Alright, I usually don't do these author's note chapter thingies, but u know what, fuck it. I kinda need to make this, to give you guys some answers and also I need your input in this. Please read this and review your opinion if you want this story continued, please. This isn't me being a thirsty bitch, I legitimately need your input so I won't end up doing anything you guys won't like.
Okay so there's a reason why I haven't been updating this in a while, many reasons actually, but there's one main reason why.
I don't like where this story is going.
The plot is a fucking mess and doesn't make any sense, there's so much characters to the point where I feel suffocated just thinking about them, I'm not even sure what the villains' motives are lmao.
And so, after some thinking, I decided that this may need a rewrite. (hopefully this won't end up like fall for you ahah)
So for the plot, I think it will remain roughly the same, only it hopefully won't be as convoluted and confusing as I made it out to be.
Okay so this is where I need all of your input: the Characters
As I said, there's too many characters. I can't write about all of them, and the story feels too crowded. So, we'll have to get rid of some of them.
Truthfully, I don't really have any attachments to any of them. But some of you might have. So, review the characters you like and don't want to go, and also the characters you don't particularly care for and don't mind them being gone.
Here are my thoughts:
-Hansel is an okay character, maybe a bit annoying but his flaws are valid so I'll probably keep him. Just going to change his name or something
-Liz is an okay character as well, maybe a bit bland but I think she's a solid, naive, down to earth character that can act as a straight man to everyone else's shenanigans. perfect for a main character. so I'll probably keep her as well.
-Britany...I don't like her. Her character is somewhat solid, but there's just something I don't like about her. Maybe it's just her name or her appearance but I'm just not satisfied with her as a character. I may keep her, I may not. Let's see.
-Stiles. I don't like him either for the same reasons as Britnay. He's an interesting character, sure, but there's just something about him that I don't like. I'll have to think about it more.
-Emma- She's okay. I may get rid of her because she doesn't have that much impact in the story anyway.
-Leon I'm keeping him. Perhaps I'll redesign him and quirk his personality a bit but Leon's definitely staying
-Maxine- I want to keep her as well, but like Leon, I'll have to redesign her and change her personality a bit. Also her name. Going to change her name.
-Rhys- Thinking of getting rid of him since I don't really have anything for him so he's basically dead weight for me this whole time simply because I wanted a MxR son lmao
-Cel- thinking of getting rid of her. As interesting a character she is along with her dynamic with Cal, I'm really not feeling her :/ and as someone who stans most of my TxT kid oc's that isn't good at all.
-Cal- if I'm thinking of getting rid of Cel, then you bet your ass I'm thinking of doing the same for Cal. Same reasons.
-Lana- I may get rid of her too. I don't know I just don't like her :/
-Kai- Thinking of keeping him. Because even if he hasn't appeared much, he's actually much more fleshed out than most characters lmao
I'm thinking of at least a maximum of 8 kids. 4 daughters and 4 sons, like in ffy. So we'll have to get rid of 4 characters. And my verdict so far is to get rid of: Emma, Cel and Cal, Rhys, and Lana. Which is kinda too much but these are just my thoughts. Your thoughts matter, too.
So, i repeat. Comment the characters you want to stay (and maybe say why), and comment the ones you don't like or particularly care for. It'll help me out lots. thank
Okay, now that that's out of the way, let's go to the villains. Honestly I think they're going to stay roughly the same save for name and appearance changes. Maybe their roles will change too idk
I think that's all I'm planning to say, actually.
OH also. I noticed someone pm'ed me back at August about this story. Honestly? I'm sorry for not responding to you lmao, I lost access to my emails and I barely ever check this site anymore. So sorry.
I don't recommend any of you to message me here at all because there's a 80% chance I won't respond. You can message at Tumblr (meirisuu . tumblr . com), or hecc, even Winx amino if you're there. I'm not active there anymore but there's a higher chance of me responding there than here lmao.
Okay so that's it for not so uh. see ya