Spaz:Here isthe rewritten chap 9
"What is your idea?" Brandie asked.
"Part one is that we have Rei, Max, and Kai has to leave so they do not get hurt." Tommy said.
"What, they have to stay!!"Carrie whined.
"She has a point."Sammie said.
"No. They have to leave." Tommy said.
"But, we can help." Kai said.
"He's right." Brandie said.
"He's wrong." Tyson said.
"How?" Tommy asked.
"They are my friends. They have always been there for me. They helped out last time. Carrie and Sammie both trust them. They have bitbeast. They are strong and they are not going to leave in the middle of a fight." Tyson said.
"Whatever." Brandie said.
"So are we leaving or staying?" Max asked.
"We want to help." Rei said.
"Maybe they should stay." Carrie said.
"Listen you little brat, they need to leave." Tommy said.
"Hey never call her a brat or I will kill you!" Tyson said.
Tyson got out of bed and walked over to Tommy's bed. Tommy was sitting up in bed when Tyson SMACK hit him in the head.
"What the hell." Brandie said as Carrie, Rei, Max, and Sammie laughed. While Kai just smirked.
"He deserved it." Tyson said as he walked back to his bed.
"Tyson, I hope you get yourself kidnapped." Brandie said.
"Grow-up." Carrie said.
At that time Sammie and Kai walked out of the room.
"I am sick of this." Sammie said.
"Hey whats that." Kai said pointing to the window.
Sammie walked over and opened the window to see a piece of paper. She picked up to paper and walked pick to the room.
"Loser."
"Ass."
"Shut the fuck up!" Sammie yelled.
"Look what we found." Sammie said holding up the paper.
"Whats it say?" Rei asked.
"It reads:
Dear Dragon Powers,
We well see if you make it no matter where you hide." Kai read.
"Oh. No." Max said.
"See. They have to leave so they are safe." Tommy said.
" Tommy, you need to just stop, they are not going to leave." Tyson said.
"They have to leave." Tommy said.
"They stay."Brandie said.
"Yes!" Carrie said.
"Still they need to leave." Tommy said.
"They have to stay who knows when we well need back-up and just think they could be used as bait." Brandie said.
"Could you guys leave I'm tired." Tommy said.
Everyone left.
"Tommy can I ask you something." Tyson asked.
"What is it?" Tommy asked.
"Are you going to tell everyone about your twin?" Tyson asked.
"How did you know that?" Tommy asked.
"I heard your twin runaway and I heard that she was mad because your where a dragon power and not her." Tyson said.
"Yeah. She is evil and out to get us with Ken." Tommy said.
Spaz: hope you liked it