Hello Hello! Coltam here for a new thing. I'm thinking that every five chapters I will respond to the reviews. This segment may be longer or shorter depending on the amount of reviews I get So without further adeu lets get this started


striker072: Why does Yang hate Ruby?

Well striker I'm thinking ill let Yang answer to that. Yang?

Yang: Why would I give that away when you could read the story to find out.

Coltam: Yang be nice for the fans please…

Yang: fiiine


RaterRSuperStar87: Gosh poor Ruby can not catch a break she is going to team up with two people that hate her.

Coltam: well that is what it looks like is going to happen but I'm not sure how I'm going to handle it but the current plan is cannon teams, mainly to make Ruby's life harder

Ruby: you are a meanie you better give me cookies for this…

Coltam: okay Ruby you will get cookies but only ten a day unless the fans give you more.

Ruby: ookayyy~


Black Rabbit 17: I have to say I really liked this chapter and look forward to the next but seriously it's stories like this that make me bipolar towards Weiss I hate her in some and love her in others l. (You've made me hate her in this one good job portraying the arrogant bitch) but I'll always love kitty cat :3 also why did Yang attack Ruby I really think you're trying to kill her. Looking forward to the next chapter good luck with your job

Coltam: Not only am I making Weiss an arrogant bitch, but I am also turning up her racism. Normaly (according to various wikis) Weiss is not actually racist but just vary distrustful of the faunus. In this story she is an arrogant racist bitch. Also Ruby wont die (yet…) because she is too adorable and important to die.

Krona: when I rive id like to beat some sense into that Weiss person.

Coltam: not allowed

Krona: Damn.


knight7572: i think that ruby in this story is suffering from the effects being alone for a long period of time

Coltam: read over the flash back and that should give you a more clear idea of what she is suffering from, not that I can do well in writing things like that but I try.


Well folks thats all of the responses I can make for now. Just because I didnt respond to your review doesnt mean I didnt see it, It just means that I couldent think of a good way to respond to it.

Ruby: *munch, munch, munch * I gots a cookie :3

Coltam: and a shoutout to the people who have been here the whole time (I'm going off of the fact that I've seen their names multiple times in the reviews) so a big thanks to, EvilStorm101, Black Rabbit 17, And RaterRSuperStar87.

Until next time, Freelancer Coltam Krona Makara signing off