an: if u hav sumthing men 2 say DNT DAY IT RETARDS k. u pplz jus say the same thin over and ovder agin and its stipud so STOP okay.

now her is the rest of mty stoy!

AN: If you have something mean to say DON'T SAY IT RETARDS ok. (I love how she says to not say anything mean and then she calls us retards.) You people say the same thing over and over again and it's stupid. So stop okay. (Maybe you should take a hint then.)

Now, here is the rest of my story!

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i wok uyp the next day erly after the conert. it was a tueday and so i had potons forst. so went dwn 2 the dumons an tok a set in the bac of class with rose.

"hi wher where u yeterday" she said 2 bme

"il tel u abut it latr" i said bac2 her

"k" she sad bac 2 me (don't you share a dorm room together? Couldn't you have told her last night?)

then al of a sudon snape cam in and told us ll 2 stfu.

"stfu idiots (I want this version of Snape to teach one of my classes.)" he sdared to us. evry1 stf afte he sad tht. he loked very angery and mad. rose and i imedately stoed taking becuz we new wev b in big truble if we ddnt stop talking. the clas was silnt an d we al waited 4 snape 2 talk agin.

"so 2day i hav news" he said an he lokaed vry mad abut sumthing.

"we hav a new studnt tih us/" he said 2 us al and he loked evn masder.

"who"evry1 was sraying. snape gav us a lok tht told us top stfu or hed kil us.

"ron weaslrey" he said an them pertnded 2 thro up in2 the garbag can nct 2 him. (Are you sure he was pretending?)

"omg!" i scarmed jst as reon cam in2 thea calsrom.

"hi tya!" i yeled 2 me and rawn over 2 met me and st dwn next 2 me.

"wat r u doing her?" i aked ron.

"STUF RETAREDTS (What stuff?)!" snape scarmmed. "u pplz r fciung retaresded!" he scared again. evry1 shu up after tht and we went along with the erest of teh clas becuz we new wed b in truble if we taked 4 the rest of eteh clase so we didt tak until after the clsas. when the class was ovr we went ont in2 the halway and i kiswed ron.

"OMG WHY R U A SLSITHRIN NOW?" i sacrmed and kised him agin. (Since when can people change houses?)

"becuz i culdnt b awy frm u durng the nites and stuff (of course he couldn't)!" ron said 2 me nd hten HE kised ME!

"omg i am so excited!" i scaremd

"so way do we hav next?" ron said 2 me fater we finshed kissing in the hal

" we hav creturs next!'i saiads 2 ron so we ewnt 2gethr ad walked 2 hargids hut in the outide of the schol. hagrid was ther and e was wtih this hors with wins.

"hi haggrid! (Why is it no one can spell Hagrid's name? He deserves a hug for having to be put through all of this crap.) "i sad 2 him and he wavd bac 2 me

"hi tay an ron" he said 2 me and ron.

"wat do u hav her?" i said 2 haggrsid

"a hilopgrit" he sad ac 2 me adn ron

"cool' ron said 2 ahgrgid.

so thn 4 the nxt clas we did stuf with hagrid dn lerned how 2 proply care 4 the anmal and stuf lik eth. the clss ende in n hur. (NO WAY! You learned how to care of an animal in Care Of Magical Creatures class!)

"tht was a god clas" i said 2 ron

"yea" he said bac 2 me

so thn me and ron awked 2 the slitherin commum rom 2gthr.

"im so hapy ur a slitherin now" i said 2 ron

"me2" he asid bac 2 me

thne we kised 4 a while. plz stared at us agbut i dfint mina it was k with me. just whn me and on wher going 2 gos bnac 2 my bd rose ran in.

"OMG! RON ASDN TAY UB 2 HAV 2 COM HER!"

2 b contninued! )tell me wat u think)