I'm the worst person ever. I actually have no excuse of why I didn't update. I literally logged on earlier and saw all these reviews and thought, 'Oh, there's actually a decent amount of people who are liking my story.' I'm an awful person and thank you guys for reviewing.
I didn't really respond to reviews yet (Well not that I can remember?) so here I am, responding.
Leafdrift; I know right
Guest; haha yeah
Guest; Here I am, updating. :D
Guest; I have updated! Sorry for the major wait thought Thanks for reviewing!
. . .me; haha I don't need to answer back, I've been pm'ing you :D
TheRashinator; don't worry everything will be alright
Guest; haha I agree completely. I hated making him like that but, I had to do it for this story line to work out
Arocksprpl2; Did I spell it right? I can do whatever I want to do :D haha I know, I'm so cruel!
RandomlyCheesey; Thanks much
Courtney DiLaurentis; Personally I think they're the cutest book couple ever... Well Fax and Eggy are actually tied...
Page Turner II; we'll just have to see... mwah ha ha.
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smartypants86; Good ideas... That might just happen
echo; No way is this Fic gonna stop dead as long as I can help it.
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Itsyoodles; I definitely shall keep writing
Iggy-BlindnProud; shouldn't the question be... How are you reading this :D haha
Thanks all for reviewing And I hope to update sooner next time.
I'll explain WHY Max got so upset over the whole 'Whore' thing.
See, when she was when she was fifteen, money was tight (Dr. M was in between vet posts). So Max got into the whole 'selling herself for money' thing. As soon as Dr. M found out she made Max stop but someone found out about it because Ella had a syndrome called 'Loose Tongue' and she told one of her friends who told a group of her friends and then everyone knew what Max did and it got to her. So when Fang said that, it brought up bad memories so that is why she cried. I'd never make Max that out of character! Also, to those who reviewed, thanks for the reviews and the ideas. They're greater than the idea I had planned out but there are some things I don't want to happen so sorry!
UNLOGGED IN REVIEWERS:
LetMeFly: um well that review was... Appreciated? I say cos... I don't know why but everyone's different. Yeah, I didn't want to make an M fan fiction but I guess I have to COS my hands type what my head wants them to type and then again, my head's always in the gutter. Thanks for the review!
RogersVlog: Well, I answered that in my authors note ha Yeah she over-reacted about that cos it's a sensitive topic.
Ffffaaaaannnng: Firstly, love the name. Haha. And secondly; Ah sure they're cute together ;) and it causes friction between Fang and Max. And we all know what friction leads to... Haha. Bad friendships. Joke!
Anon: Yeah, for some reason I don't like writing Fax lemons. It creeps me out for some reason... I will update soon. I am updating now? Huh? Crap, I've confused myself. I'm going to lie down before I write anymore...
Whisper13: no but I'll watch it now and tut tut tut. How DARE you read it! Well, meh, you would've seen it on telly anyhoo. So I just quickened the process and um it's not by TOO many years is it. If it's only like 3 or less years it's relatively okay but if it's anymore I may have nightmares. And not the good kind...
Disclaimer: I don't own Sing Star, Maximum Ride, or any character –except for Joe.
Oh yeah and those reviews are from the old story but I decided to leave them in there.
Thanks everyone for reviewing! I'll make something good happen in this chapter just for ye lads! :D
*Previously
"WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU SAY TO HER?" I yelled at Fang and without meaning to, I raised my hand to slap him and then Iggy stood up.
And I slapped him instead...
Ella P.O.V.
I just hit my boyfriend. Shit. Iggy slowly raised his hand and left it on his the cheek that I hit.
"Iggy I didn't. I mean. Um. Iggy I'm so sorry!" I managed to stutter out. Fang just stood, wide-eyed as Iggy just looked at me. "Iggy say something. Anything! Even if you want to call me a name! Even if you call me a whore-"I noticed Fang flinch slightly when I said that, must bring that up later. "You can. As long as you say something!"
Iggy looked away for a moment and seemed to be pondering something before he opened his mouth.
"Iggy?"
Fang looked at his brother before looking at me. "I think he's in shock. Someone should slap him out of it. Oh wait! You already did that!" he chuckled evilly to himself. "Wow, normally a joke like that makes him break out of his little trances."
"Mighty slap you got there!" Iggy announced rubbing his cheek lightly. I heard Fang mutter "told you." But I ignored it.
"Iggy!" I wrapped my arms around his waist, "I am so so so so so so so sorry. I didn't mean to do that at all."
"Ells, it's okay." He wrapped his arms around my shoulders, "I took a blow for Fangles cos he's too weak to handle a slap!"
Fang laughed sarcastically. "Very funny."
"You!" I accused, "Don't even think of laughing! What did you say to her? I've known Max for sixteen years, well obviously. But I've never seen her cry so hard. Well only once..." I trailed off.
Iggy turned so he could look at Fang. "Bro, just tell us what you said to her."
"Nothing of interest." He stated before storming past us, up the stairs and after a few seconds we heard the bedroom door slam.
"Fang!" Iggy went after him, so with Iggy gone I went out to Max, who was sobbing on the bench, even though it was now snowing extremely heavily. When I closed the door it made a quiet click but it was loud enough to make Max rub her eyes and look up.
"Max? What happened?" I asked brushing the snow off the bench before sitting down.
"Nothing."
"You sound like Fang. Now seriously, what's wrong?"
"Nick, he called me a – " Max hiccupped through her sentence "A- a,"
And that set her off again crying, she put her head into my lap and cried even harder.
"Called you what darling?" I asked stroking her hair.
"A whore!"
That piece of shit! Calling my sister a whore! I thought to myself.
"Never mind him, if you were a whore he would have banged you by now because they're the only kind of girls that he fucks. But for now, I'm going to go sort him out." I went to stand up.
"No! That'll upset Iggy too and then you guys will be arguing and then you'll be upset and so will I and so will Iggy and Nick will just be just a jerk as usual and then I will have ruined everyone's new years eve! And then-" Max was babbling, and Max never babbles.
"Max! Fine! I won't do anything. Just come inside, cos I feel like I'm getting phenomena and I've only been outside for two seconds."
"That's cos you're wearing a mini-mini dress!" Max chuckled weakly.
"Shut up!" But I smiled, before pulling her up and walking inside.
Max P.O.V.
After my talk with Ella I felt a whole lot better. But as soon as we walked in my mood changed; the adults had moved the party into the sitting room.
"IGGY! NICK!" Iggy's mother, Hannah, shouted.
"Maxie! Ella!" Mom came out of the sitting room and held our hands; obviously a tad drunk.
"Hey Mom." Ella chirped happily.
"We're eating! Food! Wonderful huh?" Mom giggled.
"What do you normally eat? People? What are you? A cannibal?" Iggy boomed from behind us.
Unfortunately, Nick was behind Iggy. I shuffled nervously on my feet before continuing to walk into the sitting room, where there were even more drunk adults. Nick and Iggy's uncle was there and so were their parents (obviously!) and the seemed to be a bit more... Jolly. Then my Mom.
"Aw! Aren't you cute?" his uncle called out to me. And suddenly I remembered him.
"Leave her alone Joe!" Hannah defended me.
"I'm Caleb?" Their Dad turned to Hannah. "I'm not Joe. I'm Caleb." He slurred.
Both Iggy and Nick placed their hands on their foreheads and shook their heads.
"Here!" Joe handed Ella a drink, she sniffed it and frowned. I shook as Joe got closer to us.
"It's alcohol." She went to hand it back but Iggy grabbed it instead. "Ig?"
"He's had enough to drink tonight." He handed it to Fang who poured all of it onto a nearby plant.
"I made tha for lady pretty?" Joe slurred.
"Lady pretty is taken." Iggy announced defensively, wrapping his arms around Ella.
I felt very aware of Nick behind me and I felt like I was going to cry again, what with Joe and then the whole thing with Nick.
"I'm going to freshen up." I declared before turning quickly, going out into the hall and straight into the bathroom. I locked the door and leaned against it before sliding down the door until I was sitting down on the floor. I stayed there for a few minutes, contemplating whether or not to just climb out the window and escape to Dylan's house –he only lived two minutes down the road- but I decided against it. I was not leaving Ells in the same house as Joe without me to protect her.
The sink was slightly wet so when I pulled myself up I slipped backward and banged my head against the door.
"Shit! Ouch." I muttered as I stood up. As I wiped the steam away from the mirror with my sleeve, I noticed that my make-up was a mess; the mascara had run all the way down my cheeks. I cleaned the mascara off my cheeks but that's when I noticed the bruise on my neck. I rubbed at it to try and get it off but I couldn't, so I just got the foundation that Ella had left in her clutch that was in this bathroom. I rubbed a little on the hickey, after a few long minutes and after more foundation, you couldn't even tell I had anything on my neck.
"Max?" Iggy knocked on the door.
"What?" I sniffed.
"Ella sent me to check on you. Are you okay? Better yet, can I come in?"
I sniffed again as I unlocked the door, "What?" I snapped.
"I'm sorry on behalf of Fang okay?"
"Yeah, thanks. Is that all?"
"Oh, so that's NOT what was wrong with you?"
"Nope the fact that your uncle is a paedophile is why I'm upset!"
"Joe? How is Joe a pedo?"
"Do you know the way Fang called me a whore?"
"I apologized fo-"his voice was getting louder as was mine.
"Shut up! I was selling myself and –"
"Why are you telling me?"
"Iggy shut up! And I'll tell you!"
"Fine but I don't see why your-"
"Joe was my best client! He always asked for me. He paid for at least two month's rent, that's how much he was paying."
Iggy's face dropped.
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