OMG Canada followed by tired followed by sweet 16 party + a hell of a long time to update way sry did I break my one month promis? i hope noti hate breaking promises! well ya ok this chappie has a JK rolling moment i it all explaned in my short story in the endoing author note it includes danceing and partys and... well JR rowling... kind of she came up with hary potter in a train on a nap- aw youll find out there

so ya sry for the long wait did i put a cliffhanger on the last chappie i thought i- crap! ok this has to be quick my moms slaying me alive, y do i allways post these so late!? well ill make this quick hi its me this is chappie 5 il answer all signed reveiws but i cant return anonamus ones... computer spell check not working beta reader away but i think i did pretty good all things considered... I said to one of tou that id put in more detail of the surroundings... I need to take that back i tryed i this and it sounded... well to me i didnt think i did a great job so... use your imagination plz and sry bout that... eeek! quickly post before she finds me!

so ya here it is... reveiws will include more detail but it might lake me a bit cause im vacation (ill be on... tomorrow morning, this morning? i dont know in a few hours! so ill return if anythings up then! here it is!

"Um…"

"Luffy?" Nami was beginning to get worried he was hurt, how did this happen. Questions began racing through her already stressed mind, why was Luffy so quiet…

"Sorry Nami I was- and then- and…" Luffys voice trailed off creating more questions, "I tripped OK? And then we fell…." Nami looked shocked and Luffy scared "I grabbed onto the ledge though! But then you woke up so…" Luffys voice disappeared into the darkness once more.

"It doesn't matter we're both ok right?" Nami through one more worried glance al Luffy before continuing, "So, how do we get back up?"

"Why do you want to go back up" looking at Luffy simply proved he hadn't began their trip up the cliff for some kind of a reason, or not but he must have seen something.

"Because we're hanging off a cliff with no land in sight" Nami offered

Well I'm stretching so I could get us up in no time but… I mean look it's so pretty!"

"I'm sure it will be just as pretty…ON SOLID LAND!!" Nami was thoroughly irritated now. I mean if it was sooooo simple why couldn't he just bring them up, unless. Thoughts of injuries began coming up once more. The thoughts of Luffys injury leading to a long fall suddenly appeared, if they fell… Nami looked down, darkness pitch-black. Wait no, where was that light coming from… but still… her horrid fate calling her attention once more. 'Oh god… I'm dead!'

"What's so impressive Luffy, its black you could paint the boys bunk black if you like it so much I'll even buy the paint if you'll pull us up," glance down "NOW!"

"Na, but Nami down hear there's nothing to interfere with the view no tree's no land just… sky."

All expression left Namis face at those last words, "Luffy hate to break this to you but its black, just black no land I mean come on look down no sight of land!"

Luffy began laughing thoroughly confusing his friend, "your not looking right Nami its up not down!"

"I still cant- see- land….Oh my god its- its- beautiful." 'That's what the light was… how did I miss this?!' Namis jaw dropped. Namis awareness slowly slipped along with her grip on Luffy, Until of course Luffy slipped his arm around her pulling her close to keep her from falling. But not a word was said they just stared up.

"It's a meteor shower…"

"No their stars, falling stars" Luffy said stubbornly "Now make a wish!" Luffy smiled them looked up clearly in thought. "No, make a lota wishes!" he corrected.

Nami smiled and looked up "I wish…" she closed her eye's like she had when she wish when she was little 'I wish this feeling could last forever'

"So what'd ya wish for?" Luffy probed. The show had ended during Namis wish and Luffy was eager as ever to find out what his friend wanted now, he couldn't stand her being unhappy cause that wasn't allowed on his ship!

"That, my rubber friend, is a secret. Secret so I can't tell you now get us up." Nami turned away but her smile wasn't unnoticed.

"Please tell?" Luffy pouted.

"Nope." Nami stated after landing on solid ground, oh ground how nice it was to be back.

"mmm… OK" Luffys smile quickly returned

"So can we head back now?"

"Nope!" Luffys smile only grew as he continued onward "Not till we reach the top" he smiled and launched into the dense forest at a full out run tailed by Nami.

So they ran until Luffy fell over and, to her surprise, Nami caught up. "How'd you fall? You should be able to out run me." She said while gasping for air.

"Well, I tripped" Luffy looked up a slightly embarrassed look on his face. His embarrassment quickly hidden by laughter.

"Does it hurt?" Nami questioned seeing a few drips of blood o the ground… 'It doesn't look like it'll be too bad-'

"A bit but it'll be all better soon." Luffy smiled that smile he has when hes trying to talk serious, or when he's confused.

"Ok then… where does it hurt?" 'Maybe I know this already but I want to hear it from him…'

"Huh?" Luffy was clearly confused, his voice, face it all screamed confusion.

"Where does it hurt?" Nami rolled her eye's putting emphasis on each word as if to clarify her point. I mean come on how hard was it to understand concern!?

"Um… my knee, I guess." his confusing disappearing and replaced with an utterly blank look.

"Ok… Nami couldn't keep up with Luffys thoughts "He just doesn't make any sense" she mumbled.

"What?

"Nothing" Nami began looking around for a place to bandage up Luffys knee it might not bad but if it got infected, he'd never quiet down, "now where's the best spot to…" 'Tree…tree…tree, it there any thing but tree's- oh a rock!' She led Luffy over to her discovery and set him down looking through her bag for some bandages and cloths. After a quick bandage up of Luffys leg Nami looked up. She was forgetting something but what she thought back what had bellemere done when she had gotten scraped… Luffy looked at Nami as she placed a simple kiss on his knee.

"Nah, Nami?"

"For good luck." She stated followed by a quick smile, wink and turn as she headed further up the path. Luffy seized the moment while her back was turned to and give her a quick peck on the cheek as he ran past.

"For good luck." He said at his dumbfounded navigator. He began laughing and slowed to a walk up the trail allowing his delayed friend to catch up.

"Luffy!" she called beginning to run… or not.

Ok you all see the line in the middle of my story right... did any of you wonder whhy did she put that there? is that a mistake? shouldnt it be one paragraph? well even if you didnt that line is important to me! and I m about to tell you why plz this is too all those readers who think I dont care or... im lazy (I am but this... ya its diffrent) that line and all after it (not really the line) was all written and typed off of a napkin (JK rolling moment) yes my friends sweet 16 party and i was in a corner not dancing (i dont dance) writing this stoy for allof you! yay me! (by the way i thank you they were trying to get me to dance ":) but still it was a big deal to her. (shes happy i danced to the macarana, i was late to cotton eyed joe, and to every time we touch which is a really nice song... any ways...)

yep so you all wanted a longer chappies so look what i did for you ii was thinking about it for about a week and in one night i like doubled the chappie, p;z dont expect this length to be normal less we want longer in between posts. its hard to come up with more stuff sometimes.

ya so... their i think i said some of that already but still. um ok Im going on vacation for a while and.. im about to be killed by my mom for being up ths late when we leave early tomorrow for DC or where ever the fuck were going its to confusing! (if you cant tell i dont want to go) so anyways Ill be writing chappie 6 (chappies a cool fake word!) but i wont be typing like at all for al least 2 weeks then comes haiur cuts, and registration, and school supplyies all in my last week of summer nooooooooooooooooo (spirals down ward into ... a spiral of doom!) who can tell I have ADHD? figured id evplaine my randomness!

(sry for bad spelling my spell chek isnt exactly at the top of its game (haha stupid phrase... my mom always used to tell me that it gets annoying)

oh and reveiws are the only things that keep this story going if i stop getting them well... ya this story will take a hell of a lot longer to finish i need reveiws they tell me ppl care that im wrting this and since it was started for a friend i nee the motivation (by the way be warned the next multi chappie fic i right isnt going to be LuNa so... ill say in the summary if its multi chappie or not.