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Julian POV

I waited outside of Tiana's room. My mother, Dr. Thompson, came out and moved toward me. We talked as we walked to the hospital's entrance.

"So, mom, what did she ask you?" I asked. Mother was wrapped around my finger, I could get her to murder someone, if I wanted to.

"Tiana asked that no one other then Evan and his father visit her, but I've changed that to where you and Trevor can also visit her," she paused. "I'm pretty sure she'll be leaving tomorrow, so be ready to ask her."

I nodded and she went to go clock out while I went to wait with father in the car. My plan was coming together.

Tiana POV

I sat on my bed in the early morning hours. I'd been listening to the birds sing when I heard footsteps enter my room.

I turned expecting Evan or his father only to see Julian. My eyes opened as I looked at Julian and I opened my mouth to say something, but nothing came out.

"Hello, Tiana, beautiful morning isn't it?" Julian walked over to my bed and sat next to me.

"Get out. I asked that only Evan and his father visit me today," I managed, scooting away from him.

He sighed, "Evan asked me to-"

Evan stormed in, "Let's hear it, what did I ask you, hmmm." A wave of relief washed over me as I stood up to hide behind him.

Julian frowned, "Did I say you? I meant my father! He wanted to ask if you guys would be willing to join me and Trevor tomorrow for a hot air balloon ride."

Evan glared at him. I could feel the doubt and anger coming off of him in waves. "Maybe, now I do believe Tiana asked you to leave." Julian nodded and left glaring at Evan who returned the glare. When he left I sat down on my bed with a sigh of relief.

Evan pulled up a chair as I asked, "You don't believe him."

"About what," Evan's tone softened as he talked to me. I looked at him giving him the you-know-what look. "I don't believe what he said about the hot air balloon ride."

We continued talking and I told him I didn't want to spend another night at the hospital and asked if he had anyplace I could stay. He suggested his house and I said yes, it was better than being near Julian.

Julian POV

When I got home I started punching the walls. Evan and Tiana, they looked so perfect together! She hid behind him and all I could think about was that should've been me.

Trevor came over an hour later and he was mad. Apparently, Tiana was staying the night at Evan's. That boy was a suck-up and he was getting on my nerves.

But Trevor had good news. Evan and Tiana were going to join us for a hot air balloon ride and that got me thinking. What if Evan and Trevor accidently fell out of the hot air balloon? That would leave Tiana to me!

Oh, I'd be the happiest man in the world if I could get that beauty to join me in bed and become my wife.

Then I had another idea. There was a tornado warning so if Evan and Trevor were in a hot air balloon and were killed in a twister than Tiana would still be mine. That was Plan A, pushing Trevor and Evan out was Plan B.

I wonder if Tiana has any sisters.

Evan POV

Today we were going for the hot air balloon ride. Something was off about it, but when I saw Tiana at breakfast in a silver sparkling dress everything was put aside in my mind.

To be honest, she was the only one who kept me from clocking Julian yesterday when he almost lied to her. I can't believe that jerk would take advantage of someone who was in a twister and managed to survive and who we still couldn't find any relatives of, actually, yes I could believe that.

Father had fixed pancakes for breakfast, he said that something that was light wouldn't make someone throw up in a hot air balloon, I doubt that.

Tiana was eating them, savoring every bite, when a knock came at the door. Father and I went to answer it and Tiana started cleaning up.

Father opened the door to reveal Derek standing there. I saw Julian and Trevor outside waiting by the car.

"Troy, we're here to pick up- oh, you probably know why we're here. But we have to go soon or they'll rent the hot air ballon to someone else," Derek said with a smile.

Father smiled back, "Of course, Derek, they're both ready. Evan, will you go get Tiana, tell her I'll clean up breakfast." I nodded and walked to the kitchen.

Complete shock hit me when I saw Tiana put the butter away in the fridge. Everything was cleaned up, how she did it I don't know. She gave me a smile and put her hands on my shoulders.

I let her turn me around and guide me away from the kitchen. As we walked out Tiana told father not to worry about cleaning up and that she'd taken care of it. When we finally reached the car I'd composed myself, the front seat was empty and Julian and Trevor sat in the back of the red Audi, eager was written all over their faces.

They'd plan it so that I would sit up front and Tiana was in the back with them. Well, let's see how they like it when I have Tiana sit up front?

She took one glance and accepted, I sat in the back forcing Julian to scoot over to the middle seat where he sat there glaring at me.

Tiana had a warm smile on her face when she turned around and looked at me. I warned her to put on her seat belt, and she looked at me quizzically. So, I reached forward and showed her how to put on her seatbelt which earned me even more glares from Julian and Trevor.

What was their problem today?

Derek came in and didn't seem to notice that his son wasn't happy. He drove us to the field where the hot air balloon was set up. As soon as he stopped I was out of my seat belt, out the door, and opening Tiana's door.

She unbuckled and accepted being helped out. When she saw the hot air balloon recognition set in on her face.

Derek gave us the stay safe lecture and he drove away. Tiana was running across the field and sat by the balloon waiting for us.

When we arrived Julian sighed, "It's not big enough for all of us. I guess only two will get to go at a time." Tiana gave us a knowing smile and climbed into the balloon. She began walking around inside of it saying something we couldn't hear. Then she stopped.

"Now it is!" I climbed in and saw it was much larger now. I called to Julian and Trevor who were pushing each other on the way to the ladder.

Tiana sat in one corner of the balloon's basket, smiling up at the sky. I wonder what was going through her mind?

Trevor and Julian got us up in the air as I sat by Tiana, watching their every move. All the sudden we heard tornado sirens and Julian laughed.

"It's the first Friday of the month, it's just a drill," Julian said getting us higher in the air.

I shoved me down onto the basket, "You idiot! Didn't you look around? There are funnel clouds forming, we have to get on the ground."

Trevor and I frantically worked to get the balloon back on the ground only to hear Tiana say, "Too late."

I looked over at her, she was smiling, at a time like this! Then I glanced over at the funnel clouds, they'd devolped into a twister faster than I could imagine and it was heading right for us.

We tried to stir away from the twister's path but we were swallowed whole.

Oh no, another twister! Well, I wonder where it'll take them. Hopefully Julian's plans won't come true. Please review. :D