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Chapter 3 - RilexHorton - This chapter made me laugh so hard my mother came in to make sure I was okay!

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Chapter 4 - alsin - FREAKING LOVED IT

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Sorry I sent 7 home last week! My bad DX but we kind of knew those people were going home? Right? Sorry...

and thank you for all your jokes, especially the one about muffins:) and lastly GINGERBEAST Did you read chapter one? ;) glad you liked it anyway!

And for a bunch of people that reviewed saying she wouldn't like Dylan or anybody else I am just trying to make it realistic, she doesn't know anybody has wings and this is her first time meeting everybody and has nothing against them so yeah...just read!

Yawning, I rose from my bed and immediately collapsed again. I had to choose who was I going on the one-on-one date with today as Chris informed me last night.

He said if I don't like them then they go home right away. So I considered just choosing someone really obnoxious then sending them home, but I figured you have to spend all day with them and 5 go home this week anyway. Sam? Matt? Not Dylan, being him I already know he would try and kiss me. What about Fang? I mean I am almost positive he wouldn't kiss me, plus he is sarcastic and for once a guy is taller than me! I guess U will just think about it...

I trudged down the stairs in the huge house (that I live by myself in!) into the kitchen, and pleased seeing the kitchen was stocked with things other than stale bagels and easy stuff that I couldn't even mess up (to badly) I poured some cereal, toast in the toaster and a cup full of juice. I missed Ella it was kind of lonely being by myself... HOLY CRAP! A 72 inch TV? I get to watch my horror movies and not Ella's HGTV? AND basically every movie imaginable? Win.

I was half way through Zombieland and the phone rang.

"Yeah?"

"Oh yes, Max?" it was Chris, joy.

"Uh-huh, Bhahahahahahahhaha..."

"Max?"

"Sorry Chris, watching a really funny movie..."

"Ah, so have you given any thought to who you would like to go with tomorrow?"

"Yes, and I choose... Sang. I mean Sam, no Fang! Er Mam, Matt, wait no no no I choose Fang." I stammered

"Are you sure?" Chris sounded worried, kind of like my guidance counselor in high school.

"Yes."

"Okay, any idea what you would like to do? We have to approve of course."

"Just like real life right?" no sound came from the other end of the line, "Not funny? Okay, well we are near Vegas right? Can we go gambling?"

"Yes if you would like, we could give you each a certain amount of money but we have other options, little boat rides, horse drawn carriage..."

"Nope. Gambling is good."

"Okay, one more activity and dinner preference?"

"Got any 4 wheelers? Or something that gives you kind of an adrenaline rush? And for dinner...Oh! Any good burger joints in Vegas?"

"We can get ahold of some I'm sure, but that isn't a great way to bond. I mean what about horseback riding on a vineyard?" He tried to coax me, but all he did was reassure my plans, "As for food, yes I am sure there is a good burger place, but isn't that really public? I mean with the cameras and stuff, how about getting them to go? OR there are very many private, romantic, delicious gourmet food."

"Okay. To the to go. Not to the fancy place." he had me there, I didn't want to be stared at in public furthering my humiliation.

"Fine." he did NOT seem very pleased.

"Okay so bye."

"We have to, this is a show about falling in love Max, not running around and having fun like a few teens!" he was stern, and somewhat scary.

"So you think I am a child?" I retorted.

"No, forgive me Max." it sounded forced and unwilling, like someone just told him to knock it off.

"Fine, well if thats all..." I quickly turned my attention back to Bill Murray being shot.

"No that's not all! You have to write a note to Fang so we can give it to him, give him a hint or clue to the date, without telling him what, then someone will drop it off for you and would you like to fly or drive to Vegas?"

Okay, that caught my attention. "Fly?"

"Yes private jet."

"Oh," Did I actually just think he meant 'Yes we will all fly with out wings! I got mine I the Target, go to love a good bargain!'

"Yeah sure whatever. So I have to leave him a mysterious note that I don't even drop off? He is going to think it is a ransom or kidnap or something! That is so retarded."

"Yes okay, but that how we have always done it and you should be respectful-"

"Okay got it bye." I hung up the phone angrily. Chris has some freaking nerve. I got the pile of fancy notecards and tried to decide what to write.

"Speed and awesome greasy food awaits!" No.

"Lets bet all your money!" No.

"I'm going to whoop your butt in both things we are-" Had to stop early it was an Epic Fail.

"We are NOT going to sky dive tomorrow." Wait, I kind of liked that! It's a clue, I just narrowed out what we ares definitely NOT doing! Hah! Win. I signed my name and called my Mom

Of course Nudge answers, I have to describe everyone and it took a year and a half.

"Hey, I really gave to go, important stuff to tend too." I lied.

"Oh! Sure go ahead! Good luck! Call back in a hurry! Oh please please do! Right okay bye!" ah, gullible teen.

Zombieland was over by the time I finished the cards and phone call. I took a hot shower. The rain shower that fell gently right above my head was pretty freaking awesome.

I slipped into more comfort clothes, and my brown wet curls soaked the back of my shirt. Now pretty bored and it was nearly time for dinner. I am thinking Taco Bell. The best part, I called and some one brought me Taco Bell! Oh the few joys of being on this show.

I went to bed early because I had positively nothing else to do, I could think about the group date, but since there are so many going, the show plans it. Like they plan my clothes. And the men I have to date.

In the morning one of my stylists, Hubert, barges in and starts yelling in French and rushing around getting me ready. He shampoos my hair, and styles it perfectly. He made my hair lay flat, and the the ends curled ever so slightly, and bounced whenever I moved. I hated it.

"Can't I have a ponytail? I'm going to be 4 wheeling..."

"No! Never mess with perfection!" he slapped my hand away.

"Don't touch me." I scowled.

He finished in silence, gave me a fitted white short sleeved shirt. A black cropped jacket, styled like a cool leather jacket, but it's not. Some silver dangly necklaces, grey jeggings, and black flats. Its not as bad as it could have been, but it's pretty bad. If I could ditch the jewelry and the flats, get some real jeans and a real leather jacket I would be good. So that just leaves the shirt that's okay.

"You are superior. So radiant." he clapped his hands together surveying his work. "Little bit less blush next time, yes? Ah okay, I have to get going. Ta ta!"

Chris calls immediately after and tells me to go to the guys house, where the cocktail part was held, he told me Fang is waiting.

I drove in the $80,000 convertible given, and it had a GPS telling me everywhere to go. I never really learned how to drive all that well, since I have quicker ways of transportation, but I know it well living with Ella. I will make Fang drive us to the airport to get on the jet. After white knuckling it all the way to their house, ( I really don't want to wreck that car ) I hop out, suddenly feeling a bit sick to my stomach as I see all the cameras and Fang walked out.

He was in dark jeans, and a dark grey shirt. His hair swooped over his right eye and he just gave a small smile and walked out, he even looked a bit...green?

"Hey."

"Hey...well we better go we have a plane to get too." he turned even greener.

"Okay."

"How about you drive?"

"Well, er, okay." he said finally. He slid into the car and glanced at the key and turned it hard, then abruptly turned it back off again. "Buckle up."

I could tell this was a demand not a request. "Oh sure." I clicked it in the he turned on the engine once more. He put his foot on the gas and we lurched forward and the brakes squealed and we were thrown back into our seats.

"Sorry..." he mumbled and gripped the wheel tighter.

"It's fine. Just press the gas a little lighter." I said it with a sense of humor, the calmer I am, the better he drives.

Lightly tapping it we crawled forward, sometimes he dared press it a little faster but slammed on the brakes. Luckily we weren't that far month little air port where the rest of the private jets were held. He got out and opened my door for me. "Sorry for my crappy driving." he whispered in my ear then we walked up on the plane. "Nevere been a fan of planes." he murmurs.

On board, were served appetizers which we ate like three whole ones.

"These are so freaking good." Fang said popping two shrimp in his mouth.

"Why can't I have these I home all the time?" I agreed.

"Where do you live?"

"Arizona, tiny town, you?"

"California, near my dad's old work."

"Old work?" I questioned.

"We got fired like 20 years ago and still doesn't want to give it up."

"What did he do?"

"He was a scientist."

I cringed. "Oh, that's er, neat."

"I hate scientists." he shrugged popping in another shrimp.

"Me too, I didn't want to insult you."

"Be completely honest."

"I'm good at that." We landed in about an hour and we caught glances at the strip.

"Vegas? I thought we were skydiving, this is better. Had some good times here."

"I told you we weren't skydiving! And what good times? I've never been here."

"Iggy, my brother, in Chip and Dales, never mind." his lips curled up at the end slightly.

"Iggy?" I thought I had a family of weird names. No offense."

"None taken."

"Well let's go gamble! I say at MGM, it's famous right?"

"Sounds cool." We walked around the Strip until we finally found MGM. Walking in, he walked around the card tables and rows and rows of slot machines and other fancy new ways contraptions to steal the Bachelorettes money.

"What's you favorite?" I asked trying to decide.

"Classic poker, or Texas hold'em maybe."

"Which is easier?"

"Texas probably." we sat down and were dealt each our cards, looking up from my hand I saw we had a crowd of followers taking my picture and filming Fang and I. Uncomfortable, ( Fang didn't look that great either.) we left and found a row of slightly abandoned slot machines.

"They should mind their own business." I growled yanking the handle down.

"Not everyone has cameras following them in their dates that will be aired on national TV." he pulled the handle down and won 5 dollars from 3 lemons in a row.

I decided to ignore that comment. We pulled in silence for awhile. "How can you be so emotionless? Does it ever get tiring?"

"Uh, no?"

I sighed. And put another quarter in the machine.

"Why are you here?"

"Because I'm the 'Bachelorette' " I smirked making my voice all high pitched.

"You know what I mean."

"My siblings signed me up."

"You still could've declined."

"I didn't because, well that's my own business." I snapped. What was I supposed to say? My mutant family forced me too? Literally?

"Sorry."

"Its fine. Why are you here?"

"Er..."

"Be honest."

"Siblings. Or I did it because I lost a bet." he looked... Scared? Did he think I was going to be mad?

"That's awesome." I laughed.

"What?"

"I just thought you were some other lame guy that signed up to be on the show to I don't know 'find love'" I mimicked all the guys a heard two days previously.

"Your different." he said it and the ends of his lips curled up.

"Is that a bad thing?"

"Depends on how you look at it."

I looked away half smiling and watch my quarter go to waste again. "I suck at this. I can't even win a dollar."

"This one will win." he decided examining the last quarter in my cup. He hovered over me and put our faces next to each other and inserted the quarter. Putting my hand below his, he pulled the lever. 3 berries lined up.

"I won," I exclaimed, jumping up and down. No more cheesecake factory, no stale bagels for breakfast!

"How much did I win?"

"3."

"Grand? Yes!"

"Three dollars Max." he smirked.

Adrenaline draining out of my body, I sputtered, "What?"

"Common, that's triple than you thought you would ever get."

I punched him in the arm, hard. "Not funny. I was dreaming of workless days." He smirked yet again. "Let's go." I said breaking into a grin, I'm dying from all the smoke in here."

"What are we doing next?" he asked as we walked to the rental car and happily surprised with a driver.

"Thank God." Fang said loudly.

"Wow that's the loudest thing I have ever heard you say."

"I hate driving."

"That's good because you suck at it." he grinned. "I'm no better, well maybe a little but not much."

Finally we arrive. "We are we doing here?" he asked glancing around at nothing but dirt roads.

"Driving 4 wheelers, ATV's, whatever you want to call it."

"But we both can barley drive."

"These are smaller easier and better. Trust me. I've seen it on TV."

He looked skeptical but didn't say anything.

We got hooked up with a helmets and junk and he got a blue and I got red. "Ready?" he nodded. With that, I sped off.

(~Fang POV~)

Max left me coughing on dust I pressed lightly on the gas to discover Max was right, a ton easier than driving. Swerving around corners I tried to find the path she took. Speeding over the hills and all around, not what I was expecting coming to this show, I don't think anyone was expecting Max.

Turning another corner I finally spot Max and speed her way. I chase her for a good bit and finally I feel the need to pass her. She hears me and speeds up even faster. Nearly going full speed, I'm tailing her. She looks back at me and sticks her tongue out, but she didn't ease the gas up at all.

"WATCH OUT, MAX! I yell and she slams on her breaks.

I hear a crash and jump off my ATV and run over. She is sprawled on the ground. Her hair is covered in dust and the clasps on her necklace broke. I pick her head up and ease her to a sitting position, but I don't let go of her. I peel the necklace of her neck and take of the helmet. Neither of us say anything for a minute. "What hurts?"

"I'm good. I eased in to ditch, but my slamming of the break did not to me wonders."

"Your knee is bleeding." I see it staining her grey pants.

"Is it? Its fine really." a paramedic came over from the set and I snatched the First Aid kit out of his hands "I got it."

I pull her left pant leg up above the knee and wipe it clean, and put cream on it. I look throughout the band aids "Hmm, there is Hello Kitty or regular. You are so Hello Kitty." I put the pink cat band aid on top and she does a fake mad face.

"Pffft. Let's go eat, Its a picnic looking at the mountains. I made them get the best burgers in Vegas for us."

"Here you have to ride with me." I scooped her up placing her on the seat. She looks skeptical but doesn't object seeing as her ATV is in ditch.

"It should be just North of here." she said pointing a path.

"I will find it." I sat in front turning it on and light pressing the gas, not going at all fast.

"You have to go faster than that. I'm not afraid."

I pressed it harder and she quickly wrapped her hands tightly around my waist at the jolt. I go steadily forward until we finally drive upon the picnic spot where it's all ready. I give her my hand and she jumps off.

"Mmm greasy delicious food." she bounds to the blanket happily.

We sit on the blanket. And the burgers are wrapped eloquently on fancy plates and napkins, something tells me it didn't come out of the burger joint like this.

We stuff our faces pretty much. We are down to the last bites of our second burger ( these burgers are like the size of my head) " I can't eat anymore." I say throwing down the last piece.

"I can!" she grins and eats it. "Thanks for saving me by the way."

"I didn't save you, it was my fault you fell, I shouldn't have tailed you."

"That's what makes it fun." she shrugged. "So you have a brother?"

"James and Zephyr. But I call them Iggy and Gazzy."

"Gazzy?"

"Don't ask. What about you?"

"3 sisters. Monique, Ariel, and Ella. But Angel is Ariel and Monique is Nudge. And Ella is Ella."

"We do have weird names." I say agreeing to her comment earlier.

The last of the sun is finally going over the mountains and it's time to go.

She grips my waist again as we set off, and even lays her head on my back. As we arrive before we get in the car she grabs my hand. "Here, I kind of sat on it on the way back but, yah." I saw the crushed rose in her hand. "I actually had a lot of fun today, and you said to be honest, so I am very surprised and I just wanted you to have -" I quickly pecked her lightly on the lips. I immediately pulled back hopefully she won't see how red my face is. (its red not blushing!) "Sorry. Sorry." I mumble. She is obviously stunned and I take the rose out of her hand and open the car for her.

"Thanks." her voice a little high.

In the car she is silent. I completely but not totally regret kissing Max. I disgust myself on kissing her so soon, if at all and she obviously didn't want you too, we were just playing around she thinking we were just friends. I am not even here for her. The rest of the guys would give a leg to be where I am now, and I didn't even intend on being on the stupid show let alone be Max's first choice. Why did I even kiss her? I mean she just seems real, but that's what everyone says. Oh dear God. But for the .5 seconds that's I kissed her it felt good. But I probably just imagined it.

We road home in awkward silence, so dark she probably couldn't even see my face. So I thought it was safe to stare. She didn't look mad, sad, or anything but perhaps confused. She stared back, but I was positive she couldn't see my face in the blackness. When we got to her place I held the door open and she hugged me. Just around the back and looked up and me, probably wondering if I would kiss her again, but I didn't. I gave a quick hug back. "I had a lot of fun." I gave an awkward crooked smile and waved when I was back inside the car and she looked more confused than ever.

Hope you liked it(: took me forever to update but it's hard to get a turn on the iPad (I am writing it on and iPad) so Suggestions are great! What do you think the group date should be? I forgot how many people go exactly so I have to google that but a bunch do:] Okay so please please review!