Wow. Just; wow. Oh what now? Well, first it took you forever to write that, second it seems sorta slap-dashed together, and you're really playing the split personality card? I mean; yeah on paper her character sounds great, but you wrote her really weird. *Sigh...* I know, I just have trouble writing from female perspective on account of the fact I am not woman, so I'll come back to this chapter someday okay? Oh, you'll rewrite it, just like your elder scrolls fic, your halo fic, and your Pokémon fic.
... And as Rene opened the door, she found herself surrounded by every huntresses worst nightmare; grim octopuses! Before she could even scream the nearest octopus take a slimy slick tentacle andAHHH I'M SORRY PLEASE STOP WRITING THAT!
Remember Rene; I made you, I can control your fate, and I have a pretty disturbed mind.
Alright, sorry... just tell them about the next chapter. I'm going to shower and try to forget you almost wrote that...
The fourth and final prologue chapter of 'Gears to GRiND will be up sooner ads I've had it mostly scripted long before hand, so hope you like it... I'm going to go apologize to Rene now. Not until I'm out of the shower you're not! Rene; if I wanted to see you naked, I'd just draw that. Do it and I'll gut you?
*Sigh* Goodnight everybody...