Here is the newly revamped second chapter!
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"This temple is really irritating," A boy clad in blue was currently thinking as he swam through the many levels of the Water Temple. This was the legendary Hero of Time, also know as the boy from the forest, and Fairy boy, and Grasshopper. He had been a young boy with no fairy, and not able to fit in, when his journey began. Until one day, the guardian of the forest got a parasite. Link had tried to save him, but was a little too late, the Deku Tree, also the guardian, told him to go to the princess of Hyrule.
Princess Zelda, who is now missing, asked him to collect three jewels, given to the different races, to take the Master Sword, and defeat Ganondorf, who was planning to take Hyrule for himself. When he finally collected them he went back to Hyrule castle, only to find Princess Zelda running for her life, she has not been seen since. She threw an ocarina towards me, with a spell on it, telling me what to do.
Said ocarina, was the key to opening to door of Time, let me grab the Master Sword. Unfortunately, with my ten year old body, I was unable to wield it. So the sword put me in a seven year slumber, thus making me a ten year old in a teen's body. When I woke up, I was put on another quest, with the same agenda, stop Ganondorf.
I had run through catacombs, chasing a ghost. Purified the old mansion in the Lost Woods, thus freeing Saria's sage abilities. Made my way through the depths of a volcano, freeing the trapped gorons and I had to kill a dragon. Now this time, I was trying to find Ruto again. She found me, and now she's disappeared. I really hate this temple. Also I can't make it any further without finding the longer hookshot, according to Navi.
"Is this the door?" Taking one of the many keys I found, I held one up with a master sword on it. Slowly raising up my hand to turn the key. I opened the door coming into a seemingly endless room, with mist all around, shallow water around my feet, and a lone island with a tree in the center.
Once fully inside the room, I heard the door slam behind me.
"Aww, great! The doors just had to lock didn't it. And considering how this room is so bizarre it's probably the room where the hook shot is guarded," I thought to myself.
"Hey! Over here!" Navi shouted, while heading towards the other side of the room. I nodded, following her over to a door, which was locked. "It's locked, Link." Once again Navi stated the obvious. I heard splashing behind me, so I quickly turned to see a shadow racing towards the door I just came in. "I don't think we're alone in here," Navi said distressed.
I put my finger up to my lips to signal her to be quiet. I stalked over to the figure as silently as I could, taking out my sword while I did. I saw the figure trying to pry open the bars that had dropped over the door. He, I saw that it was male, was about the same height as me, apparently shared the same fashion, only darker, had black hair, and pale skin.
I put my sword up to his neck, "Turn around, slowly." The male turned around, like I asked. Once I saw his face, we both had gasped. He looked exactly like me, like… Like he was my shadow. He even had tints, of blonde in his hair, and blue in his red eyes. We made eye contact, and he seemed a bit dizzy saying, "I know those eyes." Then he fainted. I reacted instinctively, catching my twin before he hit the ground.
Putting away my sword, and picking the man up in my arms, I carried him over the the island I had seen earlier. "Link, are you sure this is a good idea?" Navi asked flying overhead. Laying the man down, I cradled his head in my lap. I looked around, making sure there wasn't anyone else I may have missed. I nodded my head to Navi's question, and gestured for her to take a nap in my hat. As she flew in and got comfy, my eyes were drawn to the man sleeping in my lap. I felt a blush rising to my cheeks, as he snuggled in deeper.
"Hmm. I wonder what his name is?" Feeling slightly sluggish myself, with the temple as maze like as it was. I let myself fall asleep, but still staying aware for anything unusual.
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