Hey guys! So, I'm back, whether you like it or not :D, and I've got more for you! I know, OMG. But here.
Right. Disclaimer. Well, you all know what THAT says, so I'll save you the annoyance of either reading or having to skip over it. :D I am just so nice and generous, aren't I?
Ash counted off on his fingers. One…two…three…four…That was thirty-three good deeds that he'd done to make up for thirty-three bad deeds. Only one more to go! He whooped with joy, only to realize: this was his worst deed of all. Then he plopped down onto the dirty ground and groaned his frustration at the clear blue sky, cursing himself to the deepest pits of Hell. Why the hell did he just run across the country when his last deed had been RIGHT IN FRONT OF HIM?
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Mary-Lynnette groaned enviously at her brother, Mark, and Jade, his vampire soulmate as, yet again, they held each other's hands and gazed adoringly into each other's eyes? The blissful smiles on their faces reminded Mary-Lynnette of her first kiss with Ash – her first kiss ever. It was awkward at first, but it was also wonderful, perfect – everything she'd hoped for in her first kiss. Unconsciously, she drifted off into happy memories of the short time she spent with Ash, arrogant Ash. She was still amazed that, supercilious as he was, they still managed to fall in love. Then she remembered that he wasn't with her – God knows where he was! She began worrying and wishing that she had never told Ash to leave her. All this heartache could NOT be healthy for her. Mary-Lynnette was not, all in all, ugly in any obvious way, but neither was she incredibly beautiful, like all vampires were. What if Ash had found someone else in his time away from her? Their soulmate status did not necessarily ensure that they be together, much as she wished it did.
Tears welled up in Mary-Lynnette's eyes. She quickly rubbed them away and steeled herself against her hypocritical thoughts. No, she thought fiercely, I have to believe that our love is as strong as ever. I have to believe that our love will bring him back to me.
Alrighty~! So? What do you think? Dudes, remember: this is my very very very very FIRST fanfic. It's gonna be pretty crappy. But it's okay. Because YOU are going to review and tell me how to fix all my crap and I am not gonna listen to you. No, jk! :DDD If you give me pointers, I will most definitely take them under consideration. So. Please do. :D Later!
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