Spaz: This is the rewritten chap 10
" I wonder what we are going to do?" Carrie asked.
"Who knows, but why does Tommy hate us?" Max asked.
"He is just not ready to work with you guys." Brandie said.
Outside the cabin
"What's our plane of attack?" Ken asked.
"Easy. Kill them." The girl said with short black hair jeans and a orange shirt with a red dragon on it.
"Come out and fight!" Ken yelled.
Kai, Max, Rei, Sammie,Carrie,and Brandie ran out of the cabin.
"Oh. Great." Sammie said.
"Give us your blades and no one well get hurt." The girl said.
"No way." Brandie said.
"Whats--- Maddie!" Tommy said as he and Tyson walk outside.
"Tommy." Maddie said.
"So, now that we all know each other give us your blades." Ken said.
"No bastrad." Brandie said.
"Fine we shall have a match to deiced." Maddie said.
"Where and when." Tyson said.
"Tommrrow Oak Creek Lake." Ken said.
"Fine." Brandie said, as Ken and Maddie walked away.
"How do you know her."Carrie said.
"She is my twin." Tommy said.
"She is evil. Fuck what do we do know." Sammie said.
"Here is some bad news about she is supposed to help us get the Dragon Pendent." Tommy said.
"How?" Rei asked.
"She knows where it is." Tommy said.
"Lets go inside." Sammie said.
"Rei." Brandie said.
"Yes." He said as everyone was inside.
"I would like it if you would come tommrrow." Brandie said.
"Of course I will come." Rei said.
The two just stood there. Rei walked over to Brandie pulled her close and gave her a very passionate kiss.
"You are a great kisser." Brandie said.
"I love you." Rei said.
"No you don't." Brandie said.
"But I do love you." Rei said.
Brandie started to cry.
"I cant have you die."Brandie said.
"I wont." Rei said.
"You promise?" Brandie asked looking into hi eyes.
"I promise." Rei said.
Spaz" all done for this chap