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Long Winded
BlackSnowPetals
I've read the manga, so something's I take from the manga.
Clan Revealed
Nutori looked up then around.
"Zabuza-san…the one eyed pest is here…the second is about 20 meters back." she said simply. Zabuza just shrugged carelessly. "I get permission to take her?" asked Nutori. She didn't even need a nod from Zabuza, she was already rushing past Kakashi. Right when Nutori had ran past Kakashi, she was pushed hard into the ground, Naki with her scythe out, hammering into Nutori's Kunai, her left eye opened slightly. Zabuza laughed.
"No one can beat Nutori when it comes to strength." Said Zabuza. Kakashi glanced at Naki, worry in his eyes. Naki's pushed hard and slid away, landing a few feet away.
"Are you really blind?" asked Nutori, her head cocked curiously to the left. Naki sighed.
"I didn't want my Bloodline limit shown when it wasn't full mastered yet…but…" she shrugged. "How can I win?" she shrugged again and her left eye burst open. Nutori stepped back in surprise. What glared at her …was one brown right eye… and one pure black, gold iris…sliver slit eye. Nutori suddenly blinked at her then laughed.
"What can one eye of a Doujutsu do?" asked Nutori.
"My Doujutsu is different, I only need half of it to beat you…" said Naki, reading her stance.
"…that's a lie…she can't use her Doujutsu fully or the after affects would damage her horribly and wouldn't be ready for another fight." Thought Kakashi to himself. Nutori charged, she aimed to shoot a kunai at Naki but to her surprise a kunai flew at her and embedded in her leg, Naki her head was only turned to the left slightly.
"Here's a lesson on my Doujutsu, When both eyes are activated, all of my clan abilities are activated, when I only have one eye, then only that ability can be used. Have you figured out what ability that is though?" asked Naki. Nutori ran through handseals.
"I'll find out!" shouted Nutori. She stomped her foot in the puddle of water after finishing handseal's and a large amount of needles came at her. Naki ran through different handseal's and a large amount of water shot up, like a shield.
"Water element, water wall." Said Naki simply.
"…it can't copy jutsu…so what can it do?" asked Nutori, charging again, her fist flying at Naki. Naki, using her palms moved Nutori's fist away easily and kicked her in the stomach. Naki laughed sheepishly, her scythe back on her back.
"weellll…here's a hint. You can't hit me unless you're faster then me." Said Naki, getting into a good reflex stance. "…and to be faster then me, you must have tried to perfect it your whole life like I did." Said Naki. Nutori blinked in surprise.
"…you're from the Hekimetsuki clan…aren't you?" asked Nutori.
"Exactly. My families cursed eye is either Blind, or holds the gold silver slit eye, which allows me to read and come up with counter movements." said Naki. Nutori suddenly grinned cockily.
"…yes…but the after effects are horrible I heard…" said Nutori. "It's more of curse then a Bloodline limit."
"I finish it fast, no it's not." Said Naki, disappearing and reappearing behind Nutori. "and in this manner, it will take me 3 minutes." Said Naki. Nutori turned to punch but Naki's hands blocked it and she twisted it causing Nutori to fall backward. Naki backed up and pulled a shuriken out, aiming and firing it. Nutori dodged barley then got kneed in the face. Naki smiled brightly. What she didn't notice is she wandered from her allies. She strayed her eyes to look at a bunch of ice mirrors and screaming about idiots. Naki sighed then noticed the punch coming at her; she bent down then flipped up quickly and banged heads with Nutori purposely. Naki then noticed how long Nutori had been dragging it. "We've been fighting for a short time but for how short, the consequences are getting worse…" "Forgive me, but this needs to end." Said Naki, charging, grabbing Nutori's feet, knocking her down. Naki pulled her scythe out, and with great speed and accuracy, she cut at the Achilles tendon in Nutori's legs. Nutori dodged the other shot to her right foot. She screamed in pain. "I cannot kill, for I don't stain my hands. But…I will not allow you to hurt my allies." Her black eye glared at Nutori. Nutori got up slowly. Naki disappeared.
"Where are you!" shouted Nutori.
"…However…I do not fear…to kill if I must!" Naki appeared beside Nutori, her scythe at her throat. Naki stuck her scythe just to gently slice Nutori, as a warning.
"Retreat now and death won't come to you." Said Naki. Then…she felt powerful…evil Chakra. Naki immediately shut her left eye, canceling her bloodline limit. She then looked to Nutori who punched her in the face, sending Naki sliding across the cold, puddle filled bridge. Naki glared.
"Why did you return your jutsu?" asked Nutori, balancing on one foot. "Because now…you're dead!" shouted Nutori. Naki looked around…as if confused. She stood up and barley dodged Nutori's fist. She kicked out like a mule, knocking Nutori away.
"I feared this…whoever's strong Chakra that is…would make me go nuts…but now that my Bloodline limit is canceled…my vision is blurred…." Naki looked around. "Nutori…It's time you give up." Said Naki. Nutori, barley standing, looked at her in confusing, not that Naki could see it though. Naki ran through handseals. "Lightening rod Jutsu." Her hands suddenly had sparks shooting out of them randomly, not very far though, only about a Centimeter. Naki charged and slammed her hands down on the ground, jumping out of the puddle. Nutori, shouted in pain, the electricity traveling to her. Naki then heard a bang noise, indicating Nutori had fallen to the ground. Naki turned her blurred vision to where Kakashi was then sighed. "My bloodline limit eats my Chakra thin!" thought Naki, looking around. "who's Chakra was that foul…" she walked foreword. A hand stopped her. She looked a saw a blurry face, half blue half gray. "May I ask who is touching me…?" asked Naki. She then recognized the lazy eyes. "Sorry Kakashi-sensei. You should know my Bloodline limit right?" asked Naki.
"Ya…" he replied looking over in a different direction.
"What's wrong?" asked Naki. She looked over to the place he was looking to. …a pink…ish red…blob was close to a blue…blob. Naki sighed. "What I wouldn't do for a pair of glasses right now…" she whispered to herself. She walked over and sat next to…the pink thing. "Sakura-san…right?" asked Naki. Sakura looked at Naki and noticed her eyes looked…distracted. Naki looked closer. "Yep. Why are you crying?" asked Naki.
"Sa…Sasuke…Sasuke-kun is…" said Sakura brokenly, pointing to the boy. Naki looked at him closely. Her eye widened in surprise.
"…Sasuke-san…?" asked Naki, shaking him lightly. She then placed her cold fingers to his neck, checking his pulse. She gave a sigh of relief. "Sakura-san, he's alive…barley, but alive." Said Naki. She stood up and looked around for the jumpy blonde. "Naruto-san!" shouted Naki randomly.
"Hey Hey!" came an annoyed voice. Her attention turned to a bunch of blurry blobs. …One really short blob caught her attention, which came over and kicked a something on the ground. Naki squinted her eyes. "That…boy…he looks like that masked boy." Thought Naki to herself. Naki looked to Sakura. "…Sakura-san …can…can…you…can you…hel…p…never mind…" muttered Naki, looking away. Sakura looked to her curiously, now knowing Sasuke would be okay. "…I was just…" muttered Naki. Sakura put two and two together.
"Well, Gato is here and he kicked Haku, which is making Zabuza mad." Said Sakura. Naki looked at her in surprise. Sakura laughed lightly. "Naki, I saw you open your eye and how you looked unfocused." Said Sakura. Naki laughed sheepishly.
"Thanks Sakura-san." Said Naki. Naki turned her attention back to the blobs. She then noticed an orange blob.
"Naruto is next to Zabuza…." Said Sakura. "Naruto gave him a Kunai knife?!" thought Sakura. She saw Zabuza charge, cutting them all down to pieces, chasing a small blob. Naki whistled.
"Okay I saw that one!" said Naki. She turned her head away, Gato's head flying off. Sasuke started to get up. Naki turned to him. "Sasuke-san your awake! I'm glad you escaped death." Said Naki, squatting next to him.
"What do you mean 'escape death!'?" asked Sakura.
"…well when your almost dead…it's hard to tell pulse…sooooo…I lied to make you feel better." Said Naki sheepishly. Sakura glared at her.
"Naruto! Sasuke-kun's alive!" shouted Sakura. Naki smiled and started walking toward the blonde. She stopped when she heard angry slamming of a butt of a sword.
"You guys are feeling a bit too safe!" shouted one of Gato's many guards. "Now that our money bag is dead! We have no choice but to kill you!" they shouted, angry war cries to attack. An arrow appeared in front of them and Naki turned, right behind Sakura and Sasuke (or what she presumed to be) were a bunch of people. Naki smiled more. Naruto grinned as the faces of the enemy turned to fear. Naruto then used Shadow clone jutsu, creating 5 of himself. Kakashi then did the same handsign. …Naki fell back in surprise. There were twice as many Kakashi's as the enemies army! She sat down and closed her other eye in an arc smile. The enemies ran for their lives and Naki looked at Kakashi, who went to Zabuza. Naki smiled more and opened her right eye then went to Sasuke.
"Sasuke-san. I need to take those needles out." said Naki. Sasuke looked at her funny as she wandered to Tazuna instead, who was wearing blue too. She looked up. "…wow…Sasuke you sure got taller." Said Naki.
"…umm…Naki…Sasuke-kun is over here." Said Sakura. Naki blinked then sighed and walked over to Sasuke.
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'TUG!!!'
"Would you stop that!" shouted an angry voice.
"It is not my fault I'm doing community service and pulling out the spikes in your body!" shouted Naki angrily. She was sitting behind Sasuke, who was partly Band-Aid full, his shirt on the side which Sakura was sowing. Naki sighed again. "Why did I decide to do this again?" asked Naki to Sakura.
"Because Kakashi sensei needs rest from using too much Chakra and Naruto doesn't know how." Said Sakura. Naki sighed. She pulled another needle roughly out of Sasuke's back. He glared at her, which she could now see, her vision back to normal.
"I know you told me to stop but…it's a pain in my butt when you're as stiff as a log!" said Naki. He tried his best to loosen up…which didn't work at all. Naki smiled softly. "Okay okay, I get it. You tried, that's all that matters." Said Naki, who pulled another out, much more gently. She then put another Band-Aid on that spot and sighed again. "…Sasuke-san I need to do the ones on your neck now…" she said slowly. Sasuke didn't move. "I'll take that as a 'go ahead'." Said Naki. She pulled one out and noticed him stiffen more. "…that sucks." She looked over the needles. She tapped her chin in thought. Tsunami came in, a large amount of bandages in her arms.
"How's it going?" she asked.
"Horrible! I can't figure out how to make this painless…" she glared at the needles. She then had an angry mark over her head. She grabbed four, 2 in between each finger. "I'm pulling the rest out!" she said. Sasuke twitched in his shoulder, then she tugged them all out at once quickly and a bit roughly. Sasuke twitched again. She stared at the needles, blood dripping from them. "oopsy…" she muttered. She sighed sheepishly then grabbed a bandage and started wrapping it around his neck. He opened his mouth but she shushed him with a stare. "You can't wrap it around yourself. You'd kill yourself." She glared then continued, putting a metal claw and clipping them together. "There we go!" she said simply. "You have to put band-aids on your legs though." Said Naki. "I will NOT do that." She said sternly, in a joking manner. She pat him on the back gently and got up, stretching. "Sakura-san, you Naruto-san, Sasuke-san and Kakashi-Sensei went to burry Zabuza right?" asked Naki.
"Ya, we buried that woman you fought too." said Nutori. Naki looked confused.
"Why would you burry her? She didn't die…did she?" asked Naki. Sakura sighed.
"She was killed by Gato's men while unconscious." Said Sakura sadly. Naki exhaled and opened the door.
"Where is Naruto-san?" asked Naki.
"He's in his room I think." Replied Sakura.
"Thanks. Tell me if you need help again Sasuke-san." Said Naki leaving. Sasuke didn't look too happy. Naki smirked at the look he gave the door then smiled normally, looking down the hall. She knocked on Naruto's door. "Naruto-san? It's me." Said Naki. No answer. She glanced at the door oddly then kicked it slightly. "Naruto-san!" said Naki again. …still no answer. Naki gave the door an annoyed glare. "You sound defying Door OPEN!" said Naki madly, kicking it much harder then she meant. 'BOOM' she blinked her right eye. "ooooohhhh nooo…Naki had an accident…" she stared at where her foot SHOULD be…which was actually in a hole through the door. She went to try and pull her foot out but then shouted in pain, apparently a piece of wood was stabbing into her foot. She then heard footsteps and she quickly walked closely to the door.
"What…are you doing?" asked Sakura, looking at her confused.
"umm…nothing!" said Naki.
"Why are you so close to the door then?" asked Sakura.
"Ummm…I…umm…am cleaning the door with my tongue!" said Naki. Sakura put her hands on her hips and walked beside Naki. She noticed the foot.
"…What did you do…?" asked Sakura.
"…umm…kicked the door?" said Naki sheepishly. Sakura sighed and bent down, she gave Naki's foot a quick tug…and She shouted in pain, her foot still wedged in the wall.
"…hmmm…" muttered Sakura.
"I think…my foot's stuck…" said Naki simply.
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Naruto rolled and fell off his bed, hearing screaming and shouting from the other side of his door.
"I've been stuck like this for 2 hours already!" complained Naki. Naruto got up and stared at the foot stuck in his wall, the ninja shoe black in color and a small blood trail dripping from the shoe. Naruto knocked on the door. "Naruto-san! You are in there!" said Naki in surprise.
"Naki-chan! What's wrong?" asked Naruto. "…and why is your foot through the door?" asked Naruto.
"…long story." Said Naki.
"Naruto don't move the door!" said Sakura. "Where is the piece of wood imbedded in Naki's foot?" asked Sakura. A sudden boom was heard and Naruto looked at another hole in the wall in surprise, a fist sticking out of it. "Where?" asked Sakura.
"…Sakura-san…your very strong." Said Naki frightfully.
"To the left…" said Naruto. Sakura's hand wandered left. "I mean right!" said Naruto. Sakura's hand went to the right. "Down and a little closer to the door!" said Naruto. Sakura's hand found a piece of thick wood, she quickly tore it out and Naki ripped her foot out of the hole and opened the door, smiling at Naruto.
"Thanks Naruto-san, Sakura-san." Said Naki. Naki sat down and her hand glowed blue, she ran two fingers over the wound on her foot and it healed easily.
"You're a medic-nin?" asked Sakura, surprised.
"No!" said Naki surprised. "My clan usually are Medic-nin's or ANBU. So I know a little bit of healing, but my Chakra doesn't work to good with it so I avoid healing large injuries." Said Naki simply. She got up. "Kakashi-sensei said around this time we will leave." Said Naki. Naruto looked at her curiously but started walking down the hall.
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For those of you who read Long Winded's stories would know she's good at giving a laugh or too. well she Beta's these for me and add's funny parts. She is also the creator for Dragon Tattoo and she also Created our Naki character. So if you know, she avoids Mary-sue's as much as she can. So everything has a Consequence. Just to make sure you understand.
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Also…you should know Long winded's love for creatures…
So what creature this time??? Guess….-grins- we will never know…atleast yet.
