Okay guys. So I (finally) realized that Dovahhkeiin is a fictional term from Skyrim. *bumps head* derp.
So I'm fixing that. Honestly though, I felt like this story could have been written a lot better, so that's what I'm doing. Rewriting. I'll keep this version up for a little while, but then I plan on deleting it. The new version is already up. It's called 'Child Of Fire' if you'd like to go check it out.
Anyway, so sorry for my shitty writing (well, I felt like the characterization was more shitty than the writing, but either way it wasn't very good) Hopefully Child Of Fire will be better.
Later dudes!
-Cobalt