an: ok! so i am NAWT happy with wat sum pplz said about me in the review secton! not nice! ok so sum1 caled me a TROLL! ummmmmmmmm u neva even saw a pic of me b4 idot so how do u no wat i look liek? hmmmmmm? HMMMMM!/
clue: u dnt!
also, another newsflash pplz, NO1 TALKS WITH PROPRE GRAMAR ON THE INTERNET! no1 no1 no1! if u do then u r just pathtic. lololololololol u nerds!
then sum1 said my story waz a joke, or sumthing like that! OBVIOUSLY ITS NOT REEL! its , I DNT OWN THE CHARCTERS1
ok, so here is te rest of my storY! (welll da next part :PPPPPP)
AN: Ok! So I am NOT happy with what some people said about me in the review section! Not nice! Ok so someone called me a TROLL(I am almost certain you are one)! Ummm, you have never seen a picture of me before idiot, so how do you know what I look like? Hmmm? HMMMMM!
Clue: You don't(I don't think she knows what a troll is)
Also, another newsflash people, NO ONE TALKS WITH PROPER GRAMMAR ON THE INTERNET(Actually, yes they do. It is one of the standards set on the site when you first get one.) No one, no one, no one! If you do then you are just pathetic. Lolololololol! You nerds. (You know, if it makes me not at all like you in anyway, I will gladly be called pathetic on a daily bases).
Then someone said my story was a joke or something like that! OBVIOUSLY IT'S NOT REAL!(She really likes exclamation points doesn't she?) its (still don't get why this is here) I DON'T OWN THE CHARACTERS! (That's not what he or she meant by joke dumbass.)
Ok, so here is the rest of my story! (well the next part :PPPP(Don't understand the point of the repeating tongue. It just makes the smiley look deformed)
there waz a boy there(Told you)! a super super coot boy(You are looking at a bird boy? I would freak out). he had red haor that kind of went over his eyes, but not REALY. He was waring a school robe(At least someone actually wears the uniform. Spares me having to read a page long description of clothing) (and it was a satuday so there wasnt even scool that day! he was sooooooooo dedicated1!) He looked SUPER SEXIIIII! like so sexy. He allso had a pare of skiny jeans on(I thought he was wearing the uniform. God Damn it!)! i could KIND of c his bump (ok now get the pic out of ur head becuz thats grosse!)(Then why did you even say anything?)
"hey how r u?" he said. his voice was soooo sexiii! It was liek sum1 had taken melted buter and poured it all down my body(…O_o..)! sooo sexi. and then i talekd back:
"Good" i said.
"Thts good!" he said bac and then walked away( Very riveting conversation there). I watched him walk way until i seen where he was goig.
"OH MY FUK! HES A GRIFINDOR!" i screamed as i through my toast at a gressy hared boi in front of me. he waz realy grosse with greesy hair and pimpels all over his face. EWWWWWWW! (Well aren't you a bowl of peaches)(He was only a third year tho so i guesse most 3d years go thrugh that problem(I'm happy you are SOOOO understanding). well i didn't(Of course), neiter did my friend (who ull meeet soon i think! lololol (that was a clue 4 the future of the story!1 "WINK WINK!") and evry1 said we had prefect skin!)
O, anyway, so after i screamed and though the toast at the grosse boy i stood up and stormed out of the hall. thats when i met my friend, Rose Delcure)(she is relatted 2 flere from the movies! she is her first cousin) (I do not recall a Flere Delcure, if you are talking about Fleur Delacour however. And of course your friend is part veela.)
Rose was very very beutiful (although pplz said that i was prettier(Naturally)) she had blunde hair tht she wore with bengs over 1 eye. (her left eye so ur rite eye) she also wore eyeliner (liek kind of thick stuff but not 2 thik. just the perfect ammount. (rose is very good at puting on makup) This day she had on a emo shirt tht said "im emo' with a broken hart. and skinny jeans, and coot shoes(She is wearing birds for shoes? Nice). she looked very hawt!
"hi Tahirah" (thts my name!)
"hi rose" i siad bac
"how r u" rose said bac
"good" i said bac
"thats good" rose said bac
"omg guess wat rose!" i scremed
"wat" rose said exctiedly
"i saw a realy coot boi in the grate hall. he said hi to me!" i said
"omg omg omg! wat did he look liek?" rose said jumping on her feet.
"he had red hair and it went over 1 of his eyes! and he was wearing realy realy realy hawt clothes! like skiny jeans. his bum was prefect!" i said bac 2 rose
"OMG! he is RON WEASLEY(Ok, I know the Weasley's were some of the only red haired at school, but there has to be more than that. So that description could mean just about any red haired boy. And weren't you just pissed off because he was a Gryffindor?)" (an: oh! yea, i never new rons last name had a a in it!i thout u pplz were ling (Why would they lie to you on how to properly spell the "love of your life's" name?)but i googled it and u where rite! srry, i wil change the title of the story if i can!)rose yelled at me
"who" i asked bac 2 rose
"he is this REALY REALY REALY hawt emo tht all the girls LUV LUV LUV. me too of corse! but whenever a girl tryes 2 talk 2 him heliek dsnt talk bac and he like just walks away(The Ron I know would respond to a girl)! ur sooooo lucky tht he talked 2 u!" rose scramed
"OMG!" i scramed
"OMG!" rose screamed bac
"But wait!" i said stopping scream
"wat" rose asked
"hes in grifindor" i said bac with a tear roling down my cheak.(Oh, you remembered hy you threw the toast now did you? And it's really not all that bad so stop crying.)
"omg! i 4got" rose said bac and she stated to cry 2.
"he was perfect beside tht 2" i yelled angy
"i no" rose said bac
so then me and rose went bac 2 the commum room and cut and sat and cired in our beds cause we where sad(Because that is what normal people do). so we staied there the rest of the day. we even cut ourselfs a little near the end of the day becuz it suced. ron weasley semed perfect BESIDES THE FACT THT HE WAS A GRIFINDOR!( Great reason to cut yourself. That's why I do it).
why did he have 2 b a grifindor? (Because he is brave an that is where the sorting hat put him. Did you even use the sorting hat, or did you just sit at a random table?)
2 b continued!
tell me wat u think! (You don't want to know what I think.)