I know some authors don't like constructive criticism but I am not one of them. Thank you for helping me try to improve my writing I honestly appreciate it.
Ill update soon I swear it. Sophomore years been kicking my can.
Ps my ageings are a bit off but Mia Dearden/Speedy is 15, Connor Hawke(Ollies son who was raised by monks) 16/17, Cissie King-Jones/ Arroewtte 18, real Roy Harper/ Arsenal 20, little Sin Lance(Girl trained by Lady Shiva that Dinah adopted) is 10, and Robert Queen(Olivers son with Shadow) is 7.
If I missed some Arrowkids I'm sorry but I think I got most of them.
Disclaimer: DC owns all of this. Except Pokemon. Someone else owns that.
Speedy was not quite sure she was really seeing this.
On the street bellow her on a armored truck full of gold stood Sports Master and Icicle Sr. Near them stood two little girls.
From this point of view they were hard to make out but she could see the taller one had black hair that blew into her face and the smaller one had white blonde hair in a high ponytail.
Deciding that her best plan of action would be to take out the men and then save the children she notched a net arrow and pointed it at Icicles back. With a snap of her bow string the arrow flew strait on course. That is, until a red arrow hit it head on making it blow way to soon.
Confused, she looked back at the little girls who both now had bows in there hands, the dark headed girls red, the blondes green. They were both looking at her with big smiles, waving like they knew her very well.
No.
It couldn't be.
Holy crap it was.
"Roy-boy, do you see what I see?" She says into her communicator.
"You mean Izz and Li hangin out on a truck with cons?" Arsenals voice crackles through the radio static.
"Yeah,"
"Yeah I see it. Ill take out the old timers while you grab the girls. Alright?"
"Roger," She says shooting a grappling arrow a block ahead of the truck. When she sees Roy land in front of the bad guys she jumps off the roof, swinging down towards the girls. As she swings she frees an arm and grabs them of the roof of the truck, landing easily on her feet in an alley.
Peering around the corner she sees that reinforcements have arrived in the form of Connor and Cissie so she decides to leave them to it. Turning her attention back to the girls she drops to a knee and holds her arms open wide.
"Aunt Mi!" They both exclaim excitedly, running to hug her.
"What are you two doing running around with crooks?" She asks.
"Mom, Dad, Aunt Arty and Uncle Cam are on vacation, so were staying with our Grandpas. You should know, Grandpa Ollie and Grandma Di went with them," Lian says, rolling her eyes a bit at the end.
"I thought you two were staying at Artemis' moms house?" She had just assumed that but maybe she should have actually asked Dinah before she'd left.
"Grandma crock is boring silly," Isa says with a smile.
It may hurt Mia's feelings a bit that Artemis and Big Roy didn't ask her and the other arrows to watch the girls, but she pushes it to the back of her mind and stands, picking Isabelle up and taking Lian's hand as she dose.
"Where are we going exactly?" Lian asks.
"To Ollie's," She says as she starts down the street away from the cop cars and overturned truck.
(..)
Sin Lance was excited when she heard the front door shut.
She had been left alone with Robbie in Queen Manor for almost three whole hours now and he didn't want to play Pokemon with her.
The nerve of some people.
Of course all of her excitement faded when she saw who had just walked in.
Mia was there, in wrinkled civvies, and by her side stood two girls she knew well.
Isabelle smiled and ran to give her a hug that she returned, while Lian glared at her.
She didn't much care for Lian.
When they were 8 Lian had challenged her to a sparing match. Being raised in combat vigorously by Lady Shiva, she had bested the other girl, and Lian Harper could sure hold a grudge. It didn't matter that Lian was much better at archery than she was, she wanted to be the best at everything.
Mama Dinah said it was hereditary.
"Where's Rob?" Mia asks, gaining her attention.
"In his room," She responds. "He didn't want to play Pokemon."
"Probably because Pokemons stupid!" Lian snaps.
"Your stupid!" She counters, feeling a fight coming on.
"Knock it off you two!" Mia says irritably.
"She started it!" Sin tries to reason.
"She acts like such a baby!" Lian complains.
Mia starts to scold them when the rest of the arrows arrive home.
"...Fun! Best one of the whole year! I HAVE to beat Tim's from last year! It was amazing! Batgirl took her clothes of and everything!" Roy was saying.
"Do you think Bart would come?" Cissie asks hopefully.
"What's your obsession with KF?" Roy rolls his eyes.
"Brother Roy, I don't think this is a wise decision. We do have to watch the younger kids, Father and Dinah trusted them to us, and I'm in no hurry to betray that trust," Connor says.
"What's going on?" Mia asks, confused by the whole conversation.
"The biggest party of the year," Roy smiles at her.
"No way in Hell! The little kids are here! What would happen if Big Roy found out his daughter was at a teen superhero rager? Let alone Artemis! They would kill you! Like literally bury your ginger ass in the back yard!" Mia yells, wondering how stupid her counterparts are.
Roy rolls his eyes and smiles at the three little girls standing next to Mia.
"You lovely ladies don't mind if we have some friends over later do you?"
Isabelle smiles, hugging her Little Uncle Roy around the knees.
"Course not!" She says excitedly.
Lian agrees with Isa, but Sin dose NOT. Sin has lived with these people long enough to know that 'some friends' without Dinah and Ollie home means people throwing up, loud music, and inevitably, the police.
She shakes her head 'no' as Cissie swings Isabelle up into a hug and Lian hops on Roy's back. Frowning, she runs upstairs and knocks loudly on Robbie's door.
"What Sinny," The dark headed little boy yawns as he swings the door open.
"Their having a party,"
"Oh no!" His eyes go wide and his mouth pops open wide. "Not again,"
(..)
Kid Flash was trying to be polite.
This was the party of the year, no doubt. Every member of Young Justice and Teen Titans was here, music, dancing, alcohol, all of it.
This party may be crash, but Bart was defiantly feelin the mode.
Cissie wasn't getting the hint. Sure, she was a crash girl and all, but he really wasn't interested. Smiling widely at him, she takes another step forwards, and he takes one back. She opens her mouth to say something when his phone vibrates in his back pocket. She cocks and eyebrow at him as he pulls it out an checks it.
The words *'Primo Rojo' stare up at him and he curses quietly.
Wally wouldn't freak out on him for being at a party, right? Wally had been the party master back in 'the day'.
Still, to be safe he speeds into a empty room on an upper floor.
"Wally! Wallace! The Wall-Man! Flasheroonie! What's up my crash cousin!" He exclaims happily into the speaker.
He can hear Wally rolling his eyes.
"Look Bart, I know your at a party,"
Moded.
"And I won't tell Uncle Barry and Aunt Iris. But you have to leave. Like right now. And tell your friends to too," He says.
"What? Why? Is it the Rouges? Grod? Is Grandpa and Grandma OK? Mom? Dad? Linda and the twins?" The words rush out of his mouth in 30 seconds or less.
"Let me get a word in edge wise. Their fine. I'm on monitor duty at the Watch Tower and the police just got dispatched to Queen Manor. Uncle Barry will be pissed if he has to bail you out of jail, trust me. Get home, OK?" Worry and annoyance etch into Wallys voice in the last sentence.
"Thanks for the warning Wall-E," He has to smile a little bit at the fact that his cousin was looking out for him.
The line goes dead and he hustles downstairs, spreading the word to everyone he passes on the way out. The sirens start to go off as he leaves the yard, breaking the sound barrier as he goes.
(..)
Sheriff Adams hated teenagers with a passion.
She had no children herself, or any plans to have any. It makes her day to bust up teen social gatherings, and doing it to rich teenagers made it even better.
Oliver Queen was a jerk, charity work be damned. He never did anything for anybody but himself, marrying that bottle blonde hoe, adopting enough kids to fill a foster home and having those two bastard sons of his out of two affairs. A real role model.
She heard one of his charity cases even did drugs, that's how he lost an arm.
She was ecstatic to get a call to his house about a party. There was little action today, only Icicle and Sports Master earlier this morning.
She pulled her squad car onto the front lawn of the enormous property, sirens blaring. She would enjoy this.
Almost immediately teenagers started poring from the front door, running in every direction. She even thought she say a few hop out of the second and third story windows. *No, they'd be severely injured if they tried, she reasons.
As they run, her and several deputies start to search the house for Queens brats. They find them, upstairs in a bedroom that looks like its made for a little girl, except for the Pokemon posters and dolls everywhere.
"Can I help you mam'?" A red-headed kid, clearly the oldest, slurs.
One of those two red headed brothers Queen adopted at separate times, the younger one shes positive*. He's drunk. And she doubts he's old enough to be.
"Young man, have you been drinking tonight? Or any of these other young people here?" Deputy Smith asks.
Reddy's eyes get big and he shakes his head 'no' quickly. Several breathalyzer tests and a shouting match later she's got three police cars full of Queens brats on the way to the station. Sadly, she'd ended up with the youngest ones. The little boy was up front with her, and he looked sick*, the blonde little girl was sobbing, and the two dark headed girls looked pissed.
The Chief was kind enough to put all of the children they'd picked up in the same holding cell at the station, and the little blonde girl climbs into the African American boys lap, sniffling into his chest. He was the only teen who had passed his breathalyzer.
"Where the Hells are one call?" Reddy was demanding.
"Who are we going to call Roy? I'm not calling Ollie on vacation. He'd be pissed," The younger blonde teen says, rolling her eyes.
"We're not calling my mom," The oldest girl shakes her head, eyes wide. "She'd kill me,"
"Girls?!" Icicle shouts from two cells down, waiting transport to Belle Rev.
The littlest girls head turns twords the bars, and she stops crying for a few seconds to call "Papa?"
"Holy shit! What are you doing here?" Icicle shouts back.
"The Man got us. We were fighting the Power," One of the older little girls says with a smile
"No! There was a party! And Aunt Cis and Mi and Uncle Little Roy and Connor goted the cops called! And now were gonna die in the jail!" The little one starts crying again.
How do Oliver Queens brats know Icicle?
Pain explodes in the back of her head and she sinks to the ground, unsure of what's happening.
(..)
Crusher is happy at the fact that he doesn't have to track down the girls.
Pulling the keys out of Officer Bitch's pocket, he lets Joar out and they stroll to the cell that holds their granddaughters.
Arsenal looks pissed. As dose Hawke.
The Teen girls look sad, and so dose the younger kids.
"Don't rat on us for the party, and we won't rat on you for the robbery," Arrowette offers, staring at her hands.
He smiles, glad he has them under his thumb.
"Or, we could take the girls and leave you here," He says.
The kids eyes pop and they all shake their heads.
"Oh Grandpa! You can't do that! It was lots of fun! Aunt Cissie made us heart shaped samiches for lunch! And Little Uncle Roy gave me a backback ride! And, and, and Uncle Con says I'm amazing with a bow! Aunt Mia gave me some of her cool arrows and me and Lian and Sin and Rob played Pokemon! It was sooooo much fun!" Isa says, wiping tears off her little face.
"Even the party was fun. I got to dance with Red Robin! He said I was funny!" Lian ads with a smile.
"And Blue Beetle taught us to speak Spanish, hermano,"
"And Wonder Girl and Batgirl showed me some awesome judo moves!"
Lawrence rolls his eyes and opens the door.
"Get lost before I remember that you threw us in jail earlier," He tells the Arrows, who all hug the girls and then scat.
"I'm glad you had a good time," He tells them honestly.
"Yeah! This has been a pretty OK week! Now, my birthdays Friday and I want to have a party!" Isa smiles.
"Like cake?"
"No! A sleepover! I wanna invite Milagro and Nelly and Irey and Sinny and Mar'i! And cake! I'm 7! It's a hugemongus deal!"
As long as he doesn't have to see his ex, he thinks it won't be that long of a three weeks.
*Jaime's fault Bart likes Spanish.
*They were. Superhero kids can do that.
*They had to come up with something to tell people right?
*Leukemia, poor baby
Longer than usualish.
Those cops don't exist.
I will update within the week.
PS if you want any more Jr superhero kids than the ones mentioned in Isas birthday speech, a chapter about all the stuff the girls did, or think I should do another chapter ft the Arrowkids, tell me! I only know how to check reviews tho.
PPS if you have any ideas for future chapters, I'm open to ideas.
PPPS I am going to try and fix a few things in the other chapters.
Next Time: Isa's 7! Black Ops, Phone calls and Ex Wives!