Number 77: A Rainbow Factory Story

by MLP Paty Cake

Paty Cake, a Pegasus pony with the hope to pass his Flight Exam and avoid banishment. However, his only true friend is his Instructor and nearly all of his classmates pick on him. Little did he know that there was a great cost to failure. Soon, he will have to get along with unexpected ponies to survive the corruption of Cloudsdale.

8. Paty's Little Note

Paty's little Note

(Sorry about all the errors in the story, but I'm fixing it, don't worry.)Hello to everypony that has read this lovely story. You may have read the original "Rainbow Factory" and the stories that followed. I want everypony to know that this is my own route from the original story. I'm not taking swings at the authors that worked hard on those stories and I'm not competing with them either because I would get my head smashed all over the floor. This is me doing my own little thing. Aslo, if your going to say anything to me over xbox live, please message me first. Tell me if you see any errors in the story and I'll be all over it.

I want to thank Wooden Toaster for allowing me to have him in my story and I also want to thank the ponies that supported me and helped me on my story. Wooden Toaster, you're a huge inspiration to a lot of ponies in this fandom and the work you produce is amazing. Your song "The Rainbow Factory" is one of the first things that started pushing me towards this awesome fandom so thank you so much. I also want to thank AuroraDawn for the amazing story that you wrote. It was absolutely fantastic and it really sparks my twisted imagination.

While some ponies in this story were fictional, I did have friends and people that wanted in this story:

Paty Cake- gametester97(Xbox Live)

Thunder Game- gametester98(Xbox Live)

Skullcrusher- sku11krusher58(Xbox Live)

Silver Streak- Clumsy Raz(not real name just nickname)

Glaze- Wooden Toaster(he has a channel at youtube)

I don't know if this writing flew well because this is the first story that I have ever written. No matter what, I had a lot of fun writing this story and I hope that somepony enjoyed it. I also want to thank Thunder Game for being my editor because I made millions of mistakes on this project. Also, thank you to the creators of the "My Little Pony" series. I never thought that I could enjoy a show so much and yet here I am writing about it.

Check out Glaze's channel and if you haven't already. Also check out AuroraDawn's original story. By the way, I have more coming soon so stick around if you want to.

-Paty Cake