Hi there, sorry for not updating for a year. I've never really thought of continuing this as !Fem Luffy started to disgust me, the more fictions I've read of it the more I've felt the urge to slam everyone's head in water and drown them whenever they wrote a story about female Luffy; because each and every story must have some sort of spiralling such as this..
Big Boobs, Cute Face, Cute Voice, Alluring Scent, Everyone Falls In Love With Her, Everyone Flirts With Her, but when she puts back her bandages everything changes, even her voice and "alluring scent". I honestly cannot understand, it's as if you're saying if someone puts on transparent glasses they'd look ugly, if they took them off; they'd look like the most beautiful women. Which is such a cliche that happens both in Anime and Drama worlds.
For that, I had suggested to twist this story to one of the most overused cliches, it's dark and I don't think many of you would like it, it's not rape so don't get your hopes down.. or up, whatever floats your boat.
Anyways, rant over. I've never been up to putting disclaimer seeing as most of you are smart to know what I'm talking about, but since I still wanna do it; this is the last time I'd put it if I didn't have an Authors Note that popped up at the beginning of a chapter. Anyways, have fun and and don't forget to review! :)
Disclaimer: One Piece does not belong to me, it belongs to Eiichiro Oda. This is purely work of fiction.
This is a work of fiction. Any names or characters, businesses or places, events or incidents, are fictitious. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.
WARNING: OOC !Fem Luffy
"Coby, are you done yet?" I asked Coby, who was mopping the wooden floor above the stairs with a dirty looking rag, it seemed as if it hadn't been cleaned in a long time. It would be futile for Coby to continue mopping, he needs to go and splash the rug in water, I knew this; seeing as what the servants had always done.
Coby hadn't answered me, but with a determined look on his face; he continued mopping. I was about to suggest to him what I thought about the mop, but a fat large woman had came. She seemed like the one torturing Coby because his face was full of fear the moment she called out to him. He ran to her and knelt down,
"Coby!" she yelled once more, he trembled; causing her to widen her smirk.
"Y-yes, Alvida-sama?" Coby replied, I could see him shaking and trembling. A sudden bloodlust had thrived inside of my eyes, no one had noticed when I walked forth to Coby, only when I arrived the woman looked back at me. My face was hidden behind my straw hat, and neither I; had known what I had looked like.
"Who's the lanky looking boy, hmm?"
"I-I, I have no idea about who he is A-Alvida-sama, I will get rid of him quickly!" Coby ushered to me, he grabbed my arm; but I was frozen on my spot. He looked at me frightened, a hint of mischievousness glazed his eyes. He tried to drag me; but couldn't. Each time he tried, it seemed his grip weakened purposely, I had felt it. He wanted to escape this place, this hell. Just like I wanted to escape mine, and so; I would help him.
"Men, take care of him," she pointed at me, and then glared at Coby, "you weak pathetic little thing."
As soon as I heard that, I was scared. Trembling; to the point that I was internally shaking. I hadn't known I had such a huge bloodlust and craving for guts and fighting, because at that sole moment; I stretched both of my arms widely behind me, ignoring the shocked faces of the crew, and dug out her beating organ.
My hand was bloodied, splats of blood laid down as if it was another part of me on my face. My face, the fear I had been hiding; finally revealed itself. As I took in, I killed someone. I'm not someone who'd kill another, I beaten people but never have I ever killed anyone. It was almost like a vow broken,
I wanted to cry. I wanted to tear up, I really wanted to. The tears couldn't bring themselves forth, there was a monster inside of me. And whatever it wanted, it was blood. It wanted something, and I knew exactly what it wanted. It seemed as if I had one foot in the grave, because this thing inside of my mind, was insane.
I immediately took thought of where I was, and what I was doing; and immediately returned back to my facade. Dropping the heart on the ground,
"Ehehe, I guess I was too strong." I muttered nervously, I hadn't dared look at the frightened face of Coby, because I knew he was scared like me. But I was so wrong as I felt small arms warp around me, I looked down and saw Coby's pink hair, I ruffled his hair and grinned my toothy grin as I always did.
"You did it, Luffy! You beaten the ugliest wench in the ocean!"
I smiled, knowing he was free from her now, I avoided him looking at her dead body as we strutted to a ship. All the other men were too scared to try to fight me, knowing I was a devil-fruit user, they were scared. It wasn't like that in the Grandline, I hoped. As we landed a very small boat, Coby rowed it as he bragged to me about how strong I was. He hadn't mentioned the grey subject, it seemed like he wanted to hide it as me. I was never a good judge of character.
I stayed for about an hour, sleeping on the mini ship, till I was startled awake by Coby who was shaking me while he pointed to something that was foggy from here. I woke up, and turned to look at what he was pointing; gleam and excitement obvious in my eyes as I pointed for him to land there.
"Yosh!"
When we had arrived at at the island, it seemed empty at first. It was till we arrived at a bar to catch some supplements for our journey; and also to recruit a crew, knowing that Coby didn't want to become a pirate, but a marine. I was saddened by this fact, but brushed it off. I struggled to hear rumours about what happened, and how there was a Marine base that was located nearby this town.
The bells had rung,
"Luffy, I heard they're keeping the pirate hunter in the Marines' base." Coby had told me, I already knew this fact; hearing the rumours, but me wanting to be a normal boy, feigned ignorance and swallowed my meat as I looked at Coby in excitement.
"Woah, how cool! Maybe we can recruit him with us!" Coby noticed the us, and cringed a little; knowing he wouldn't stay with us anymore.
"But Luffy! The guy is a demon, his name is Corona Zoro, he hunts pirates like you!"
I looked at Coby with distaste in my eyes, underlining the word 'you'. I did feel a bit anger reside inside of me, but I didn't do anything about it. I didn't tell Coby anything about it; but maybe he also felt it. We both brushed it off as we walked around Town looking for him. Coby was still scared though, he didn't want me to meet him.
"Luffy, I'm sure they're keeping him in a super tight security locked base with no windows or doors!"
I climbed up to a wall, and upon hearing Coby saying that. I almost smirked in amusement; this must be the guy. I pointed to Coby,
"Are you sure? Because.. I think this is him."
I pulled Coby in my arm, he held on tightly as I landed him above the walls, he gasped and looked terrified as the pirate, he ran away muttering about how the guy will kill us. I just laughed and landed on the ground, looking up to see a bloodied man with green hair and a white tattered shirt. He didn't look scary as I thought he would, hearing the word "demon" really stirred me up, wanting to know if the man really had red horns. I chuckled at my thoughts only to get a glare from the man who had heard me.
This man looked like a guy I had bumped into just earlier, he didn't seem as he knew me.
"Hey, join my crew." I grinned at the man in front of me.
"Why should I join a pest like you, what can you do?" He said coldly, I did feel a little depressed at his words but didn't mind it as I walked up to him.
In all cases, I might quit this and make a Time Travel fiction; I really hate most of the Time Travel fictions, as the involve Luffy telling almost everyone about his Haki and how he will train them, and revealing all the future secrets, which NO ONE does in a time travel story.
P.S: I deleted Chapter 4 and made Chapter 3 and 4 into one, with no humour or comedic scenes. Such as, when Luffy thought that Zoro was a tree.
