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"Well, you don't have to be all stressed out, it's not like I'm gonna die, right?" asked Hikari, smiling. She seemed just as cheerful as usual somehow, well, a bit disappointed because of losing to Kei. "Anyway, I have dated Takishima and kissed him."
"You've kissed him?" asked Akira, surprised. Why would her angel Hikari kiss the devil Kei? Yes, she knows that Hikari likes Kei, but Hikari would be too embarrassed to kiss him anyway.
"Yeah, in Hawaii, right on the cheek!" said Hikari a bit confused why Akira was concerned.
Akira sighed, relieved. Her angel Hikari didn't kiss Kei on the lips after all. 'Well, Hikari is going to kiss him on the lips anyway, so what should I do? It might be Hikari's first kiss, even though Hikari likes that guy, but her lips are just too precious to be eaten by that demon!' Akira thought. She doesn't know that Hikari and Kei have already kissed a few times. She then saw Kei coming.
"So, I hope you haven't forgotten our deal, Hikari!" said Kei, grinning a bit in satisfactory. He's gonna have his Hikari kissing him without him starting the kiss.
"Of course I haven't!" Hikari exclaimed. "Well, when's the date?" asked Hikari, blushing a bit. "I'm free in every Saturdays."
"Well, this Saturday, then," said Kei, feeling even more satisfied.
"Kei, I hope you haven't forgotten that I'm still here!" said Akira. "Kei, I'm not gonna let my Hikari taken from me! Hikari, please don't do this!"
"Well, a deal is a deal, I have to date him. After all, I lost to him," said Hikari. "But, Takishima, don't you dare think that I'm giving up." Kei gave her a priceless smile and Hikari blushed.
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"Today is the day!" Hikari exclaimed as she put her dishes away from the table.
"What are you talking about?" Her mother who was sitting nearby asked. "You seem to be excited."
"Well, not really. You see, mum, I lost to Takishima and have to go on a date with him and kiss him afterwards," Hikari replied.
Hikari's mother looked surprised. "Are you really capable of doing that?"
"Well, yeah. I mean, I've kissed him before and we've gone to a number of dates, so, what should be a problem?" asked Hikari.
"Well, don't forget to wear your miniskirt. I remember buying you a new one last week," said her mum, 'My stupid daughter now has a boyfriend. It seems like a dream, I thought no one would ever want her, but she's kissed him!' her mother thought.
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*The same time at Tadashi's place*
Akira rang the doorbell. Tadashi opened the door and was amazed to see Akira. It really was a rare sight.
Akira grabbed Tadashi's hand and pulled him. "Come with me! We have to watch Hikari and attack Kei when he does something to my Hikari," said Akira. She and Tadashi hid in a bush near Hikari and Kei's meeting place (She found out about it when she eavesdropped on one other time when Kei and Hikari talked about it.).
"Oh look, Kei's not here yet," whispered Tadashi. "I guess we're too early."
"No, we're not. Only one hour before the date starts," Akira replied.
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Kei was already on the place thirty minutes before the date. He was really looking forward to this date. At last he saw his Hikari with MINISKIRT! And that one was super mini, even more mini than the one she wore in her date with Tadashi.
"Well, where should we go now?" asked Kei, still amazed by Hikari's beauty.
"Um… uh… movies I guess. That sounds good to me," said Hikari after thinking for about five seconds.
"Sounds good to me," said Kei, smiling to Hikari. They soon went to a cinema nearby and watched a horror movie.
As Kei thought, Hikari couldn't be scared so easily. She only sat calmly next to him, eating a hot buttered popcorn.
They also went to a park near an extremely beautiful lake and had a picnic there.
The day passed quickly. It was almost time to end the date. Basically, the date was fun and they both really enjoyed it.
'It's now the time for the kiss,' Hikari thought. 'The date was fun, but I think this part is the most important part.'
Hikari faced Kei. Kei also knew that this would be the right time for the kiss.
'Oh… this is too hard! It's probably because Takishima is watching me, it makes me nervous!' thought Hikari. But she wasn't the only person who was nervous. Our good at anything Kei was nervous as well somehow. He just couldn't believe that his beloved Hikari was going to kiss him.
"This is the important part!" Akira whispered really quietly since she thought Kei had devil powers that makes him hear even the quietest thing in the world.
"Shouldn't we just leave them alone? After all they're couples, we really shouldn't stalk them," whispered Tadashi. Akira wanted to hit him so badly but couldn't because Kei might hear it.
"Takishima, I'll do this really quickly, ok?" said Hikari. Kei nodded slightly.
Hikari then blushed and pecked him on the cheek, yes, the CHEEK!
"See you on Monday, Takishima!" Hikari shouted while she started running away, drops of sweat running through her temples.
One, then two, then three veins throbbed on Kei's head. 'THAT ISN'T THE KISS I WANTED!' Kei shouted mentally.
"Hahaha, I should've known that would happen!" Akira shouted from behind a nearby tree. She was so amused that she had forgotten that Kei might kill her.
"AKIRA!" Kei yelled. Two more veins throbbed.
"Akira, he might kill you!" Yelled Tadashi.
"And you as well, TADASHI?!" yelled Kei. More veins throbbed.
Well, Kei didn't hit Akira at the end because she's a girl, but he kind of finished Tadashi.
What do you guys think? Better or worse? Well, review! And yeah, this chapter is longer.