Took me long enough to update huh? well its summer, Im hoping to join a role play board which will get me in a writing mood, im happy actually so here it goes this is chapter 7, duh and I hope you like it, Im changing the story so at least SOMETHING interesting happens I hope you enjoy it

sry i did quick touch ups on the spelling so im resubmitting it.

"Uh Nami? Where did this fog come from?" Luffy was stumbling around in an attempt to find some sort of sign of his companion, sadly any such signs where not in sight. Blindly running around now Luffy began stumbling over branches and rocks that happened to cross his scattered path.

Not feeling the least bit detained by the mud on the ground or the lack of response from his companion Luffy continued to run around. As his search continued his running became more frantic causing hi to trip even more than before. Eventually he stumbled over a larger rock hitting his head on the ground and rendering him unconscious. Luffys head was spinning due to the impact and his body wasnt helping as it rolled down the mountain coming to rest against a large rock not to far down.

The last thought to cross his mind before he hit that rock and became fully unconscious was the thought of a large plate of meat waiting for him when he got back to the merry.

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"Luffy? Luffy!?" Nami was beginning to panic she had told him to wait until the fog cleared hadn't she? 'He probably didn't notice that's just like him!' Nami began to regret what she was thinking and tried to divert her attention back to finding Luffy. Everything had been going so well, she had finally told Luffy what she felt, she had been crushing on him for a while, it had just been a crush then but now… she had to find Luffy.

Finally being forced to stop looking for Luffy due to the immense fog Nami decided to take a break finding a large rock to sit on name began focusing her attention on something more relevant, the fog, it was getting late in the day, at least 3 oclock the fog should have cleared up by now, this couldn't be natural could it? Getting mildly nervous due to evil magic mages that had come up around a pathetic attempt of a camp fire the crew had set up 2 days ago. Nami began really worrying about Luffy now, what if they cooked him over a- wait that was Usopps story! Shaking the thought off as pure Usopp stupidity Nami got up to continue her search. "Lu- Luffy!?" Nami heard a small groan emitting from under her foot and noticed Luffy lying on the ground with a large bump on his forehead and her foot on his face. "What…What are you doing there!!"

"I want my meat!" Luffy exclaimed causing an odd glance from Nami.

"Wait…what??"

"Uh… Nami! Luffy quickly stood up trying not to look at Nami much monger and blushing furiously at what he had just seen. "Uh… Wait your ok the evil mages of the misty land didn't catch you!?" Luffy sighed, "That good I was afraid theyd gotten you." Not realizing the nonsense he had just repeated Luffy began smiling like never before at the thought of Nami and him both being safe, and Nami dismissing Luffys seemingly random outburst, returned his look she had just put her head on his shoulder basking in the moment when…

"Straw hat!!" Luffy and Nami both looked up to see smoker appearing from a nearby bush ready to fight and fuming.

"So that where all the fog- smoke came fro-" Luffy cut off his sentence being pulled off the ground Nami made to help him but smoker just pushed her into the bushes, he wasn't after her, no he had already caught his prize. Luffy followed Namis figure as it disappeared into another bush and began struggling to get to her which was totally useless when he was being suspended a couple feet off the ground. 'Nami!'

Note thats another atempt at a cliffhanger...another bad one but still I try right? ok plz reveiw I havent had any (probably because its been so long) and so its kind of depressing to write this now I realy need the reveiws, anyways I want to get this done by the end of summer so that you dont need to wait as i do work for school..sounds good

ok plz pres that wonderful reveiw button even if you send me a reveiw that says "...yay?..." in it it will at least tell me ur there right? plz