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Chapter 5

Tobias

I look over to her and smile. "We need to leave." She says.

I want to stay, I want to hold her close to me, but she wants to leave. "Okay, but if any guys look at you…you better come stand next to me." I say winking at her.

"I'll try to remember that," she says winking back at me.

We leave the apartment and walk towards Zeke's. I walk behind her and bend over. I grab her legs and throw her over my shoulder, she starts laughing. I carry her down the hall and down flights of stairs until we reach Zeke's place. I knock on the door, I put Tris down carefully and she just looks up at me. I can't stand when she looks at me like that, I lean over and our lips meet. I move my hands to her waist. She moves one of her hands from the back of my neck up to my short hair. Our kiss becomes deeper and hungrier. I start to move my hands from her waist slowly down to her hips-

The door opens, and Zeke stands there, "ohhhhhh guys get a room."

We both look at him and move away from each other. I can feel my face become dark red. We turn to walk into his apartment. Her hands meet with mine and I lace my fingers with hers. She looks amazing. I watch as Christina and Uriah walk into the room and greet us. Uriah just stares at Tris in belief, she looks beautiful, I can imagine the thoughts going through his head. She walks up to him and hugs him. I watch as they talk but then I feel Zeke pat me on the back.

"Getting jealous of Uriah?" he asks moving his eyebrows up and down.

"What? No, I'm not jealous of Uriah." I am jealous of Uriah, no I'm not, okay maybe just a little. Either way Zeke doesn't need to know.

"mhhhmmm, whatever you say Tobias."

I see him smile and wink. Why would I be jealous of Uriah? She is my girlfriend, it's not like he can take her from me when she is already mine. I push the thought out of my head.

"Are you guys ready to go?" Christina asks.

We all walk out of the apartment and behind me I hear Uriah laughing with Tris. I'm not jealous.

Tris

We walk to the trains and jump on, I almost fall but Uriah grabs my arm that isn't wounded and pulls me in. I thank him and he just nods and smiles. I look over to Tobias who is sitting in the corner of the train staring at Uriah. Why is he starring at Uriah? He notices that I am looking at him and he looks at me, and then turns his head to look out of the window. What is wrong with him?

We all jump from the train. I land but fumble and end up running into Uriah, Uriah falls, I do also and end up landing on top of him. I stand and we both start laughing. I feel Tobias' soft touch on my shoulder and I turn to look at him.

"Are you okay?" he says. He doesn't seem happy.

"Yeah I'm fine." I say reassuring him, but it doesn't help.

He starts to say something but in the corner of my eye I see Zeke elbow Tobias. Tobias just turns and looks at him. Then he turns without replying to me.

We reach a club called Risky's, it looks a little rusted. Tobias stands behind me as I walk next to Uriah and Christina. I don't know what his problem is; he is in a bad mood.

Tobias

We reach the club and the bouncer starts to look at all of us but stops at Tris and stares.

"Name," He continues staring at her. I don't know if I like her looking like that anymore. I start to get really angry. I can see Zeke laughing in the corner of my eye. I walk to Tris and forcibly take her hand in mine and lace our fingers together.

She looks up at me in disbelief. "What the hell is your problem?"

I just look at her and say, "Nothing I'm fine. Maybe I just wanted to hold your hand."

Zeke tells the bouncer our name and Tris just stares at me like she doesn't know who I am. As soon as I took her hand, the bouncer looked away, before I almost punched him. I don't like guys staring at her; she is my girlfriend after all.

We walk into the club and there are drunk people everywhere. Tris pulls her hand away and walks over to Christina.

Tris

I don't want to stand next to him anymore, he isn't in a good mood and I don't want to deal with it. I take my hand from his and he looks at me with hurt eyes but I don't look at him, I just turn and walk to Christina. We go to the bar and get drinks. I don't want to think about Tobias anymore, I want to be happy tonight. I push him out of my mind and drink.

After a couple of drinks I stop because I don't want to be completely drunk, I turn and see Tobias with Zeke…dancing, they are definitely drunk. I walk to Christina who is on top of a small table. She is also drunk, I grab her hand and pull her off the table. We start to walk towards the dance floor.

Tobias

After I'm almost drunk, I forget about Uriah and the bouncer. I walk to Zeke and begin dancing and so does he. I don't even know what I'm doing, I can't control my dancing. I see a small blonde go past me towards the dance floor. I start to turn and walk to the dance floor.

The blonde turns and looks at me. "Tobias, want to dance?"

"What? How do yoouuuu know my name? I onnllyyy told Tris."

"Tobias, I am Tris. Come on let's dance." She says grabbing my hand.

"Noooo I can't, I have a girrrlfriendd" I say pulling my hand back.

"Tobias I am your girlfriend, I am Tris." she says looking up at me and laughing.

"Ohhhh okay, Hi trisss, want to dance? You look sexyyyyyy." she does look really hot.

She starts laughing and then says "come on," as she grabs my hands again, putting them on her hips and she starts to dance with her arms over my shoulders and hands around the back of my neck.

Tris

I begin to dance with the drunk Tobias, I laugh into his ear.

I feel someone's hand grab my butt and I think its Tobias so I look at him and laugh, he just stands there looking at me. I feel it again and then hear someone whisper "hey there baby" into my ear. I turn my head in the person's direction to see what the hell he thinks he is doing but as I turn my head the guy kisses me. I move but he just comes closer and begins grinding his junk on me.

I go to immediately punch him but he grabs both of my hands.

"What THE HELLLLLLLL do you think you're doing…budddyyyyy" Tobias says. His knuckles are white. He is actually really funny when he is drunk. He comes closer. "Get your handsss off of MY girlfriend, NOW," and he punches the guy hard in the jaw.

The guy falls down and then Tobias grabs me and carries me out of the club, he doesn't say one word.

We reach the apartment and Tobias puts me down on the bed and without saying anything he turns and walks to the washroom.

Hey guys, I hope you all liked chapter 5. I should be updating again by tonight so don't worry haha. Please leave me a review or private message me of what you thought and answer some of my questions from the top. I'm always looking to improve my writing.

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