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Chapter 8

Tris

Death ends a life, not a relationship.

I lay on the floor, as blood drips onto the concrete.

I look to my hands that are stained with blood, they are shaking.

Marcus grabs my hands away from my view and holds them onto the concrete; I can feel them getting scraped and the blood trickling off and down my arm. I let out a scream and feel warm tears begin to drip onto my cheeks. I wait as the figure from the distance gets closer. I can barely see the face, it looks familiar.

Peter.

He walks over and without talking or looking at me, he walks to Marcus. He stands straight up next to him, "PETER, peter look at me. HELP ME. Peter listen-"

Before I can finish he pounds his foot into my hip.

I start to freak out, I need help. Peter bends down and without saying anything grabs my arms, I watch in agony as Marcus moves to the other side, he grabs my feet and lifts them off the ground. I let out another cry, as they walk with me hovering over the pavement I feel blood dripping off my body and hitting the ground.

They walk to the moving train. Then they throw my body into it and jump on after me. As I hit the floor in the moving car I hear a painful crack in my arm. I grab my arm and screen in misery. Peter kicks me again on the side of my stomach and I see blood. I try to control myself and stop crying but I can't the pain is agonizing. I look down to the floor, there is blood surrounding me. I feel tears streaming from my eyes.

As we reach the location they pick me up in the same position and throw me back off the train. I hit the dirt ground on the same arm and grab the arm. I can't stand the pain, I don't think I can breathe.

They jump out from the train and pick my body up again. We go to an old storage unit, it is quite large but rusted and looks like it might fall apart. They drop me as they unlock the door. I sit there aching as I put my hand to my abdomen when I pull my hand up I see blood. A lot of blood, I need Tobias' help, I need him to pick my bruised body off the ground and carry me to safety in his strong arms.

They drag my body into the room. There are chairs nailed into the wood floor boards, I look around the room for Caleb.

"CALEB, where are you? WHERE ARE YOU?" I grit my teeth as I feel another kick to the side.

They grab my body and lift me up placing me onto one of the chairs, then tie my body down. I begin to freak out. I am shaking and I try to move but I cannot. I kick the chair but it won't move, the nails are too strong. My face is soaking in tears. I need to leave, I begin screaming. "WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME MARCUS? LET ME LEAVE, WHERE IS CALEB?" I cry harder and can't hide the tears.

Marcus walks to me and begins laughing. He slams his fist into my chest. I can't catch my breath or move so I just begin whimpering.

"Keep screaming and you'll get another, understand?" he says coldly I look up at him. His eyes are full of anger and cruelty; I imagine Tobias' hopeful bright eyes and begin shaking even more.

"Why are you doing this?" I mumble trying to speak as water floods my eyes.

"I need to hurt Tobias, and by bringing you here I am causing him the most pain. He is working with Evelyn to restart the factions but I'm not going to let that happen."

He then walks over to Peter and motions for him to follow as they walk out the door.

Tobias

I wake and turn to look at Tris' beautiful face but she isn't there. I walk to the kitchen expecting to find her there, but she isn't there either. I begin to freak out; she never leaves in the mornings, especially without telling me. The last time I woke with her missing she had gone to the erudite compound to sacrifice herself. I walk to the washroom and find her leggings still lying on the floor. I turn to face the sink and on the corner of it see a small piece of paper, a note.

Tris, if you want your brother Caleb to live

meet me at the trains outside the dauntless

compound at midnight. Don't tell Tobias. We need to

talk. If you bring anyone I will immediately

kill Caleb.

-Marcus

I punch the wall in anger and lift my fist to see a whole as a result. Caleb isn't there; Marcus would never kidnap Caleb he doesn't even know where Caleb is. I run to the door and fling it open almost breaking it.

I feel a sharp pain.

I glance up to see Marcus and Peter standing over me.

Then everything goes black.

Tris

I want his warmth, I need his warmth. I'm still shaking not only from the terror and pain but also from the cold air as it hits my bruised and wounded body.

I feel something trickle down my leg but push the thought out of my head as I realize it is just more blood from the effects of Peter's foot digging into my hip.

It smells of rotting flesh. I look around but all I see is darkness and puddles of blood.

I hear the sound of the train getting nearer, and I know that Peter and Marcus are coming. But do I want them to come? They will beat me again. No, I don't want them coming, I am already dying and I would rather die from blood loss without them beating me in the process.

I hear a body hit the ground outside of the Storage Unit, and then hear two men jump from the train. I wait and listen to the rattling of the keys. They open the door.

I see darkness, I don't see them drawing near until they reach the one light hanging from the ceiling.

I look to the motionless limp body that is being carried towards me, a man. I shift my eyes to his shoulders, you can see a tattoo creeping up from his back. Tobias.

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