A/N If you want to see what my OC looks like check my deviant ART profile. GigaBrony on deviant ART. In other news I thank Jeremy 1555 for putting my OC in his fic.
SpartanMJO12 – I am going to try harder at the describing. I thank you for informing me about my faults.
Chapter 2
Tundra POV
I awoke on the floor after what I assumed were hours. I was just leaving the bakery when Pinkie asked, "Where are you going Tundra?" I was going to answer but a customer came in. I was amazed at how fast she was. Id say it took her 2 minuets to finish. "Damn, that was fast." I whispered to myself.
She got my attention by once again by jumping up behind me when I wasn't paying attention. And of course I was scared. To answer her question I calmed myself down and said," To the Everfree Forest. And don't worry, ill be just fine. After all I did live there for quite some time."
"Promise?"
" Cross my heart hope to fly stick a cupcake in my eye."
She still seemed a little worried about why I would go to such a place. After all, we did meet about a week ago. She said still worried, "Okay then, you better keep that promise."
I exited the bakery and headed towards the Everfree Forest. The place I like to call home.
Later in the forest
3rd POV
As he was walking along the trail, he said to himself, " Why do I get the feeling I'm being watched."
And the thing was, he was being watched by Pinkie. 'Who's he going to visit? He cant be visiting Zecora, she was at the party the time and they stayed together the whole time. Does he have another friend in the forest?' she thought. She heard a deep voice behind her, " Yes, he does have another friend here."
Pinkie screamed at the top of her lungs.
Tundra POV
I heard screaming coming from an area a while back from where I came from. I said, " I swear, if some pony was dumb enough to walk into the forest unprepared-" I was cut short by the sound of laughter. ' Oh for the love of Celestia! Not Pinkie!'
I knew I had no choice but to see what was going on. And to my surprise, Slender was there just like he always would and Pinkie was laughing at him. And then she started singing. I yelled, " Please! No singing!" and to my luck she stopped. I explained to her who he was but not what he does. Ponies everywhere were against killing. " That's why he was able to read your current thoughts." Pinkie must've never heard the legends.
We soon heard galloping coming from the entrance. The other girls stopped dead in their tracks at the sight of Slender Mane. They heard the legends apparently. And that was it, I snapped, " For the love of-! Why does every pony consider he is evil?! Sure he kills ponies but that doesn't mean he's evil! Have you ever heard of any pony go missing in Pony Ville?" after my most unusual out burst Slender turned and started walking into the darkness as he said, " I'm sorry for what happened, ill be leaving now."
He didn't show any emotion in his voice. Never show emotion. Before he was engulfed by the darkness Twilight shouted," Wait! We're sorry. We didn't mean to offend you." To which he responded, "Offended? I've faced this for years. Nothing can hurt me."
Well why don't we sort this out at Twi's house." I said. We reached town in no time at all. 'Well that was an odd way to meet some pony.' I thought.
Tell me what I need to improve on. I feel I could've done better. There will be romance in later chapters, but for now every things getting started. And I wont be able to post very often so don't get ticked.
And while I'm at it ill recommend some fics.
The Life of a New Equestrian by Megatronious
Chains by Bookybrony
LRRPS and Ponies: Friendship in Warfare by Agent Colt M1911
Dima and Dashe's Random killy adventure part 1 and 2 by RU771AN
An old friend by Jeremy 1555( and check out his other fics. Their amazing)
Unto a New World by jackson3525
Check out these fics and tell them GAMMA sent you.
