Okay...I didn't really expect the reviews that I was getting to chapter 15. So, since I don't want to ruin people reading the third installment of the story. I decided to rewrite chapter 15. It will still basically have the same outcome, Light having Serah's baby, but I plan on going about it differently.
I should apologize, I didn't mean to give the impression of Lightning being ambushed by everybody and basically forced into it.
In a way, I should thank you all for the reviews that tore the chapter apart, it, in turn, sparked a completely new concept for the final chapter (which I'll be working on soon) and then the third installment of the series.
Don't for one second think that you guys made me feel bad about the chapter. I didn't see what you guys saw when I wrote the chapter. Once you all pointed it out to me, that's when I saw it and realized how bad the chapter really was.
Keep an eye out for the new ending. Should be up in a few days!