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Clevax hurriedly set about training to precipitate in the upcoming campaign to reclaim his home world of dasan 5 from the infidels who hold the emperors name in vain, and took to the insane art of ritual sacrifice practicing on still loyal solders and civilians who can't defend themselves from the crazed masses of chaos devotees. They put down their arms and hope for mercy but no quarter is given to them, instead they are dragged off to the strange temples decorated with the pale bodies of the dead, their blood pored into large holes these lead to a well in the central temple. The last thing the victim sees is the knife crudely crafted out of cursed stone found in the raided imperial guard lockup plunging into their heart. Rumour says that the meteor came flying out of the eye of terror itself and the evil inside was contained by binding prayers placed upon it by the grey knights chapter.

The remaining guard announced that the heretics are being guided by some prophet of doom called reticus who clamed when he came to the confessatoiruim that he was having visions of a great battle of witch the victors would be daemons. Who cared little for sanity of people and they told me to lead an uprising on the imperial guards lockup fortress and find the cursed stone In the lowest level of the structure and to create daggers of sacrifice from it, I tried to shake it off but was real.

The night after the inquisitors locked him up for further questioning there was loud chants of his name outside coming from the assembled masses they were chanting "blood for the blood god, skulls for his throne, reticus has been chosen, he will find the stone!!". Upon hearing this the inquisitors went to execute him, they opened the cell doors and found it empty. That is the last thing the camera saw before it went offline due to attempts to reroute all power to defences, but the audio recorded loud screams and then four to six gunshots and then a loud ripping and tearing noise and then silence, an eerie silence, and these word's spoken in a demonic voice "korn has chosen me to lead this world into glorious chaos no one can stop me!" This was followed by a loud demonic laugh, this proves the fact that deamons have control over dasan 5.

We need t... "what's the meeting for captain?", clevax interupted, "hello clevax" ardias said though gritted teeth due to the smoke from clevax's recently fired assault cannon filing the room "sorry I will leave" said clevax, "no clevax you may stay, but someone please get a servitor with the extractor in here" replied ardius. "So as I was saying we need to get some scouts down there and get a better view of this situation"continued ardius, ardius then turned to one of the veterans and said "will you by your own choice take a squad of neopytes to dasan 5?", "I will" repilied the veteran, "very well then" said ardius. He turned to one of the tecmarines and said "marine prep a strike cruser for immediete launch" "yes sir" replied the tecmarine.

captain ardius then muttered "so it begins" under his breath as the tecmarine and his sevitors walked away...


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