Female Limiter), Olivia Elliot Irwin (Advanced Pandora), Ashley Coulson (Advanced E-Pandora)
Pandora: Satellizer el Bridget, Maria Lancelot-Namikaze, Kazuha Aoi, Suna Yi, Chiffon Fairchild, Ticy Phenyl, Kaho Hiiragi, Elizabeth Mably, Cassie Lockhart, Roxanne Elipton, Charles Bonaparte, Julia Munberk, Yumi Kim, Elize Schmitz, Audrey Duval, Akia Takeuchi, Trish McKenzie
E-Pandora: Amelia Evans
PROFILE POLL: Decide on which select stories should receive major update like Devil Dragon Storm Emperor.
Release date: Thursday, October 10, 2013
Edited: Sunday October 20, 2013
Edited and revised: January 11, 2014