Chapter 5 please review I really want your opinions
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While clevax continues to train for his mission some scouts have been deployed on the planet of dasan 5 for their initiations to the chapter, collecting and relaying valuable Intel. As they go their mission their objective is to find out possible motives and goals of the heretic horde, strange energy readings have been registered inside the main temple in the centre blood well, the scouts are now currently located about a mile from the central temple they will have to think hard if they wish to gain entry to the building.
"Sergeant!" One of the scouts piped up "what is that loud marching noise" he added , "marching noise"?, "What marching noise?" replied the veteran sargent "SIR"! Yelled a scout "what nyophite"? He answered back "You better get over here sir " "why"? Questioned the sargent "You'll see" replied the scout. The sergeant walked over to the ridge and gasped, he was looking at over 200 space marines' "Brethren? One scout asked, "No scum" the sergeant answered "We should we inform high command right away" said the sergeant after a moment.
"With that done we have to find a way into the temple" said the sergeant "why don't we use this entrance"? The scout pointed it out on his auspex "my heat scans have picked up five guardsmen and it is covered by a piece of a collapsed building". "Agreed" the rest of the scouts said but the sargeant shook his head and said "you young bloods you have no idea of the powers at play here it can twist men and even space marine"! "Does this power have a name"? piped up a scout "yes scout" replied the sargeant. He closed his eyes took a deep breath and spoke slowly "chaos" "chaos,what the hell is that"? questioned a scout "no one truly understands the warp and chaos except the emperor himself, maybe". So the scouts set off to the temple and were stationed a few dozen meters away from the side entrance.
"scout could you check the guards uniforms though your scope"? the sargeant asked "aye sir" the scout replied "so what do you see"? said the sargeant "well all five guardsmen are bearing no imperial aquilla are drenched in blood and are breathing red mist" replied the scout "yep that sounds like traitors to me now remember don't fire your weapons untill i say so understand"? Asked the sargeant "yes sir"! The scouts answered back. So to maintain stealth they spoke in sign language from then on, the sargeant signalled to the scout with the sniper rifle to kill the furthest to the right guard the scout nodded and took aim. Firing with incredible accuracy he hit the guard between his eyes splitting his head into pieces splattering the others with gore.The others looked at each other, nodded and ran towards were they thought the shot had come from.
The traitors ran up the hill the scouts were also on trying to find the source of the gunshot that had killed their comrad "over here!" One of the guards' shouted "what is it tanter"? Another replied "I've found a bullet casing sniper class" he said back "well it looks like who ever shot sampson was here" reasoned the guard "proberly" tanter replied "wait!" Said the guard "where are rolit and herter"? He asked "I think this is a trap!" Panicked tanter "shit!, The emperor's warriors must be here" said the guard "correct traitor filth" breathed the space marine veteran sargeant. The guard screemed and droped dead as a power sword blade slid out of his chest "froler? froler? if that that was you stop it, it's not funny" shouted tanter. The scouts' moved in on him quietly. One moving behind to break his arms, the scout sargent nodded at the scout behind tanter and tanter screemed as his arms snaped in two.
He found himself face down on the ground unable to see. He squimed a little across the ground before he felt himself being lifted up into the air. The blindfold was pulled away from his face and he saw his captors nine scouts and a large well built space marine.His eyes kept swiching to stare at the sargents boltgun, face and power sword. "now traitor you will tell us what the hell is going on here" asked the sargent "okay! okay! just don't kill me!" Tanter said very fast "tell me or we will kill you!" shouted the sargent "well" began tanter "we were staitioned on this planet two years ago by the imperal govener of this sector and then about three weeks ago a man or rather a prohet emerged. He ralied all the people of this planet to follow khorn the chaos god of slaughter and war I agreed with my fellow guard to merge into the rebellon and find a way off this planet before we were given the mark of khorn or discovered". "Your lying" said one of the scouts "he isn't, if he was tainted by chaos it would have already killed him for saying one word to us"said the sargent.
"So tell us, tanter is it? what is going on in that temple?" asked the sargeant okay said tanter you see that man reticus is planing to fill the planets core full of blood uptill the point at which the planet breaks lose of the suns gravity and heads towards the eye of terror. The planet will crash into the planet cadia and ether dystroy cadia or splinter and wipe out most of the imperial fleet and proberly dystroy cadia as well leading to the complete wreaking of the cadian gate alowing thousands of chaos fleets free to strike deep into imperial space"! "This news is distressing" said the sargeant "we must inform the captain but we must get into the temple as well" "wait!" The sargeant said he looked at tanter and said "you go take this, keep heading west untill you find our drop pod contact our vessal in the gettax belt, tell him every thing and show him this to show him that you have earned my trust, then find a place to hide untill my chapters' invation force gets here, go now!"
"Thank you space marine, good luck to you" said tanter as he sped away the sargeant nodded and turned and walked down the hill towards the temple the scouts followed him though the entrance.The sargeant then stopped put his hand to his ear and hailed captain Ardius and said "sir we gained an unexpected ally a guard undercover called tanter we sent back to our drop pod to fill you in on the plan, I would but time is short I'll just say it's bad" "receved" said captain ardius back "let's go" said the sargeant to the scouts and in they went.