An; so u pplz are still saying i look liek a troll when NONE OF U HAVE EVER SEEN A PIC OF ME B4. wow i thout this plcae was supose 2 b mature. i guess nawt RIGHT. sure i may b a little overwait but NOT MUCH no more thn a normal grl my age. so stuf PLZ ok.

and i allready told u no1 uses gramar on the internet, ITS THE INTERNET. omg. u pplz r so retarted. lol. retards.

so, here i the rest of my story!

AN: So you people are still saying I look like a troll when NONE OF YOU HAVE EVER SEEN A PICTURE OF ME BEFORE. Wow, and I thought this place was supposed to be mature(Everything that you have put in this "story" is not Mature, so what exactly are you complaining about?) . I guess not RIGHT! Sure I may be a little overweight, but NOT MUCH more than a normal girl my age. So stop PLEASE ok (I still don't know how I made that out).

And I already told you, no one uses grammar on the internet, IT'S THE INTERNET. Omg, you people are so retarded. Lol, retards(I don't think it is cool to call people retarded, but since you are saying that people who use correct grammar are retards, I will say it to you. You are a retard because you don't use correct grammar).

So, here is the rest of my story!

i woke up the next moning (which was sunday becuz the day b4 was saturday becuz they had no lcasses so tht makes 2day sunday!(Why did you have to clarify that for us? I really don't think we care at this point.) ) my rists where sore becuz i was cuting them all day yestreday with rose. there was dired up blod all over my rist but i didnt care. i hated the fact tht ron weasley was in grifindor(Great reason to cut your wrists). IT MADE ME SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MADDDDD! he was soooo perfet 4 me, becuz he was emo and i was emo. but i dnt date wuld b a betryal of slitherin. so i got out of my pijamas (wich where: blak slky pijama patns and a bagy t-shirt whicg was blac wit broken harts and skuls al over it (And we care why?)becuz i was soooo sad becuz of how ron was a grifiondor (will you stop complaining about it please!)nd so i wore tht tshit becuz it was an emo tshirt and thts why i wore it!)

I chaged into: a vry lowcut mini shirt. it was made of lather and was super super super sexi. i also put on vry long blac soncks with skuls on them. then i put on a tshirt that was tight and shoewd of my braest realy realty good. (but dnt look there becuz thts disgusting ok!) it had on whit skuls and pink buterflys coming frm the skuls. it was realy COOT! finnaly i put on my shos tht i got tht every1 else wanted. i looked super super coot in the miror!(That's the life of a Mary Sue.)

when i had finshed chaning(What were you chaining?) i walked don 2 the slitherin commumm room. pplz turned 2 star at me when i walked down(Maybe they realized how stupid you are). but i igored all of them nad walked over 2 rose who was siting in the conor (She was sitting on someone named Conner? I'm sure they loved that. I wonder how comfortable that is?) by the fireplace. she loked sad so i never said anything but just sat next 2 her.

finnaly after wht seemed liek 4EVER rose finnaly spoek!

"im so sad tht ron is a grifindoer" she said(why does she care?)

"i no me 2" i said bac(Seriously, it's getting old. Get over it if it bothers you that much.)

"hes soooo coot 2" rose said bac

"i no, hes is coot" i said bac

"i just wish he culd ba slitherin" rose said

"i no, me 2" i said bac

"i think i ned 2 cut my rist agin" rose said finnaly after liek 2 minets of not saying anyhing.

"me 2" i said bac

so rose and i got razors frm ur roms and we used them 2 cut iurselves on ur rist. it hurt but it felt good qat the same time becuz he made us releise ur pain. we cut urselves all moruing untill lunch time.(Because that is healthy.)

when it was finnaly lunch time me an roe went down 2 the great hall and to eat lunch. 4 lunch i dediced 2 have:

chickne and fires and orange juice ad a cookie 4 desert and stuf liek that. it was realy good.(What was the point in saying that?)

but, after i ate it all i didn fell good becuz i was still sad tht ron was a grifindor. i told rose this and she sad tht i was 2 good 4 him and tht it was his lost so i said:

"ur rite" i said

and then 2gheter me and rose walked out of the great hall 2gheter and we where kind of hapier than b4 becuz now i new i was 2 good 4 ron. but, just as we where exciting the great hall we saw a flsh of red hair and herd a hot, sexii, sweat, beutiful voice. liek the voice of a angle.

"h-h-h-h-h-h-h-hiiiiiii Tahirah" he said.

i locked up and saw tht it was ron. rose gave a litle screem an then ran away out the great hall dors 2 the outside. i was all along with ron.

"ohh, hi ... grifindor" i said making my voice s evil as posible 2 make him relise tht i ddnt like gifidors. but it was hard 2 make an evil voice becuz he was so hot and sexii. (Again we are shown the marvelous gift Mary Sues seem to have. The uncanny ability to forget all their angers and problems when a hot and sexy guy is around.)

"i no tht ur a slitherin and im a grifindor and ussualy we pplz dnt get along well(No shit.)." ron said

i said nothing.

"but, ive beem asked out by alot of grls at this school(Since when? I love you Ron, but you're not exactly a stud muffin). but ive never been intrested in any of them. they wrnt pritty enuf or they where 2 meen. but, u seem difernent(*cough* Mary Sue *cough*). u seem sweat and nice, and ur probly he most beutiful grl ive ever seen as this school.(repeat of last comment)" ron said

i said nothing aggin, but a teer was beging 2 roll down my cheak.

"so, Tahirah(I am still not getting her name)" ron said

but i ssaid sumthing b4 he could finsh:

"Call me tay" i said trying 2 keep an evil voice but it was hard becuz he was soo coot and sexii.

"ok, tay. wuld u liek 2 go out with me." ron said.

"OMG! OMG! OMG!" i scramed

"YES! u r so sexii!"

ron smiled and 2gether we walked out of the great hall dors!

2 b continued! (tell me wat u think! but TALK ABOUT MY STORY THIS TIME!)(They were talking about your story before in the reviews. And I don't think you really want to know what they think about your "story".)

I forgot to count up the Mary Sue qualities in the last chapter so I will have to do both chapters now I guess.

Last Chapter:

She doesn't have bad skin

She has a beautiful best friend/side kick yet the main character was still prettier even though her friend has veela in her.

Has a weird ass name

Her future lover is liked by all the girl but only gives her the time of day.

This Chapter:

She describes her clothes in to much detail.

Ron thinks that she is different and special. She is the only girl he gives the time of day to.

The next chapter will either be later today or mid-afternoon tomorrow.