Welcome, ladies and gentlemen, Silver here. Anyway, sorry for not updating in quite a while, but something called life got in the way. I have a lot of bad news.
I will be discontinuing all stories. There are many reasons. The first being I have no motivation at all at the thought of doing a new chapter, this is because I don't like how the stories turned out to be.
A Different History was too… awkward I guess. The dialogue was too plain. They didn't go well with the character personality and they didn't really show much of the tone of the character. The conversations were also very choppy making it even more awkward. There was barely any humor in the conversations, so the tension was very tense.
Then there as the details, I over did the character weapons and outfit. There was description yes, but it was… blurry. Even thou I designed the Oc myself, I could've completely imagine how the Oc is fully without forgetting a detail or realizing I missed a detail that was supposed to be in the chapter. If I had went back and fixed it would've thrown the plot off course for a little bit.
The next story is God of Capturing Hearts. It was very popular and the best one out of all the fanfics I had written. However, I was also one of my worse written ones. While it was great seeing Jaune flirting, after all most of us have Jaune as our favorite character (Especially me) and would've love it if Jaune was paired with Pyrrha, Ruby or Weiss, the lines Jaune says are too cheesy. Some of you actually like this, but to me I made him too much of a playboy. And by that I mean the ones that will screw a girl and will then dump her right after just because he's going to be screwing another girl. What I imagine Jaune to be when I first wrote this story was a guy who is a flirt like Yang, but less of a pervert, and will be spouting out 'cheesy lines and wise words.' I also had a small image of Jaune being awesome and strong unlike when he was in the show. However, the story did not turn out like that at all.
Then there was the dialogue again. The conversations was very choppy once more and the as I've stated before, Jaune's lines were more of a playboy's. Not only that, but while the lines matched what the characters would say, it didn't really fit, like a puzzle piece that didn't complete the puzzle. There were missing elements such as less intense blushing and anticipation. I made then all blush too much and the anticipation too high. There was also the fact the romance was messed up. It was going too fast and it felt… fake, I guess.
There were other reasons for me to discontinue the stories. While I did think of the plot, I didn't like how they turned out. I will admit I did rush the chapters because I felt that I was taking too long. Also I was feeling lazy during those times. I wanted to get the chapters over with so I didn't even look back at it once I did finish the chapters.
However there is also good news. One of the good news being that I'm going to be doing a Left 4 Dead story and possibly a Minecraft one at the same time too, but the Left 4 Dead one will come first.
I hope you all will understand this. I am extremely sorry to those who have wanted to continue reading it, but I honestly felt I should've ended them. However, if you guys want, you can use the plot and write your own version of them. Once again I'm extremely sorry. This is Silver and I'll be back next time.