Yay! Another update. So first things first, thank you for all the reviews I haven't previously thanked for. And a special thanks to Sev'slittlesecret for pointing out the mistake in the title. I must have been high when I wrote it. High on life mind you. So I am pretty much always high. Except when I read this story; I lost my buzz and wanted to kill something. But back to the point, thank you for pointing that out. And everyone, don't hesitate to point a mistake out to me that I have made. It will in the long run make me a better writer.
So on with the monstrosity!
AN: haers fck of k. ther where sum of u who where nice tho so i gues thts ok. also stop threting me plz. ts very rud u no. so stfu and get a life idiots and tarerd. if u sad nice things 2 me thn u can stay! :)
also th9is idot has been steling my storys and making fun of them. STOP IT SLT. ur pathetic u no tht? becuz u r? i red the reviews 4 her stry and every1 was so pateic making fun of my dtory. u pplz r fcking rud. just 4 ur fyi the man caracter is fcking 18 retartds, not 12. pplz kep sayingit was grosse 4 a 12 yar old 2 kis a old person but the man charcter ISNT 12, way 12 year old is in luv ertards. 4 pplz who think there smrt u pplz r realy stipid.
AN: Haters fuck off ok. There were some of you who were nice though (Who?) so I guess that's ok. Also stop threatening me people (Who did that?) It's very rude you know. So STFU and get a life idiots and retards (Someone give me a medal for finding out what the hell tarred was.) If you said nice things to me, then you can stay! :)
Also, this idiot has been stealing my stories and making fun of them. STOP IT SLUT. You are pathetic, you know that? Because you are. I read the reviews for her story and everyone was so pathetic, making fun of my story. You people are fucking rude. Just for your FYI, the main character is fucking 18 (Then how the fuck is she still at Hogwarts? I mean it is possible, but really bloody unlikely) retards, not 12. (She certainly acts like it. Well maybe not the whole almost having sex in a hallway.)
me an ron where waking bac 2 the casle. it was geting dark out. it was stil sundy so we had scool tmrow.
"fck school" i yeled and ron laghed at me. (He probably laughed because you were "yeleding", what ever the hell that is.)
"lol" he siad.
"but i hat it" i said 2 ron hoping he wuld undersdtn.
"me 2" ron said bac 2 me
"its stopid" i said bac 2 ron
"i no wat u men" ron said bac 2 me
"do u no wat?" i said 2 ron
"wat" ron sad bac 2 me
"we sholdnt go 2 scool 2morow" i said bac2 ron
"wel get in truble" ron said bac 2 me
"oh ur suh a gody 2shos" i said bac2 ron
"no bu we hav 2 go to schol" ron said bac2 me
"we hav potons al moning 2morow with tht retardt snape an he tinks ur ded" i sadi bac 2 ron
"god pont!" ron said bac 2 me relizning my point
"i no" i said bac2 ron
"wat shuld me do?" ron said bac2 me ("What should me do?" lol, for some reason I keep picturing Golem saying that.)
"i dnt no" i said bac 2 ron
" mayb we shuld gide" ron said ba 2 me
"but where?" i sad bac 2 ron
"i dnt no" ron said bac 2 me
the 2 of us walsed in silnts (What is a silnts?) 4 a wile until we cam 2 the great ghal. we loked up onthe bultin bord and thn we saw a avrtisement. it sad tht blink182 (No offence to Blink182 fans, but I really fucking hate that band.) wuld b in england tht monday (which was tmrw!)(No shit. You said you had school tomorrow and a couple of chapters ago you said it was Sunday.)
"omg!" i sacrmed
"i luv blik182" i sarcmed again
"me 2 " ron scared.
"lets go c thm tmrw" i said 2 ron
"omg yes!" ron said 2 me
"yess!" i sracemd again
"i luv u ron!" i topld him and then we waked awy 2 ur sparted huses!
i put on ym oijamas (ia blac shit tht had 2 harts on it one was re n the other was pink and ht 2 harts where belding and the shirt sad: my hart is borkem then i put on my piajama pnts thy where blac sweet pans. the other slithinr grls i sared a rom with where starting at me becuz i loked so hapy when usly i dint. (You wake up and say what a beautiful morning it is. I think they were probably starring because they are trying to find out how someone could get away with never wearing the fucking school uniform.)
"godnight sbitces" i scraedm 2 them and thn went 2 bed for the night.
i wok up erly the next m,orning becuz i was ecited 2 go c blink182. i suck dwn 2 the gret hal but insted of going in i went otside and wated 4 ron. it was rely werly so ther wast many pplz outside. i waited there 4 abut 20 mintes until ron came out 2 c me.
"omg!" i scarmed and ran 2 him and kissed him on the lps.
" how r u" i askled him.
"good" he said bac 2 m,e
"thts good" i said bac 2 him
"so r u excited" i said 2 him
"yes" he sid bac 2 me
"me 2" i said bac 2 him
"thts good" he sad bac 2 me (Some day, I hope to write dialogue that deep and emotional.)
"so r u redy 2 go?" i said bac2 him
"yea" he said bac 2 me
"ok so hopw r we going 2 get to engand?" i said 2 ron (At least she know that Hogwarts is not actually located in England, but in Scottland.)
"i hav an ida folow me" ron said bac 2 me
"ok" i said bac 2 rom.
so i folowed ron runing acros the schoolyard (Hogwarts has a school yard?). he looked so sexii in his skiny jens and his tgop. it showd his muscles perfeclty.
"ur so hawt" i told him wen we rached whever we where ging.
"thnx u 2" he sdaid bac 2 ,e
"thx" i said bac 2 him
'so way r we doin" i asid 2 hm
"where takin broms from the shed and suing them 2 fly 2 englang" ron said bac 2 me
"omg! god plabn!" i shuted to ron (GOD PLABN!)
"thx" he said bac 2 me
the ron went and tok out 1 brome from the shed.
"wat abut me?" i said 2 ron
"ur rid behind me" he said with a sexi smil.
"omg1 thts realy coot" i said 2 ron
"i no" ron said bac 2 me
so then me and ron flow 2gether 2 england 2 c blink182. we got thr jst intime and so we went an sa the cocert. after the concrt we got out.
"tht was a goed concert" i said 2 ron
"i no" ron said bac 2 me
"now were do we go?" i said 2 ron
"i dnt want 2 go bac 2 scool" ron sad bac 12 me
"why snt we get a hotl" i aked ron
"good idea" ron said bac 2 me
so thn me and ron went 2 get a gotel rom. we got a realy nice 1 in a fany hotel and went up there.
"this is nice" i sai 2 ron
"yea" ron said bc 2 me
then he quikly cam over and kised me on the lips.
"ur lips tast good!" i said 2 ron
"so do urs' he said bac 2 me
then he kised me again nd thensd he kised my hole body untilf he tok of my shirt an then he tok of my pants. then he took f ho his pnts and then put his dickn in2 me. it feltso god. (I love it when it feels God)
"this fels so god" i said 2 ron
" is it ur frst tim" ron said bc 2 me
"yes" i said bac 2 ron (Then you should be screaming out in pain. It fucking hurts the first time. Actually, it hurts the first FEW times.)
"good i want it 2 b spcil" ron said bac 2 me
"its wih u so it wil b" i said 2 ron
"ok" ron said bac 2 me
so then ron kept fcking me ove and ovr agin until he finaly was finshed then he tok ot his dick frm me and thn we put ur clotes bac on.
"tht felt god" i said 2 ron
"i no" ton said bac 2 me
"well i think we shuld probly go bac 2 hogwarts" i said 2 ron (Real special first time.)
"yea" ron said bac 2 me
so the 2 ofaus wnt 2 the bromstik and flew bac 2 hogwrts and we said by and we left 4 our commum rooms. t was a day i wuldnt 4get in my entire klife.
2 b continued (told u it wuld ba good chapte! tay lost her virginty 2 ron, so coot! tell me way u thinkl! SO LONG AS UR NICE) (This chapter wasn't as bad as your other ones but I wouldn't celebrate is as being good.)