Alternate Ending Finale is the next chapter. This is the ORIGINAL DRAFTED ON PAPER FINALE
To make it special It's a Song Chapter! :In the End Linkin Park Lon's POV
DOTS: Burns!
"What do we have to do?" I asked again. We had been training for weeks. Nothing interesting just the
usual array of electrical light show. "I need your armor." Sumera said reaching her hand out. "What?! I
can't!" I yelled. "Lon Have you seen?" Mom asked poking her hand out. I grabbed the blade of
Sumera's knife for the 'Alertness Test' "Marrow? No mom. You really need to put him on a leash." I
said. Marrow was my little 'brother' or what humans call male siblings. Despite being 2 days old he was
hyper. "That reminds me Lon." Sumera said. She slapped me. "Bitch! You ran away!" She scolded. I
shrugged I got a good half a million dollars from that deal. That SHE STOLE. "I'm sorry." I said
rubbing my antennae then stopping when I realized what I was doing. "Su! GIR exploded." Sumera
blushed. I smacked her in the head. "At least I don't smuggle smeets" I hissed. "I'm sorry he was so
cute!" Sumera replied. "You hate everything cute." Marrow ran up and hugged her leg. "That thinking
is why he like me more than you." Sumera joked. "Marrow Mom is looking for you." "No! She'll hurt
me!" Marrow said. I stared confused. "Why?" "GIR told me of Kaia" Marrow shuddered. I sighed in
annoyance. "Kaia is gone. I know. Hey." I said picking Marrow's head up. He had Mom's Purple eyes.
She claimed this was her greatest achievement. "Mom thinks you're the greatest thing that happened to her, now look at me. You are her last smeet." I said petting his head. He sucked it in. I don't know if he
is a clone of Mom or Dad, he has her eyes. But he also has Dad's gender, Ego, and petty fears.
"Mom Marrow's In here!" I called. She walked in. "Thank Irk." She said. Marrow mistook this and puffed out his tiny chest in pride. "Silly Marrow don't act like Zim" She said. He cocked his head in
confusion. "What's wrong with Dad?" He asked. "I'll tell you later. It would take hours." She claimed.
I personally think that was more than a little harsh. I shrugged. "So Sumera that is your little soft spot?"
I asked. "Look at those tiny Purple eyes!" She said. "We are the weirdest thing ever. Reddish, Magenta, Purple eyes." I thought out loud. "So Lon think you can take me on?" Sumera asked. I nodded.
"Bring it on."
Marrow meets Mallow
I looked at mom. She was odd. The way she treated me, Irkens aren't supposed to treat smeets this way.
I couldn't ask it. It would be rude. Hell, I'm the son of a Defect. "Heh, Join the crowd." An odd Irken
with Black eyes said. "Eh?" "Do you even know how bad your defect situation is?" He asked
laughing. "So my Mom's a defect?" I asked. "Everyone except you and me are defects" He said. It did
make sense, why did Sumera hide me? What is this cute? "We are all dangerous?" I asked cocking my
head. He shook his head. "The only dangerous one is Quinn, Female Irken Red eyes." I stared. "She used to work with Sumera, but Sumera turned on her." I stared. That rings a bell, who was Su trying to
attack earlier? "What else do you know about this Quinn?" I asked. She sounded intriguing. "An evil
shape shifter spirit" He told me. "Now how come I'm not a defect if both my parents are?" I asked. He
opened his eyes. "You're a brat." "I'm great like that though!" I replied. "Well because of that response
I'm not sure." I cocked my head. What If I had reacted differently? "Then you sure as hell wouldn't of
been Zim's" He replied to my thought. "Maybe one of them isn't defective!" I blurted out. His antennae twitched. "Hah! So much emotion in them! The chances of..." He said thinking. "Wait a minute."
He made me follow him all the way to where dad was. "this is a fine invader skill observing." He told
me. "No twitching of antennae, his Pak seems more fit." I cocked my head at what he was getting at.
"Hah! That's why!" He said. "What?" "Your father finally got some sense to fix his Pak!" He replied. So Dad wasn't defective. "Which means?" "Call him Tallest Zim, I'm not sure how much he fixed." I
nodded. No more dad. "And If I call him dad?" I asked. "I'm not sure, he might slap you or discipline
you" Blackheart said thinking. "Hey! You'll be the first one in your family to not be a whore!" He
whispered loudly. "eh?" "Spend more time with Lon when I'm around. It's an inside joke." He replied. I nodded. A joke. Well at least I'll have two non-defectives in my family to help. "So Blackheart what is
cute?" I asked. "How did you know my-? Oh right Zim's smeet. What Lon would probably call me."
He mumbled something after that I'm not sure what. It sounded like hoe, but I don't know what gardening tools have to do with anything. "Is that why you don't spend time with her?" I asked. "And
the fact burning is an imminent price of friendship" He added. I have no idea what he said, but I nodded. "Are there any Irkens here that aren't related to me?" I asked. "Me... and... er... Wow he did
fumigate the massive" Blackheart said looking for someone. "Hmm... You know we should go back to
Irk sometime." He said. "Why?" "I don't know You'll find more people like you." I cocked my head. I've only been alive for 1 day what does he mean like me? "Non-defects" I nodded. Irk... Irk. Eh? I
don't know what Irk is? "Eh? You don't? Figures leave it to a female to screw up a Paks programming"
Blackheart commented. I stared. That seemed sexist. Females deserve treatment like males! Blackheart
burst out laughing. "That Evil witch! She messed with you on purpose!" he said laughing. Well my
name was Marrow and that's a females name. "So Irk anyway that's our home planet" He said motioning a circle. "Yes Irk a spherical area. New definition." I said nodding. I felt the ground shock
me. "Someone's trying to get on the Massive." Blackheart said bored. "Male or female?" He asked.
"Female." He chuckled. "Age wise?" He asked. "smeet." His antennae raised in alarm. "Another facility escapade." He said shaking his head. I shrugged and walked off.
1 hour later
I made my way through the Massive. "So am I a defect?" I asked myself. I felt blood rush to my face
that's an emotion. But I thought different than Mom. I continued walking until I was lost. "Ow!" A voice cried. She had a light airy voice. "Eh? Who's there state your terms!" I yelled. "I won't tell you! You'll send me back!" She cried.
"I can't even do that I'm a smeet too!" I called out. " Really? You look like Tallest Tak!" She said.
There's that blood again. "I'm a male you twit!" I shouted. "What's your name?" She cried out hitting
me. "Marrow son of Tallest Tak and Tallest Zim!" I told her. "I'm Malorie. Or Mallow." She said. "Are
you making fun of my name?" I asked. "No!" She turned around as the lights activated. Of course I
was in my quarters. I am a dunce. "Why are you here?" I asked. She had Red Magenta eyes. Thin
antennae and small eye-lashes. She was interesting like something new I've never heard about. Cute?
I shrugged it off. "I'm here to escape I saw this big ship and thought they could help!" She said. Well
that may certainly be a good excuse. I'll need to remember that when someone asks why... "Ah, You
should go." I said. "Why?" She asked clueless. "Let's see you're female and you're in my quarters!" I
started. Lon walked by. "Hello Marrow and..." She looked at the female smeet. "You aren't related to
me?" She said. "This is Malorie, she is a runaway." I hissed glaring at Mallow. "Right and what is she
doing in here?" She asked. "I'm not entirely sure I got lost and ran in to her." I lied. Sort of. "Well you
have to get back to the facilities." Lon said picking her up. Malorie put on the oddest face I have ever seen. "Don't give me that look." Lon said looking away. She sighed. "Fine you can stay. Irk knows how
mom and dad will react." She said. "Well Marrow have fun with your Girlfriend"Lon teased. I ignored
her. "I'm not your girlfriend." She said punching me to the ground. "Eh? What?" I asked. "I never said
anything about that!" I yelled rubbing my arm. She rolled her eyes. Damn! Beneath all that, whatever is
pure evil! "If you must know, I don't like you." She said harshly. Like? "Eh? I'm sorry, but what is
like?" I asked. She sighed annoyed. "Figure it out!" She said walking off. "Damn that was one bloody
demon escaped from Hell." Sumera said walking in. "What was this 'Like' thing she talked about?" I asked. Sumera blushed. "Well when... Irkens two...Like...like..." She said thinking. "Er... You should
know it's an emotion. Like Love!" She said. I cocked my head. "Oh, my Irk." Sumera said running out.
In a couple minutes everyone was around me. "What does this make you think?" Mom asked.
Holding up a picture. "Why the Hell are you guys holding Porn up in front of me?" I asked. She turned
the frame around and blushed. "Wrong one." She switched the pictures. "Why the hell are you showing
me fruits?" I asked. "You really can't feel can you?" She asked. "If you cut me It hurts." I said. "He's
not defective?" Sumera asked. "So how do we-" Lon whispered. "Lon! Yes he is Zim's! I can prove it!"
Mom yelled turning around. "What did I do wrong? How did I do anything wrong?" I asked. "That's a
statement that proves it!" She said. "Well how is he not a defective?" They asked. "Maybe Zim finally
built a good Pak!" Mom said. "Blackheart said Dad got his fixed." I said. Dad looked surprised and
glared at Blackheart. "Well that would certainly be a reasonable explanation."Lon said. I was confused.
"How would Blackheart know though?" Dad asked. Defensive. "He said innate Invader observation."
I said. "Really what did he see?" Dad asked. "Well he said your antennae didn't twitch, your Pak is
more well fitted, and I noticed that you were actually working with the controls to the massive instead
of inventing" I told him. Now his antennae twitched and lowered. "Well that was very observant of you
two." Mom said grabbing dad's antennae and dragging him out of the room. Wow, Dad is a wuss.
"So Lon what is like and cute?" I asked. "Stuff that you will never feel." She said walking out. "Oh, I
won't." I said lowering my antennae. "Lon! Yes he will!" Sumera yelled. "You will feel it I don't buy all
this bull. But People are going to treat you differently now." She told me. I smiled. So what if people will treat me different. I am different. Malorie walked in. "What a way to screw up your family. Nice
acting that was such bull you pulled back there I laughed." Malorie said. Blood rushed to my face. "I
know you can feel. I'm not an idiot." She said slapping me. Hard in the face. "That wasn't nice!" I said.
"Get used to it!" She hissed. I pounced on her and pinned her down. "moron" She flipped me and bit
my antennae for some strange reason. I yanked hers. "Let go you jerk!" She said pulling on her
antennae. I pushed her off. "You started it!" I yelled. She rolled her eyes. "Wow do that again!" Lon said. There is the blood again. What is that emotion? Oh yes embarrassment. "What are you talking
about?" I asked. "The whole fighting! That was cute!" There's that word again. I use the word again a
lot. "No It wasn't! I almost killed your smeet brother!" Malorie argued. "It looked more to me like you
were trying to make-out with him and he was kicking your ass." Lon joked. Malorie nearly tried to kill
her. "Lon! There can never be... Feeling between us!" I said. Sad truth. "You have emotions!" Lon said.
"Yes the sacred three!" I yelled. Happiness, anger, sadness. "This... 'like' is not one of the three" I told her sadly. Malorie glared. She finally heaved a sigh of sadness. "So you weren't lying" I shook my
head. "Marrow nothing is sacred" Lon said as if that was supposed to help. "I am devoid of personality
derived of emotion!" I told her. "Okay..." She said confused. "There's hope!" Malorie said. I smiled at
her. "How?" "By Butching up and getting a backbone Sally!" I glared. She wasn't half bad when you kick her ass. "Thanks Malorie that helped." I said smiling again. "You aren't half bad Marrow." She said. Lon smiled and left. "Don't hurt me!" I said. "I'm not going to hurt you I'm going to help" She said blushing. Eh? What does that have to-
And her lips touched mine.
I Reach out for you. And you Push me off. (Lon)Song: This is our Land (Halo 3)
I looked back in. They were kissing. Okay Malorie was kissing him, but he was actually red like a human. His eyes relaxed a little and I walked out. "Leave it to a female to give a guy some feeling" I
thought laughing. "Shouldn't you be training not being a spy?" Blackheart asked. "That's my little
sibling!" I yelled. "Peh, I just know you're up to something." He said shrugging. He wasn't going
insane he just didn't trust me. "I'm on a very fine line with you private." I said. He rolled his eyes. "Yes
General. You know what makes you think you're captain?" He asked. I was hurt. "I don't know, Why are you such an ass?" I asked. His black eyes looked a little confused. "Years ago I reached for you and
you pushed me off. Off a cliff! I could have killed you there! You're like Sumera just a Jackass who
feeds off the suffering of my world" I told him. He was shocked. "You don't remember do you?" I
asked. He shook his head. "It was Sumera's funeral you Jackass." I said tearing up. (Why I don't know
he brought her back) "I wanted your support, you didn't help. Then you made it worse." I yelled.
Marrow and Mallow looked out. "You also corrupted what was left of Kiatu." I said. He walked
towards me. "Lon-" "Shut the Hell up! No one here gives a Damn anymore! It's the past." I yelled crying. "You don't understand my reasonings!" He yelled. "You don't understand me!" I screamed. He
reached out and I ran off.
I ran in to my training room. I decided to use a punching bag.
1 minute later
"Lon? Are you okay?" Sumera asked running in. She looked around. "Irk you mauled this bag!" She
said picking it up. "This is a little irrational isn't it?" She asked backing away from me. "I'm sorry I had all this stored up anger and I took it out on Blackheart" I told her. "Was he in the bag?" Su asked.
I smiled. "No." She smiled. "Now what the Hell were you angry about? You had a pretty Damn
horrible excuse." Sumera said stepping over the mauled bag parts. "Everything! My life! Sumera I'm
going to die! I'm only 74! I'm 600 years before my time!" I cried. She nodded. "You are going to save
Irk. Avenge all the dead" She said. I shook my head. "I don't want to kill Sumera. Life, That's all." I
told her head in my hands. "To live you need to kill." She said kneeling down. "Lon?" Marrow asked
walking in. Mallow followed shortly. "So how are you and your girlfriend?" I asked. "We aren't-" He
started. "I saw her kissing you and if you pushed her off you sure did take a hell of your sweet time" I
replied. He huffed. She punched him in the arm so hard it knocked him down. "Really? Damn, You are
like dad, except it took him a week! You're only one day old and you're playing them like cards!" Su
said astonished. This caused Malorie to punch him even harder. He glared at Sumera. "Marrow I'm going away today." I told him. "Why?" "Some look to kill." I started. "In my case I'm looking to get
killed." I told him. He nodded.
"Some kill for pleasure."
"Some kill for duties"
"Some get killed just to see Hell"
"I get killed to save my Land."
"This is the last time you will see me alive."
"Take a mental picture."
"I'll get bombarded by knives."
"And be blown up by architecture"
"One day you will smile on what I did"
"On when I could band together"
"So when you are senile you can still remember"
"That This is Our Land"
I told him. He smiled weakly. I got up and got my lasers. "Where are you going?" Blackheart asked.
"To fulfill my destiny." I told him. "Aren't you forgetting something?" He asked. "I'm not bringing you
and Dib this is my fight" I told him. "You are right you're bringing me and Gaz" He told me. "It's too
dangerous." I told him turning around. "74 years ago we were your crew. 70 years ago your roommates
2 weeks ago we infiltrated your betrothed's ship. We have been with you forever" He said. He moved
closer. "And Sure as Hell We're going to die with you" He told me. I smiled. "Of course my loyal
crew" He nodded. "Gaz are you okay with dying young?" He asked. "Why of course." She said
gritting her teeth. Marrow walked in. "I'm going with you!" He yelled. "No you're not. You are mom's
last child treasure that." I said patting his head. "You have your future with Malorie." "SHE ISN'T MY
GIRLFIREND!" He yelled. "Even so she would hate to have you gone." He hugged me. "Dib would."
He said. "I have duties to my empire. You are leaving with mom." I told him. He saluted hesitantly and
ran out. "Where are we going?" He asked. "To keep her away from Irk. Anywhere" I told him
"But the Massive"
Hours later near the space ship Stravard where Lon watched her spouse die, in the Emrick galaxy.
The voot cruiser watches as they all hesitantly nod and go through with their plan. Dust and echoes
can be heard in the background and what appears to be the screams of spirits in Hell.
"Damn I hate this place" I said looking at Gaz. She even seemed creeped out by the screams. "Hell
she was waiting for us" Blackheart said. "How do you know?" I asked. "I just feel there's a trap." I
gulped. "Blackheart, Gaz, It has been an honor working with you." I told them. "As with you."
Blackheart replied. Gaz didn't say anything. We all nodded. The closer we got the louder the screams
were. This was the deepest pit of Hell. We moved as close as we could to the abandoned ship.
Scratching, scurrying I could hear on the outside of the ship. Sumera was already there. Waiting.
Watching. The screams turned in to moans and then tears. As I walked in a loud scream was heard by
Quinn's indisputable cackle. I shuddered. "She was waiting for us." Sumera told us worried. We walked
further in to the hull of Hell. The metal started to mimic the screaming. I picked up Gretel's prize
possession; her amulet. I walked over the parts of bodies no doubt by search teams that Quinn's
'Creations' found. "This place went from creepy to Hell in 2 weeks" Blackheart said. I caught fire to
find our way around.
Broken twisted metal, blood and glass in a horrifying mix, bodies with no flesh, Paks that had been
smashed. Footprints in the dust of the gore. Swords, weapons flung everywhere. Skin covering the
walls, And wherever I stepped it all caught fire. Smoke filled the burning Hell and the screams followed me wherever I went. Sumera looked back. "There's no turning back now." She said. The
screams turned In to laughter. "This hall, I remember it." Sumera said smiling. She used to live here.
"You know this makes me wonder what it was like when Irkens were simple." I said as the screams
ended and it was quiet. "It makes me wonder where my parents are now." Blackheart sighed, Gaz
looked away. I saw something shift in the dark. "All this blood. They didn't stand a chance" I said.
Hundreds must have died. "Hello niece." a voice said behind me before laughing. I shuddered. "Are
you ready to watch them die?" She asked. I turned around to see a crowbar hitting me.
I looked around. I was tied up. So was my family and Blackheart. "Where's Gaz?" I asked. "Bitch I
had to put her in a cell." She replied. I looked down. "here is who will die first!" She said holding out
Malorie. "Why did you get the smeets involved?" I hissed. "They are your future. And I'm making sure
you don't have one." I stared. "Put her down!" A voice yelled. Marrow. "Would you like to die first
then?" she asked dropping Malorie. "Why?" He asked. She picked him up. "Are you ready to die?"
She hissed. "Only if you're ready to go to Hell" He said pointing behind her. She turned and I used
that second to untie myself with my Pak legs. I pushed her against a wall. "Clever clever bitch." She
said. I used my lasers to free the rest of my family. Where was Blackheart though? "You were an idiot
to mess with my family!" I yelled. I grabbed my wrist plate off the ground. "You can't even gauge your
enemies strength!" She said. My wrist plate caught fire. "I can gauge how you're going to burn though"
She pushed me off. "You want to kill me. That's cute!" She said. She soon got Sumera. "But you have
to kill her first."she said possessing her. Sumera's eyes glowed with the same Evil of Quinn's. She used
my armor to catch on fire. "This is nice." My neck was scorched with the searing heat of the fire. I saw
mom and dad look up. "Dad! Get them out of here!" I screamed throwing the wrist plate at them. "But
Lon!" Mom cried. "This is where I look Hell in the eye! This is where we atone for our sins!" I yelled.
Blackheart ran in with Gaz. "Look. Boy gets the girl just as she can watch him die!" She said laughing
and dropping me. She picked Blackheart up. He couldn't stand it. "Blackheart.." Gaz started sighing.
"Gaz take my Pak and use the Pak legs!" He said. "I know I didn't show it these last few weeks, but"
She sighed again. "I...Love...You." She said. He smiled and held her hand just as she took his Pak off and watched him die.
"Blackheart!" I yelled. Gaz used the legs to break a hole open in the wall. "my love... Thank you."
She said jumping out. "He chased her to his grave" I said to myself. "Ah poo, they got away, but I
still have you." She said laughing. I got my plate and threw it at the center of the armor. It fell apart.
"Sumera You are a hero" I said as her body burned. I had to run, for soon she would get up. "How do I
kill her?" I asked. The control board! It can self destruct. Even if I must go down with it. I pressed all
the buttons on the controls. "Self-Destruct in 10" I smiled. "You bitch!" Quinn screamed running in.
Covered in blood from her ghostly body she grabbed me. "You killed my family." "9" "And
Blackheart"
"8"
"You can kill my sister"
"7"
"Hell you can kill me!"
"6"
"But I know you're weak."
"5"
"So weak"
I was getting weaker as she drained my life.
"4"
" That you can't even hear."
"3"
"The truth"
"2"
"At least I know this"
"1"
"If I'm going down you're going down with me"
"0"
I laughed insanely as I heard the humming of the control board. My muscles relaxed as I heard it.
Outside the Ship you see a light flash of light and hear screaming. Laughing of Lon can be heard deep
within and you see it explode completely. The ship Gaz and everyone was on were in the range of the blast and crying and screaming can be heard within. Then it is silent. The echoes of the screams carry
on the air and dust is all that is left.
My View
Years ago this happened I remember it crystal clear. The day Irk won the war. I smile at these memoirs
and wish I could have been on that ship. Who am I? My name isn't important in fact I'm not in any
history books, stones, graves, or minds. My name will never be important, not like my husband who
suffered the ordeal of death. All I know is this.
Lon will be remembered forever.
Credit song: Finish the Fight (Halo 3)
Bibliography:
Dancing: In short Supply
Characters:
Zim: Jhonen
Tak: Jhonen
Dib: Jhonen
Sumera: Mine
Red: Jhonen
Purple: Jhonen
Blackheart: Tails Blackheart
Lon: Mine
Marrow: Mine
Malorie: Mine
Gaz: Jhonen
GIR: Jhonen
Rose: Mine
Kiatu: Mine
Champ: Mine
Mimi: Jhonen
All rights to Invader Zim belong to Viacom and
Jhonen Vasquez. 2008 no Copyrights
Sacramento CA,
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Okay that was the Original the Alternate will be up next. Cookie for who can guess who I am!