New and Improved Chapter Five, a gravitation fanfic

Hey! Sorry about the long wait… I hope this chapter will make it up to you..

The Song is: Counting on me

The Band is: Korn

I wanted to say thank you to kito who made me laugh by squealing like a Japanese school girl and yes I agree.

And I had a question about Shuichi's hair. It's Black but the ends are pink.

Now on with the story

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Chapter Five

Shuichi was wearing on of those microphones that went in you year then came around to the front of your mouth so you could sing put use both hands.

"This song was written by me with the help of my best friend and Bad Luck's guitarist Hiro. It's for a guy I loved and love still but he treated me like shit. I want to forgive him but he'll have to make it up to me big time," Shuichi declared as the crowed went cheered loudly.

Shuichi started singing in a hot low voice.

Why can't you ever back down?
Why can't you just shut your face?
Oh god the feelings I feel
Would get me thrown in a cage

Shuichi started swinging his arms up in the air.

You're the one who's always screaming at me
I'm the one that keeps your lives so care free
What the fuck more do you want me to be?
Why must you do this to me?

Shuichi's arms came down and he started swaying back and forth. Then from the middle of the stage Hiro came up with the same microphone as Shuichi and sang/screamed.

Run away, I can't see
Lead the way, make them pay

Then Shuichi came up from behind him and continued singing.

Counting, on me.
Always hoping I'll be
There for all of your problems
and in turn you're never there for me
You sucked the life out of me
You hate everything you see
I can't take this anymore
I always stay when I should leave

Shuichi hands started running through his hair, across his chest, and rested down on his stomach.

You see the pain in my face
While you keep putting me down
Inside the rage starts to build
You push me I won't go down
You're the one who's always screaming at me
I'm the one that keeps your lives so care free
What the fuck more do you want me to be?
Why must you do this to me?

Shuichi took his hands off his stomach and started swaying again. Then he brought his hands up and snapped to the beat. Then Hiro screamed loudly.

Run away, I can't see
Lead the way, make them pay

Everyone in the audience was kind of shocked to see that Hiro wasn't that bad at singing. Shuichi then continued.

Then Hiro started whispering huskily into the microphone.

Could it really be the day, today?
Could this really make the problems go away?
I'm going to hurt just not in time

Shuichi started screaming as Hiro kept up the hot whispering. (A.N. Shuichi is screaming right now and Hiro is whispering the other stuff)

Right now!
- I take in all I can now
Right Now!
- You've torn us all part
Right Now!
- There is nothing you can do to stop me
Right now

Then Shuichi and Hiro got on the front of the stage and started screaming at each other. Shuichi screamed right as Hiro screamed now.

RIGHT! NOW!

RRIIGGGHHTT!

Shuichi took charge of the next couple of lines of the song.

Counting, on me.
Always hoping I'll be
There for all of your problems
and in turn you're never there for me

Then Hiro sang.

You sucked the life out of me
You hate everything you see
I can't take this anymore
I always stay when I should leave

Then for the last verse Hiro and Shuichi sang together.

The crowed was stunned to say the least. They didn't know that Shuichi and Hiro sounded that good together. They didn't even know that Hiro was good at singing.

Then after getting over their shock they started cheering insanely.

Yuki was so pleased with Shuichi's first announcement! That meant that he actually had a chance at getting his lover back and a chance is all that he needed.

Yuki had to give a smirk. Shuichi had most definitely gotten better at righting lyrics than he had when they first met.

Then Shuichi started speaking, "This song I wrote when I was hyper and in a perverted state of thought, so, if there are any little children in here tonight I suggest you close there ears." Shuichi smiled happily.

Yuki grinned. He knew that this… was definitely ganna be a good night.

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Welp I hope you liked it!

I thought that the song fit perfectly with how Yuki treats Shuichi.

Also I've always thought that Hiro would be a good singer and plus he looks like a good singer if I do say so myself.

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