Ok biggest thanks to my good friend Dana cause.. she typed this up for me I just did minor editing, and... just fixed the spelling of minor, and shes younger hm..., shows how bad my speling is anyways she wanted to type my draft so I let her and so here it is so all thank dana and Ill send her yur comments!

Ok anyways credit given... Ill summarize? I dont know what this is so Ill talk more at the bottom... ya ok alldone here

enjoy :D

"Luffy, we should be heading back." Nami sighed looking at her reflection in the water. She was a mess, covered with dirt, as Sanji would say.

"You agreed we would go to the top of the mountain, you promised!" Luffy complained.

"Right, but the mountain looked so much smaller then."

"You said, though!" Luffy pouted, finally getting up he took one last look at his distressed navigator and sighed, "You don't look so good."

"I'm tired, Luffy." She glanced down in an attempt to avoid Luffy's stare.

"You're... tired? We haven't made it half way up! You can't be tired!"

"How often do I go treking through the jungle! I don't normally walk all day!"

"Right... ," Luffy said absently,"Oh, I know!"

"Know what? What are y-" In no time at all Luffy had lifted his companion onto his back and was heading up the trail. "Wha... But... Luffy what are y-"

"Piggyback!" Luffy interupted again, a grin planted on his face. Luffy heard a sigh, guessing Nami had given up arguing, so he continued on. After a few minutes of walking, he heard a faint snore. Luffy smiled happily for his buddy.

"Oh, Nami-Swan, I have made you a most wonderful meal for your return!" Sanji began dancing to the small wooden plank leading from the boat to the beach.

Zoro looked up growling as he continued his way back onto the ship. " Your love not back yet?" He laughed as he headed down to his own bunk.

"No, shitty swordsman." The cook muttered to himself. Sanji looked up at the sky and realized the sun was about to rise. "If Nami is hurt that no-good-careless-worthless-stupid-careless-" Sanji let out a sigh. ' I need to come up with some new insults.'

"Usopp, Chopper, I'm heading below deck so be quiet and get back on the ship."

"What's up with Sanji?"

Chopper looked back to where the boob had just vanished. "I think he's worried. What if something bad happened!"

"Luffy's up there. Nothing happened." Usopp looked proudly into the forest. "Luffy wouldn't let anything bad happen. And with a convincing grin Usopp marched back to the ship.

"Maybe they got lost! Or split up, or-"

"Nami's with Luffy, not Zoro. They didn't get lost. Luffy can protect them so they aren't hurt."

Usopp reashured Chopper.

"Ya... The forest is dense so they probably don't know how late they are!"

Nami awoke suddenly to find herself facing down at, well, nothing, nothing but air."Luffy, what are you doing!"

Ok well I ts the bottom... point out mistakes and Ill fix them oh and I changed how thinking is, its now... ' in these things' I htink at least if they arnt here they will be, oh chappie 5 is 50 done, the draft is done but none of the typing... Ill try to put this info on my page and update so you all know... not much of a cliffhanger but I wanted to leave off there so that the next scene is... seprate itll take up its own chapter but its fluff, kinda, I just planned out chapter 6 but its not written and this is getting really boring so Ill stop and let you reveiw, which you will do... right?

Hope so reveiws are the what is keeping this fic going Id have stopped making these if you didnt reveiw! so ya... R&R.