CHAPTER 3
DISCLAMER I DO NOT OWN THE RIGHTS TO WARHAMMER 40,000
"So you are saying the …the captain ardius saved your life", "yes, tech marine", the dreadnought replied, then he said "you can ask him yourself if you question my tale", "no great one, Anyway your in top condition" said the tecmarine , "good, I must report to the captain now in the prayer hall" replied the dreadnought , "goodbye great one" said the tecmarine "hey, just call me clevax I didn't want to be a dreadnought you know".
Clevax found captain ardias on his knees with two other marines who were veterans, he remembered to mind his tongue around them their status was higher than his. When ardias noticed his echoing footsteps he stood up and shouted "ancient clevax!", come here I have an important issue to discus with you" clevax approached the massive commander and ardius announced that he was to precipitate in the upcoming campaign to reclaim dasan 5 from the insurgents who threw down the emperors vow and slaughtered the garrison of conscripts and sacrificed them to the chaos gods "DASAN 5!" Clevax shouted "that's my home planet", "true" the veteran to the left said "but we have to take our approach tactically not run in shouting" the veteran to the right added "BUT MY FAMILY IS LIVING ON THAT PLANET!" clevax shouted "Shhhhh…." ardius said, " and you took the vows to cut yourself off from the outside world" quipped ardius "I know but it doesn't stop it hurting" clevax said.
"Shhhhhh……." said the captain once more "All right but how long do I have to prepare" clevax said in a much calmer voice, "five weeks approximately" the veteran on the right said , then captain ardias announced in an angry voice "now stop waving that bloody assault cannon around clevax and I must say that what we just told you was the bad news, the good news is you have been promoted to full venerable status for your performance in yesterdays battle. You are a credit too my company clevax welcome to the ranks of the veterans", "I am honoured to have this opportunity"replied clevax , "good, get prepairing then"said ardius , "goodbye commander"said clevax , "goodbye clevax" replied ardius "now go and get your new armour fitted" "yes commander" clevax replied as he turned towards the maintenance bays and headed off...
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