A Simple Mistake

by IzalithSorrows

One simple mistake. One. Simple. Mistake. That's all it took to changed the fate of world. Even Kami herself was unsure as she looked down at the small child before her. But she decided it would be fun to watch anyways, Especially when an unexpected event occurs, One of which will no doubt shake the Realm to its Very Core. NaruxNarukx? Not incest. changed upon a whim.

4. Chapter 4

Hellooo everyone, Izalith here, and i am back with another installment of A Simple Mistake To be honest, i kinda forgot about the story for a bit there, Vindictus has an event going and i got sooo caught up in it. I felt super bad when i remembered i had this story . sorry im just not used to it yet.

Izalith:*sits cross-legged* Well, as for the Disclaimer, as you know. i dont own any of Naruto's cast. All rights are to their respective owner be they the creators of Manga, Anime, Movies, Books, Games, Magazines, Other Stories, Documentaries and the others i cant remember the name of. i DO however, Own my own Creations, such as my own personal OC as well as the one hosting Kami-sama in this story-by this i mean how she looks and acts-. i will place more information about her..later.

Izalith:*stops and rubs chin* hmm, as for this story IM going to warn you right now. This chapter wont make sense at first, It all becomes clear later on. . Anyways, i havent gotten many reviews at all. an ok amount of favorites and follows, Which is AWESOME, btw. Now i know i use alot of commas but it just...feels like they need to be there. i know its not grammatically correct, but really...I dont care all that much. Until i get someone to Beta this alongside me, im going to do an above average job on grammer, but not Prestine. Ya know?

To NaruinoFTW: I believe its one of the first I've ever seen done like that, and i myself admit, i normally dont write things like that, but i was feeling a bit on the evil side, yea? OH and Congrats to You. Your the first Reviewer that i've seen on the story! so as a reward you got a choice of -}deciding something that happens, Having a showcase character(for this we collaborate on making a character that is suitable for the story, by which i mean- good/neutral/evil, stats, personality...this is mostly done by the requestee-you- I as the writer just varify everything), or something special like request of some kind hmm? hows that for Reader appreciation huh? Heh, Contact me soon!

ANYWAYS The end of the last chapter and the start of this one is Actually after a timeskip, i forgot to add it in but its only 2 years. Due to Political problems, the Five Great Nations came to a shaky, but agreed upon Pushback of the Chunnin exams.

Previously

With a start Naruto jolted awake, feeling a weight on his chest and arm, he looked down to spot the cause of it, and with a sigh he could tell this was just going to go oh so well when Jiji found out..he snickered softly as he could just imagine the looks on not only the old hokages face, but every elses as well.

NOW

Silence invaded the room as its current occupants were put into an impromptu staring contest. After what seemed like ages, the elder of the group, a wise and grizzled old man, pooled his features from a look of immense shock to sigh.

"I'm too old for this shit." he mumbled "Naruto..so your saying?"

doing his damnedest to not laugh, the boy simply nodded "Thats right Jiji, I hardly believed it myself...at first." A soft, angelic-like, yet quiet laugh could be heard by the rooms other two occupants, both Hiruzen and Naruto glanced over to view at them.

The first, was about Naruto's height, with blond slightly-wavy hair that seems to flow to the middle of her back, with a body fit for a goddess, holding 29 D's and a 32 waist with skin that seemed to glow, she was the very definition of the word 'Beauty'. However, even she could not compare to her companion, albeit very close.

The second was a woman with a fiery blood red hair that seemed to be alive, standing at just under Six foot Four, she was easily the tallest of the rooms occupants. Not only that, but she had that ethereal feel about her, almost unnatural but not enough so to stand out that much. With a 38 DD and a 28 Waist, every woman easily seethed in envy with just a glance.

Both women had on a matching set of gear, although the colors were different (Gold and Crimson respectively). This gear consisted of Anbu-styled cloak and pants with custom pockets and slits that seemed to be made to aquire maximum range of movement while staying decent.

On the blond-haired woman you could see a pair of unique chainblades attached to her side, with a short Nine and Half-inch handles designs of a fox, an angel, and a golden dragon that appear frozen in time across it. attached to the handles are a Two and Half foot pair of blades on each. Blades which looked to be made of obsidian and lined with lava, glowing a deep gold and orange with a darker than night black edge. Just under the blades you can see several pouches of different use as well. On her back was a Shield made of 9 tails.

On the crimson-haired lady you can see a single also unique blade on her left side, with a handle of a half foot long it is marked with the same designs of the chainblade handles. For the 3 Foot and a half blade, which is in fact partially split with several connecters it shines a brilliant deep red and a tinge of silver along the edge. Another noticable feature was the glove upon her right hand, it seemed to be a normal non-discreet glove at first glance, but upon further inspection actually showed the Mithril lining and the glow of the small circular gem in the back panel of it. Just like her Blond-haired companion she too had pouches for different uses on her as well. On her back was a pair of hands made of 9 tails.

Back to Naruto, Hiruzen just could not get over the boy..er man..s new look. Standing at an incredible Five foot Six (for his age, which is 16 at this time, and on the day of Oct. 10th). He had on what looked like a cross between an Anbu Flak-jacket(it exists in this story) and an old Mithril Chain-linked shirt, on top of that was an orange and dark grey trench coat that had many hidden pockets. On each side of his legs were pouches of different items, and across his chest was a strap of black chakra-enhanced leather that disappeared to his back.

Speaking of, On his back was a large scroll with unknown contents(more on this later), and resting against the side of his chair was a sword, a really really big sword. Now at first glance, it appeared to be a Zweihander styled sword but was actually a greatsword. It had a Handle that was a good Foot and quarter long that carried the same designs as the red-haired lady's sword, with a Five foot blade of death made from what appeared to be the same material as the Blond-haired womans blades.

Back to reality, Naruto shook his head with amusement before calling himself to attention.

"Alright listen, Jiji, from here on out the origins of these 2 ladies will be considered an S-ranked secret between the four of us. I don't want anyone that i dont trust to know about this. Should people start asking questions refer them to me, I will take care of them."

The 3rd hokage simply gazed at the boy 'Well..that felt like it was supposed to be a command.'

with an eye-twitch he sighed "Do try not to command me to do something Naruto-kun, its unbecoming of my position you know, besides, i was about to suggest the same thing, if a little different of course." With a nod the old man stood up and walked over the the pictures hanging upon the wall. "Your in fine company now, if i do say so myself." he gazed at each of the previous kage. "You know..i fully expect to see you up here one day, Naruto-kun. So you better make me proud and do just that, you hear?"

"Of course Jiji, it's one of my life-goals, ya know." with a short laugh he stood up and stretched "ahhh, well back to training i guess. Chunnin exams are comin up, and i need to be ready, come on, Natsu-chan, Mia-chan. Lets go blow some shit up!" A crazy grin suddenly came upon all three of their young faces. Waving to the old hokage they simply vanished from sight, not a single evidence that they were even there remained. When he saw the look that they had gotten, hiruzen was suddenly afraid for whatever got in their way for some reason. He then groaned when he realized if they went overboard it would mean more paperwork

"i really AM too old for this shit...hmm maybe i can make Naruto the hokage for a day and give him 'advice' on things" with an evil chuckle he sat back at his desk, only to groan again when he realized he forgot to ask Naruto about his living quarters.

Naruto suddenly got a chill down his spine as he kept going to the training grounds, shaking it off as the mornings chill, he couldnt help the grin that came across his face. It was time to train, and he was gonna train like never before, so with that, he headed towards training grounds 19

At said training grounds, a tall cloaked figure could be seen sitting at one of the trees on the outskirts of the clearing it provided. on inspection this figure turned out to be Shino Aburame, a classmate and local half-mute(least some think so) of Naruto's. He was enjoying the sun and wind as well as watching the bugs all around go about their business when he felt a change in the wind. Looking up he saw a familiar yet unknown figure standing there with a giant sword upon their back, when he looked at the person he realized that they were 1. male 2. had whisker marks upon his face. So logic deducted him to be Naruto..but with changes.

Standing up, Naruto turned towards him with a grin "Hiya Shino, hows it goin today?"

'well..seems like i wasnt ignored like i thought' "The day is good Naruto-san""Bah, none of that -san stuff, just Naruto..please."

"Very well naruto, I see there is many changes about you, it is an interesting mystery i hope to learn. If you would permit it of course." With a wide grin Naruto crossed his arms. "Soon enough Shino, i will let you know, but first i need a favor."

Raising an eyebrow Shino couldnt help himself "Depends on what the favor is..."
"Train with me" was the simple reply.

After several moments of silence Shino nodded "I will train with you, however, i know for a fact that you are stronger than i am both physically and chakra-wise, so i will be taking this semi-seriously."

Laughing ensued as naruto lifted his giant sword then with a poof, it was gone. "Alright, first things first, im not using my blade, as im not that well versed in its skill, and i dont want to accidently hurt you out of the trainings context. Next, this is a duel to gauge our strengths and better our weaknesses. Finally, i hope to do this more often with members of our class, see? I feel it would help everyone out."

"Fair enough, and i thank you for the consideration. I will admit that sword is...intimidating..in the least, i know Tenten will go crazy when she see's it."

This made Naruto laugh even more. "yeah, she will. but i wanna train in it before i go against her, i would like to at least be able to hold my own against the future Weapons Master of Konoha. Now..as for our duel." "Right"

A half second passed before a leaf drifting on the breeze flew in between them, slowly setting towards the ground, at the exact moment it settled, both figures burst into action.

"Kage Bunshin Technique!" with that, Three naruto's now stood against shino, who was releasing a steady stream of bugs, forming an immense cloud that seemed to cover the entire area. All at once they swarmed naruto and began feeding off his chakra, who with a grunt sent out a pulse of said chakra, overloading the bugs systems and causing them to fall to the ground.

Shino paused momentarily, noting that not a single one of his bugs were killed, and with a sigh of relief, began the attack anew...only to see an empty field.

For minutes on end, Shino kept searching the area for any sign of the blond, then suddenly a fist from behind sent him rocketing forward, only to be caught inches from impacting a tree and tossed back towards naruto, who then slammed a palm into Shino's stomach. As he fell to the ground Shino burst into a multitude of bugs, causing naruto to jump back before they could latch on to him.

with a sudden hint of alarm, naruto whirled around only to recieve a heavy fist that was barely blocked as he went flying. momentarily suprised he barely got off another clone to throw him in a different direction, much less go through the trees.

Setting down several feet in front of Shino, naruto couldnt help but grin, this was really fun after all "Man shino, you hit really hard you know that. I almost didnt recover in time there."

With a simple nod his reply was "I was only returning the favor after all, So..."he settled into a stance that naruto remembered reading about "lets continue shall we?"

"ahh that stance...your clans exclusive one if i remember right." All he got was a nod."Well alright then." With that he vanished from site.

Taken aback, Shino simply stared at the spot before jumping back, rightly so as Naruto Meteored into the ground, causing it to crack and groan and split into several fissures that went every which way. Now slightly afraid of his strength, Shino's mind began going miles a minute to configure a strategy against the blond headed enigma before him.

'Well close combat is out..thats a given, mid range might work but it would cost me too much stamina and almost all of my colony...Long range is out as the same as earlier would happen.'

With a sigh..shino dropped his stance "You have me beaten. i cant come up with anything that can get past your offense, much less your defense. this duel is yours."

Letting out a loud breath, Naruto stood up from his combat stance. "Right, but i gotta admit Shino...that was some insane strength that you got, you should train more in Hand to hand..i feel it would work very well for you." Shino simply looked at Naruto with a 'Your one to talk' look on his face...not that naruto could see it of course. "I will consider your opinion for future training, and also, Thank you for not killing any of my colony, i must say they consider you very highly because of that. I know it is probably weird, but do think of it as being like..saving a village and they praise you or something."

With a sigh Naruto looked at Shino "To be honest with you man.. i didnt know what it would do to them. i simply hoped it would knock them out for a bit and it did, so it was just a luck type of thing." Shino considered this for a moment then nodded "Of course, i give my thanks anyways, as it helps me in not having to wait for more to be born. This shortens the time in between training sessions. Well i must be going, good day to you Naruto." With a wave and bye to each other Shino took off.

A few moments later a Blond-haired woman landed next to him. "Well that was an interesting duel, dont you think, Mia-chan?" With that a Red-haired lady landed next to the other woman

"Hmm...that it was, Natsu-chan." Sharing a grin they faced towards Naruto, who started to sweat slightly. "Eh? Oh right! hehe, onto training!" He reached to the scroll on his back and unrolled it across the ground before him, finding a suitable section, he began studying the contents. Looking over his shoulder, Natsu saw what he was looking at

"Hmm, Wind Gauge, sounds like a type of Wind radar kind of thing, not a technique per say, more like a field that encompasses a certain area, allowing the user to sense who or what is within it. It sounds cool enough, but the mechanics look difficult, however with your natural Wind affinity and the shadow clones, it is possible." 'Well...one way to find out.'

Standing up, he made a couple clones and had them go a distance aways. then channeled about a genin's worth of chakra while doing the hand signs for the technique. The air around him seemed to shift and became a slight breeze that circled around the clearing, passing the girls, his clones, and into the trees several hundred meters away. To Naruto himself it was a weird feeling, like he was everywhere at once within the wind and could feel but not neccessarily identify what he has feeling. With a slight sweat and a sigh, he released the technique but noticed almost immediately that the peculiar feeling didnt completely dissappear 'Huh. Must be a side effect of it, The scroll did mention there was a possibility for a side effect so no surprise there.'

Suddenly he had to duck then jump-roll away as Mia's blade came across where he previously stood, followed by Natsu's chainblades a bare moment later, blocking one and parrying the other, Naruto summoned his greatsword and swung it around, channeling chakra he aimed it at the girls "Full Moon Dance" A Silver-white Slash appeared where the blade swung around then procceded to rocket towards the girls. Mia simply ducked under it, Natsu jumped over it while angling her blades towards the blond "Wars Crescent Descention" sending chakra through the blades they began to glow a deadly ice-like blue and rapidly closed in on naruto from both his left and right sides. Seeing this he back peddled and then jumped even further back before rushing forward, sliding under the blades as they sailed over him, seeing a chance, Naruto pushed foward his weapon bringing it around in a manner unfit for such a large blade, see, the blade itself has actually lighter than most normal two handed swords, being only about a fourth of the actual weight meant a faster swing. With a faster swing this meant more would underestimate the blade, resulting in quicker battles.

*CLANG* looking to his blade he saw Mia's sword had blocked his blade, ducking under a straight fist shot from her, he pulled back his sword and did a full circle, swinging it around the other side. She blocked it but was pushed back this time and both fighters had to suddenly dodge out of the way of Natsu's twin-bladed cyclone that barreled through their position.

"So thats how you wanna play Natsu-chan?" they asked simutaneously, sparing a glance at the girl. She simply smirked then spun around and unleashed a blade at the other two, causing them to either block or dodge out of the way of it. Naruto and Mia darted towards Natsu but had to dodge again as she spun in place, this caused her chainblades to spin with her, creating a pseudo tornado of steel and chakra. Picking up speed she then sent a burst of chakra out, causing both the blades and the chakra-formed wind currents to rush out at insane speeds, which turned the currents into deadly blades. Frowning at the oncoming threat Naruto lifted his blade overhead then slammed it into the ground "Upheaval!" the impact cause a deent chunk of the ground to spring up, blocking the wind and deflecting the chainblade off to the side. As for Mia she simply pushed her hand forward creating a literal wall of chakra inbetween her and the assault, this resulted in the wind being reverted back towards Natsu and her chainblade to stick into the ground. Sighing in exasperation Mia shot forward and sent a right hook at Naruto then spun around and high kicked at Natsu, then she disappeared and reappeared behind naruto kicking him in the back towards Natsu while she disappeared once more, this time not appearing anywhere in the clearing. The remaining two combatants paused for a moment, sending a slightly nervous glance about the area, Mia on the attack was a bad thing, an invisible Mia was worse...alot worse. Little did they know Mia actually wasnt looking to attack, high up in the trees she was far enough away they couldnt directly sense her, but she could still see them, chuckling lightly she stretched out on the tree limb and opened a...bento box?

'I'll let those two have their fun..for now' and with an evil grin she began to eat its contents. After a few bites she stopped and sighed sadly "Guess this will have to wait..damned hokage interrupting our time." the reason for this was cause she sensed an anbu on the outskirts of the training grounds, still far enough away to get to Natsu and out of sight before hand, so with that she put the food away and shot off with a small burst of chakra.

back to the field the two blonds looked at each other a moment before shrugging "Guess she'll show up sooner or later" Naruto remarked.

"Yea! and most likely at the wrong time too." was the reply he got.

As they both fell into their stance and was about to begin anew, Mia suddenly appeared in between them "Sorry but Anbu is on the way, lets go Natsu-chan." and before the girl could do anything Mia grabbed her shoulder and the two disappeared.

Taking a moment to relax naruto looked around, the grounds were wrecked basically, he suddenly felt very sheepish and laughed a little. At that moment a poof of smoke next to him signaled the anbu's arrival.

"Naruto Uzumaki Hok-What the hell happend here...?" Naruto couldnt help but laugh as the anbu's body language just screamed 'Wtf?'

"Ahh..just a bit of light trainin, yea? Anyways, what did Jiji want?" with a cough to settle himself the anbu remembered why he was there in the first place. "Right, Hokage-sama has requested your presence and has ordered me to get you there."

"Very well Anbu-san, Request recieved and accepted, i'll head there as soon as i can, i need to get my stuff after all."

Hiruzen stared blankly at the All-seeing globe in front of him, the boys...obliteration...of the field for 'light training' as he called it, was slightly unsettling, but made him very proud of the boy. He had originally called him in to get a feel for what naruto's skill-level was now with the...upgrade? but seeing it for himself he knew the boy was easily Mid-A-rank elite Tokubetsu jonin. Canceling the chakra that maintained the visual through the globe, he placed it back in its place in the 3rd drawer on the left side.

Naruto climbed the stairs to the old mans office two at a time, still feeling a little bit of adrenaline from earlier he was hoping it would burn off soon. He also took note of how the effects of the wind gauge technique was still in effect 'Maybe its permanent? Not that i dont mind it, its really helpful' Making it to the door he knocked twice then entered when told to.

When Naruto walked in the room and took one of the seats in front of the desk, Hiruzen could see the slight twitching of the boys muscles, indicating adrenaline was still rushing throughout his body, he could see the scruff marks from the dirt and grass in various places as well as the slight swell of his right arm that was visually going down. Raising an eyebrow the old kage couldn't help himself

"Naruto, why didnt you get yourself looked at before coming here?"

"Simple, this will all be gone within the hour." was the reply. "Well, all except the dirt and stuff, but i plan on taking a shower in a few. So anyways, What is it you need jij?"

"Ah right, well i called you in here today cause i wanted to discuss your...abilities, if you will. Now i understand the need for secrecy but i need Something to put on the records so you can properly advance in rank, when the times come."

The two sat in silence for a good five minutes before Naruto adjusted himself then leaned forward "Fine, but common knowledge ranking and to be honest, despite how i look and seem to move, i dont know all that much, the only thing new from before to now is a basic understanding of Sword techniques, and a decent knowledge of sealing technique's. I am most likely C-rank in illusions(Genjutsu for all those who dont know), B-rank in the sword, A-rank in ninjutsu(if someone knows the literal english meaning of this, that would be awesome), A-rank with seals, A-rank with hand to hand, B-rank in tactics and planning, S-rank in traps, A-rank in stealth, B-rank in agility, and B-rank in throwing weapons.

Overall I'm told i average around High B-rank to a mid-A rank Tokubetsu jonin level. I would be higher but i've just recently started on illusions, which suck sometimes, by the way."

Taking a few minutes to record all this down, Hiruzen was impressed with how much he had grown over the last three years. 'By my guess, if he continues like this, he will be kage level by the time he reaches chunnin rank, if he doesnt outright skip it. Hmmm...this gives me an idea.'

"Say Naruto-kun, what is your opinion on a training group with the current rookie's, or your classmates i should say, for a time being?"

It was quiet for a moment then "Jiji, what if you set up a training routine to where all of my class is trained together, then when missions are selected, you rotated the members every few missions so that we all can work together, regardless of who's on our team?"

Hiruzen looked at naruto slightly wide-eyed, then his eye twitched 'He just said the same thing i was about to, cheeky brat, but he proves a point. It would overall increase the teamwork within the system.'

"That is just what i was thinking my boy, good, you get the idea then. hmm, Very well then, expect to see this change happen within the week,by which, is when your team is back on rotation. Well, i think that concludes todays meeting naruto-kun, Oh and one more thing. Don't tell any of the rookie's about the coming change. Let it be a nice little surprise. Now go home and rest up for tomorrow, its getting late."

Naruto nodded then stood up "Right! You can count on me Jiji! Believe it! Time for a shower for me, later!" and with that he jumped out the window in the direction of his apartment.

(Okay for this next part i recently read a story and a scene similar to this was in it, so i decided to have my own little rendition of that particular scene, lets see how it goes.)

When he got there, he opened his door to find Mia and Natsu sitting on opposite ends of the couch, both heavily blushing and looking away from each other.

'?' was his only thought before he headed towards the hall "I'm takin a shower, i need one for sure." he stopped for a moment, glancing over his shoulder half-way turning towards the girls "Are you two alright? your not getting sick on me are you?"

"N-no we're okay!" "We're fine!"

"Well alright then, if your sure. Im off to the shower." with a skeptical look and a from he disappeared into the back, a few moments later the sound of the shower kicking on rang out through the apartment.

Both Mia and Natsu then looked at each other Natsu speaking first "U-um.. I d-didnt mean to! i swear!" she said with a blush while holding up her hands.

"No, i know you didnt mean to, and it was nice, really, ju-" she froze then her face down to her chest went blood red as she hid behind her hands at realizing what she just said.

Natsu was stock-still her mind reeling at what was heard 'Nice? she said it was nice...it was nice..like a watermelon peach...makes me want more..' with a devious smirk, she glanced over at the still "hidden" Mia and grabbed her hands, pulling them away from her face. She then pushed the red-head back into the couch and leaned forward. However right as she was about to accomplish her (desire)mission she heard,and felt, a thud behind her. Both girls froze, meer inches from one another, then looked over at a nose-bled and passed out goofy-grinnin-Naruto laying just inside the hall. They both silently agree'd that none of this happened and quickly set about making it to were it seemed like it never happened.

They moved naruto onto the couch and sat down on either side of him and casually waited for him to awaken from his self-induced knock out. After a minute or two a groan signified his awareness and as he sat up he noticed each girl was sitting there looking at him worriedly.

"What happened? i could have sworn i just saw you two about to..?"

"Naruto-kun, what are you talking about? You came back from your shower and suddenly flew backwards and slammed your head against the wall. It right scared us half to death, we though you had gotten attacked or something."

"Oh..so it was my imagination then?" both girls noticed a disappointment in his voice and couldnt help but turn away to hide a small blush and smile on each of their faces. For a moment it was like this, then they both turned towards him and firmly planted a kiss on each of his cheek(Mia right Natsu left) before simultaneously saying "Nope, didn't happen."

Now he was the one blushing and fumbling, taking a moment to calm down, he stood up "Right well, its late, and we have three days to train till Jiji calls us,and yes i do mean both of you as well, for a..change of plans.. at the training fields we normally go to."

'Change of plans' they both thought, with a shrug they stood up and all three went to the bed(Naruto only had one bed, soo yea) all climbing in and settling down, Natsu left Naruto middle Mia right.

It was going to be a pleasant night for them at least.

And thats it . it took forever to get this finished guys, it was horrible trying to figure out all the stuff i needed to make it possible...kidding. but seriously, trying to place in fight scenes when you have hardly any experience with them is...difficult. to say the least, BUT anyways, Yayy! lol oh right. profiling

Name: Mia Kitsu

Age: N/A(dont ask her, she'll rip your head off if your not a child)

Rank:N/A

Skills}

Ninjutsu:7

Genjutsu:8

Taijutsu: 9

Kenjutsu:9

Fuinjutsu:7

Creativity: 8

leadership: 8 (Liable to take charge when none present)

Teamwork:9 (especially with Naruto and Natsu

Info: Currently not known by most of the of elemental nations, this will change quickly however.

Bounties: 0-Konoha,0-Iwa,0-Kumo,0-Kiri,0-Suna (Encompasses all Five great nations)

Name: Natsu Uzumaki(for now)

Age: 15

Rank:N/A

Skills}

Ninjutsu:6

Genjutsu:7

Taijutsu: 8

Kenjutsu:8

Fuinjutsu:6

Creativity: 7

leadership: Unknown

Teamwork:9 (especially with Naruto and Mia)

Info: Currently not known by most of the of elemental nations, this will change quickly however.

Bounties: 0-Konoha,0-Iwa,0-Kumo,0-Kiri,0-Suna (Encompasses all Five great nations)

I know im missing a few people, please tell me which so i can get their files up on here. Yay! im slowly getting the hang of being a writer lol. my chapters are slowly becoming longer and longer to! Please review :3 it helps with story development as well as prizes for certain milestones achieved!

So in this one the girls are introduced, keep in mind, its slightly rushed on purpose cause im a rushy type person who details it later on(its a fault i cant help it)

There's alot thats gonna happen within the next few chapters so i apologize but expect big paragraphs, unlike the normal style usually seen here. its FOR THE PLOT lol can't be helped. Once again grats to NaruInoFTW for being the FIRST reviewer to the story and be sure that you talk to me in some way so we can discuss your prize :3 Izalith-OUT.