Hi I am back sorry about the last chapters and the punctuation but chapter 8 is up and I am going to make more effort please read and review

Captain Ardias

Was hurriedly pacing his room considering different chapter's to call for aid

Black templars? …no no too bossy. Blood angles? maybe, that's it the grey knights! He shouted, Captain! His body guard shouted, what? Ardius said, are you okay?

Yes why wouldn't I be? Ardius said, but I heard you shout the grey knight's name the body guard started its nothing, Ardius said, okay, the bodyguard said.

Meanwhile clevax was readying himself for the orbital strike, clevax! A voice called

It was the techmarine who did his servicing after the battle with the chaos marines on Helios, yes? He answered, the captain wishes to see you about something, all right clevax answered

Captain? Clevax started, yes? Ardias answered, you sent for me? Yes clevax I have come to the difficult decision of calling the grey knights for aid hopefully with our currant situation and the connection between them and that rock will call them to war but alas they probably won't. I see clevax said in a saddened tone so there won't be an orbital strike then, he added, no clevax, ardias said

I will be in my quarters if you need me captain, look clevax I tried but it is just not going to happen, WELL IN THE EMPERORS NAME MAKE IT HAPPEN!, clevax! Don't you dare shout at your commanding officer! Sorry…sorry but its just…he started before ardias shouted LOOK I KNOW YOUR BLOODY FAMILY IS ON DASAN 5 BUT WE DON'T EVEN KNOW IF THEY ARE ALIVE!!! WELL I HAVE TO BELIVE THEY ARE ALIVE COMMANDER!!!! Clevax roared back, captain! Ardias's body guard shouted, are you all right? Yes marine clevax was just leaving, with this clevax walked out of the commander's room without a word.

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