This is actually the longest chapter yet.
An: ok so u pplz r VERY rude. i sugest u fcking stop it RITE NOW. its pathtic! serriousy, pplz saying im ugly, n pplz
saying all kinds of other shit. its horible. i am writing, NO1 CAN STOP ME. OK. IF U DNT LIEK IT THEN DNT READ IT
IDOTS! HONETLY U PPLZ R ALL RETARDED. I U ALL KEEP SAYING HOW MUCHB U HATEB MY STORY BUT u ALL FCKING LEEP READING IT
ANYWAYS.
THATS RETARTRED.
ok so 4 those pplz u actualy care, hers th e rest of myt story!
!(Random explanation point)
AN: Ok, so people are VERY rude. I suggest you fucking stop it RIGHT NOW. It's pathetic! Serriously, people are saying I am ugly and people are saying all kinds of other shit. It's horrible
I am writing, NO ONE CAN STOP ME. OK! IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT, DON'T READ IT.
IDIOTS! HONESTLY PEOPLE ARE ALL RETARDED (I wonder when she will stop using all caps). YOU ALL KEEP SAYING HOW MUCH YOU HATED MY STORY, BUT YOU ALL FUCKING KEEP READING IT.
ANYWAYS, THAT'S RETARDED.
Ok, (Yay, she is finally done with caps.) so for those people who actually care (Who does though? Seriously, give me one good review you have gotten that wasn't your sister.) here's the rest of my story!
ron an i where walking outside 2gether. we were holding each others hands. his hands where so soft, yet hard at the same (That is possible how?)
tmie(Does any one understand this?). they where amzing hands. they where sio much biger then my hands so my hands git perfectly into his hans. he made me
fel protected u c.
we where walking down the great hall sdteps 2gether outside the great hall. every1 outside turned 2 star at us.
"Is that Tahirah with RON WEASLEY?" I herd every1 saying. (Why do they care?)
"I herd that ron dndt go out with any girls!" I herd other pplz saying. (That is not completely true. Has anyone seen Hermione yet?)
"She must b sumthing special." I herd other pplz saying who never said naything tht was said above. (This sentence so doesn't make sense.)
i blushed becuz i was embarsed. but i was happy 2 becuz ron was super sexi and hawt and coot and emo (It's all about looks). his skinny jeans showed
his bum prefectly i reely wanted 2 grab it (nice) but i resited. he akso had on a plain wite tshirt. it went over his mucles
perfectly and showed of his realy sexii arms! i put my arms arund his arms and felt his strong muscles. SOOOO HAWT! (We get the point)
"lets sit under the tree" ron said
"k" i said bac
"k" ron said bac (She writes the best dialogue, so deep)
and the 2 of us went and sat under the tree. we never said much we just sat there. pretty soon a hole bunch of girlks satated
2 sloly come up 2 us quitly and under the bushes but i saw them first. they were realy young liek in 2nd year or sumthing
ithink but i wasnt sure.
"GTFO OUT OF HREE BITCHES!" iscramed at the top of my longs and they all went runing awy. (Wow aren't you the nicest person ever.)
"stopid bitches" i said 2 ron
"there just jealus" ron said bac (Because everyone is jealous of…..what is this characters name again.)
"i no" i said bac 2 ron
"dnt let them bother u" ron said bac 2 me
"i wont" i said bac 2 ron
"good" ron said bac 2 me.
then ron tuned 2 me and ooked me stait in the eye.
"ur the most icirdible grli ever met" he said 2 me
"ur the msot incridible boy i ever net" i said bac 2 him
then, he bliked his hawt, sexi eyes and brushed his hawt sexi red hir out ofhis eyes. sloyl he leened in. we where geting
close, closer, closer!
"OMG! U FCKING BASTARD!" i scarmed (WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR!)
i ran away a fast as i culd. omg omg omg. he was a grifindor! how culd i have forgten?
i had forgoteen!
NOO!
NOOO!
NOOOOOOO!
i betayed slitheinb. (I'm pretty sure no one would really care in real life.)
he was a bastard! he tied 2 sedoce me! with his good looks ans his sexii smile, and air, and eyes, and
skinty jeans, and bum.
NOOO!
he used me! (In what way?)
noooooo!
i ran up 2 the commum room and there i took out a rasor blad and used it 2 cut mysekf in the rists over aned over and over
and over again.
my rists where beleding ZBUT I DIDNT CARE! (I would care if I was bleeding, but that's just me. I must have this weird thing about dying.)
ron was a bastard
"hes a bastard"! i scramed at the top of my lungs!
"fck him dead! (LOL! I laughed so hard at this sentence. I'm going to scream fuck you dead to my friend Landon and see what he said.)" i screamed again at ht top of my longs!
"i deserve beter!" i screamed against the top of my lung!Q!
soon the blod was going EVERYWHERE
EVERYWHERE (Maybe you should talk to someone)
it was all over the place ansd so iwas losing 2 much OMG OMG!
OMG!
I WAS FANTING !
i felt ligheaded!
the ropm was spinng faster and fastesr and FASTER AND FASTER AND FASTER!
nooooo
noooooooo
nooooooooooooooooo1!
everything wenty blac! (Are you dead? Please dear god be dead.)
!RONS POV!
omg? why did she just doo tht 2 me? (I'm still a little confused too.)
wht did i do? (I have no idea.)
i dnt no!
i stated 2 cry rite there under the tree. i didnt no wat to do. Tay had just brokn my hart! i gave he4r everything! (You have been dating all of one day.)
and then she tok it up and broke it into amilion smitlerinzines! how culd she do this 2 me? HOWWW? i didnt no.
all i new was that Tay had sumthing wrong with me and i intentd 2 find out wht. so i march ran as quicly as i culd up 2 go 2
the castle and opebn the front sdoors 2 the grate hall. but thts when i saw harry, and he waved me foward.
"ron is the romor tru?" harry scarmed at me and he loked angry.
"what romor?" i said bac 2 harry
"that u are dateing a slitherin! (Didn't know it was a rumor. Thought it was more of a fact.)" harry yeled as lud bas he culd 2 me grls close by trned arond and
stared at the 2 of us. they were kind of coot. but not realy (Then why even mention anything). and then i thoght oh Tahira and my hart gave a guilt tugy
feling. i looked bac at the grls and they looked ugly now.
"soooooooooo!"""" harry sdcar,ed bac 2 me again. i looked harry rite in the eys. harry was soo hawt. his sexi eyes and hair. (Where the hell did that all come from?)
i even saw heis abs evry nite when he took of his shirt 2 go 2 bed. they where perfect! i then tought
ofTahirah. she was mad at me. and i didnt no why. mayb it ws a hint that harry was my tru luv!" (Really? Yes of course, that is exactly what it means.)
"those romors are FALSE" i scareamed 2 harry. he smiled and he looked so sexi at the same time. i didnt reget my desision.
"good" harry said bac 2 me.
i never confeshed my tru fellings 2 harry b4. i think he new i was bisexieul. i thought tht wuld b the time. (You never mentioned these feelings before.)so ileaned
4ward, and oloking harry rite in the eyes i kised him. i puled away from my lips his lisp ands we stared at each iother 4 a
second. the grls tht were next 2 us gasped in suprise. harry turn raound 2 them.
"OBVIBULAE" he scareamed 2 them.
"wht did u do" i asked harry
"whipped there meories" he said
"now stop talking and kiss me agan" he said 2 me. (They can still see you know? You're just going to have to wipe their memories again. And again. It will be like that scene from Men In Black.)
i leened 2ward and kised harry again. this time with more pasiont. we kissed in2 the bloom cupbord and clsed the door bhind (When did you go into the broom cupboard?)
us!
2 b continued (SHOCING CHAPTER! (Damn straight. I still don't know what is going on.) i no! tell me way u think. i no it was boring at first, but thins are staring 2 heet up!)
Mary-Sue count time.
Everyone is jealous of her for no reason
The guy who she is dating is a big deal to everyone else
Just the same old same old stuff
Next chapter tomorrow.
So there is this other story that I found in the Glee archives. It is called Da Princess in da glee club. It is hilariously stupid. In the comments, people have been leaving flames role playing as the Glee characters AND as Harry Potter characters since it was mentioned in the story. I kinda want to do a commentary on that, but I would really like to finish my own fanfiction first as well as this commentary. But look it up. Flame and report. The other stories this "author" has written are equally as bad. The author is racist, stupid, and makes child abuse seem like a regular occurrence. I would say more but I don't want to give it away.
See you later!