Chapter 9 is up could you please post a review and if you could say if I should make my story into a book
Clevax was standing in the holo room staring at the image of his home world. Meanwhile captain ardias was sitting on his bed thinking about what he had said to clevax he thought to himself "maybe I was too hard on clevax should I apologize?" ardias finally decided he should talk to clevax. He walked into the holo room and without looking he said "look clevax I am sorry you did not disserve that scolding" he had only just realised he wasn't there. Then over the intercom a voice announced "captain one of the assault craft has taken off!" "WHAT?" ardias shouted his voice echoing down empty halls he sprinted to the launch bays and just caught glimpse of the techmarine who repaired clevax "the fool he always had a bleeding heart"
He then ran to the control tower and asked "did you mange to take a life form scan of the ship" the servitor manning the scanner replied in his robotic voice "yes there was a marine sized figure and a small blot inside a drop pod!" "Clevax you fool" "let his emotions get the better of him has he"? The servitor said, although this was considered out of place to speak without being spoken to first especially to the captain the captain just sighed and said "yes servitor" "yes he has" he then turned round and saw the control tower's lift rising and out stepped a marine who was gasping and out of breath.
"SIR ship STOLEN course of action?" he just managed to say this before he collapsed from exhaustion then ardias replied "I am guessing that you want to know what we should do?" an acknowledging nod from the marine on the floor answered his question "all right this is what we are going to do" "BY HOOK OR BY CROOK WE ARE GOING TO CAPTURE THAT SHIP" "iye!" the other 3 marines who showed up said a day later they were in the air in space they had sent 2 destroyers to intercept clevax they were an hour away from him when the marine manning the short range scanner announced "SIR CONTACTS AT 10 OCLOCK!" "WHAT" ardius shouted back "yes contacts it looks like ork vessels" "looks like we have a fight on our hands" ardius announced "GO TO STARBOARD" a marine yelled.
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