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Chapter 2 is up please review micojam
Dreadnought clevax was getting repairs to his power plant by the chapter's techmarine when suddenly the techmarine asked a question "so great one how did you become a dreadnought"clevax let out his version of a sigh and said, "it was 121 years ago during the scouring of dellos 5. I was a marine in a tactical squad going on a average patrol when I and my squad was ambushed in some ruins by some kind of creature it had many arms and a massive gaping maw that was oozing some vile liquid it just stood there and we started to back off when, it suddenly charged at the sergeant and punched a hole right through him and it then killed off my brethren who tried in vain to defend themselves and then it came for me.
Its loud roar snapped me out of my horror I cast down my bolt gun and dived for my sergeants power sword. When I held it in my hands I felt the powerful energies travel down my fingers and down my arms and I screamed FOR THE EMPROR! as I traded blows with the beast. I felt its claws tear at my armour, it punctured my breastplate and tore my heart out and ate it in front of me I fell to my knees only my secondary heart keeping me alive. it rose up once more to strike me down but I made one final lunge and stabbed it in the mouth and it swallowed my wepon it fell and it imploded in an explosive wave of pure energy. Witch threw me against a wall, as I hit the floor I felt my life slip away from me but some time later a group of scouts found me because they had been sent to investigate the massive energy spike and they carried me back to base.
Once I was there the apothecaries started to attend to me and they came to the conclusion that I was to badly damaged to continue fighting for the emperor.They decided that I had to be laid to rest. One of them asked me if I wanted the emperors mercy I though my already disfigured lips said, "yes", the bolt was drawn back into the firing chamber. Goodbye brother he said as squeezed the trigger I closed my eyes and prepered myself, he was about to fire but a voice shouted WAIT! And the apothecaries turned and saw that it was no other but my company captain master Ardius. He explained that my suits camara recorder functions had recorded my battle with the anomaly so they recoved the data and saw the fotage they made the decision that I was worhty enough to be put into a dreadnought's sarcophagus armour and continue to fight for the emperor in this way that tech marine is how I became a dreadnought"….
So what do you think please review micojam