The Results!
Me (Pinklife): Hello and welcome to my very first Result Story! Before we begin, let me introduce the judges…Radar180…
Radar180: Hey everyone!
Me: and Akozu Heiwa.
Akozu Heiwa: Hi! It is an honor to be here and judge.
Me: Alright. Know 4 people entered and one will win. The people who entered are:
-CuriosityKilledTheKat
-AlphaBetaSoup
-Stinkfly3
-Glacial Pisces
Good Luck to all! Let's get started.
First we will start with CuriosityKilledTheKat. So Radar180, what did you like about it?
CuriosityKilledTheKat
Radar180: It was a slight alternate ending to the movie and I was really impressed by it. The author was not afraid to put the characters in almost mortal danger and he/she was not afraid to add some slight violence. It kept a darker spin on the scene.
Me: Thank you for your comment. Akozu Heiwa, what did you like about it?
Akozu Heiwa: Very good alternate ending.
Me: Thank you Akozu Heiwa. I liked how you just went forward with it and weren't afraid to put in your thoughts. Now, Radar180, was there anything wrong with it?
Radar180: The only thing that could've been wrong with it was the transitions. The sentences felt minor slapdash when read.
Me: I agree. And Akozu Heiwa, was there anything wrong with it?
Akozu Heiwa: No, not really.
Me: Interesting. For me, at first I was all confused but later in the story I got it. Last question, Radar180, did you like it and why?
Radar180: Yes, I liked it. Not only was it a great re-vamp but it kept the original ending at the same time.
Me: Ok, I don't know what re-vamp means, but I was never good at Vocab. And Akozu Heiwa…
Akozu Heiwa: Yes, definitely. It seemed like something that could've happened. Besides, the problem was resolved too simply and quickly in the movie, so I liked this.
Me: Very nice. It wasn't horrible, so yeah I liked it. I liked it because you went out forward and didn't care about what you put in there.
Now for the ratings… (dramatic music)
Radar180: 7!
Akozu Heiwa: 10!
Me: 8!
Total: 25 points!
Me: Good job! Remember the highest amount of points is 30. Alright. Next let's talk about AlphaBetaSoup's entry.
AlphaBetaSoup
Me: Now, Akozu Heiwa what did you like about it?
Akozu Heiwa: I liked it very much. It was interesting and well-written.
Me: Very nice comment. Radar180, how did you like it?
Radar180: It was interesting. The plot centers on the characters that Phineas and Ferb didn't get to meet in the original movie.
Me: Thank you for that. For me, I liked all of it! It was great! Now Akozu Heiwa, was there anything wrong with it?
Akozu Heiwa: There was 1 or 2 spelling errors, but nothing big.
Me: Really? I didn't notice any spelling errors. Hmmm…anyway, Radar180 what about you?
Radar180: The only problem was the banter between two characters. It was sort of annoying and distracted a little from the main plot.
Me: I disagree with all of you peeps! I didn't notice anything wrong. Akozu Heiwa, did you like it and why?
Akozu Heiwa: Yes, as I said, it was interesting AND well-written.
Me: I agree. And Radar180, how about you?
Radar180: I liked it because it was something different.
Me: Very nice. Now, did I like it? I didn't like it…I LOVED IT! It was creative and something different. It was something I wanted to hear.
Ratings… (dramatic music)
Akozu Heiwa: 9.5!
Radar180: 7!
Me: 10!
Total: 26.5
Me: Wow! Awesome score! Now we will do Stinkfly3.
Stinkfly3
Me: Alright. It is time for Stinkfly3 entry results. Radar180, what did you like about it?
Radar180: I was really not impressed by it. The author was brave enough to do the rare thing and just jump to the main plot; I give him/her props for that.
Me: Interesting and Akozu Heiwa, how about you?
Akozu Heiwa: As for the plot itself, I am more of a Phinbella fan. BUT it was well-written, so in the sense I did like it.
Me: I am a Phinbella fan too. I say, I like how it was different…
Now Radar180, was there anything wrong with it?
Radar180: It was out of character in the story.
Me: And Akozu Heiwa?
Akozu Heiwa: Not really.
Me: I disagree. I didn't like Ferb making a move. That's just me. Now Radar180 did you like it and why?
Radar180: Did I like the one-shot? I wish I liked it more.
Me: That is a reasonable answer. Did you like it Akozu Heiwa?
Akozu Heiwa: Like I said, Plot-not my favorite. But the story itself, overlooking the Ferbella, was good.
Me: Interesting. For me, it wasn't horrible. Well if Ferb didn't sound like a guy who makes moves…I would have liked it more.
Ratings… (dramatic music)
Radar180: 5!
Akozu Heiwa: 8!
Me: 6!
Total: 19
Me: Great Job! And last, but not least, Glacial Pisces!
Glacial Pisces
Me: So, Akozu Heiwa, what did you like about it?
Akozu Heiwa: Very neat. I loved how they added their own character. I mess around with things like that a lot.
Me: Very nice. Radar180?
Radar180: I thought it was generally alright. It was basically a remake of the movie with an OC.
Me: Thank you Radar180. I liked how it was different. I like the added character. I did like when they helped Doof. and stuff. That was well done. Akozu Heiwa, was there anything wrong with it?
Akozu Heiwa: I didn't get the chocolate to coffee ratio thing. But that's just me.
Me: It is not just you, I didn't get that either. How about you Radar180?
Radar180: There were a few spelling errors however (Nothing too bad). And I felt as though the plot was ever-so-slightly choppy (again, it's not so bad).
Me: Really? There were spelling errors? I didn't notice. And yes, there was something wrong with it. Too much out of character. Now, Akozu Heiwa, did you like it and why?
Akozu Heiwa: I definitely liked it. Except the part I didn't understand, because I didn't understand it! But the story was very intriguing.
Me: Good comment. Radar180?
Radar180: I did like it a little, mostly for its originality with the OC as well as the effort in turning it into a full chapter story.
Me: Thank you for that comment. I didn't like it so much. Too much detail and Ferb was mean. No one likes Ferb mean!
Ratings… (dramatic music)
Akozu Heiwa: 10!
Radar180: 6!
Me: 7!
Total: 23
Me: Wow! Awesome job! Now that is all. Time to announce the winners!
In third place we have…Glacial Pisces! Congrats.
In second place we have…CuriosityKilledTheKat! Great story!
And what we have been waiting for. In FIRST PLACE is…is…is…is…is...IS…AlphaBetaSoup! Congrats! Now, AlphaBetaSoup, you get to chose what you want for your prize…
Choices:
A: I will interview you.
B:I will make a story dedicated to you.
C:If you had something in mind, just tell me.
PM me what prize you want. Congrats AlphaBetaSoup!
P.S. How I made this is the judges answered those questions and I typed them down. So yes, they really said what they said.
-Pinklife