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disclaimer- i dont own CSI:Miami, trust me if i did, walter would have a love life, ryan and natalia would be together and Horatio would have killed memo.

this is a small chapter of sara/ryan brother/sister relationship and strong natalia/ryan

thank you plz review.


It had been a full week since Sara and Walter had shared their first kiss. They had shared many in the week. Since Sara was training for her job she only had to be at the gun range. Which meant she only had to be there for four ours a day three days a week. The rest she spent with Walter, they either watched, films, basketball games or chatted. They even played many Wii and x-box games. When she was at work, she came to Walter's for dinner, on one occasion to a small café away from town so no one Ryan knew would see them and pass on the message they were dating. They had decided that since Sara was Ryan's sister and Walter a very close friend of Ryan's they would keep the secret of their relationship to them selves. But of course Ryan wasn't stupid he realised Sara went out for hours during the day and come back smile stupidly. But Sara knew Ryan had a secret of his own she just didn't quiet but her finger on what till this morning.

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Sara came padding down the stairs in a pair of pink sleep cropped tracksuit bottoms and a green checked night shirt her hair was in its natural wavy way after she gave it a quick brush. She yawned sleepily. She found Ryan's house very bizarre, it had its bathroom and shower was down stairs through the kitchen. Half way down the stairs she heard the shower start,which only meant like every morning Ryan took over the bathroom at the most inconvenient times. She final reached the bottom of the stairs, she looked at the clock in the living room, it was six in the morning it was almost a whole hour and a half from when she usually got up and yet Ryan still managed to beat her to the bathroom. But it was unusual for Ryan to be up this early.

"hello boy"smiled Sara as Bryant jumped off of the sofa. She heard some clattering from the kitchen but she knew Ryan was in the bathroom. "come here boy"whispered Sara. She grabbed hold of Bryant's collar and lead him towards the door that separated the kitchen/dinning from the living room. But when she opened the door she was not expecting what she saw. Natalia boa vista was in her kitchen wearing only one of Ryan's old faded police academy tops then went down half down her half naked backside and a red lacy thong as she reached up to the top self of one on Ryan's cupboards to get a few plates, Sara gasped in embarrassment

"oh my"said a very shocked Sara. Natalia spun round incredibly fast.

"um hi Sara"said a wide eyed Natalia.

" Ryan in the shower?"asked Sara, Natalia nodded still in shock. "well then what we having for breakfast?"

"um I was making sunny side up eggs"she said.

"yum, so this would be why Ryan has been considerably happier"smiled Sara knowing she had something over her brother. She walked over to the fridge as the shower stopped.

"so was last night fun?"asked Ryan is a gruff voice as he came out of the bathroom. With a towel wrapped around his waist. Natalia went the deepest shade red Ryan had ever seen.

"what?"asked Ryan worried at Natalia's change in behaviour. Sara cleared her throat. Ryan turned around so fast Sara let out a snigger.

"what?"asked Sara, "something you would like to tell me?"asked Sara.

" I don't know you gonna tell where you go off to for hours on ends on your day off?"retorted Ryan trying to hide his humiliation.

"not really, unlike you I caught you and I am innocent of such things until proven guilty "smiled Sara, Natalia had not giggle at their childish antics.

" I will be back in a second I will go put something more suitable on"snapped Ryan.

"your okay with this right?"asked Natalia, suddenly nervous, Sara padded over to the dryer.

"yeah of course, here um these might fit you for now, it might stop Ryan from drooling over your bear legs"she smiled.

"you sure?"asked Natalia who quickly slipped the joggers on.

"yeah I had my ideas"smirked Sara, Natalia smiled.

"well I spent the last two nights here and you didn't realise, so I am surprised we lasted this far" said Natalia.

"well I have to start thinking about things I want from Ryan"said Sara a evil smirk forming on her face.

" Sara will you be going to your boyfriends house again?"asked Ryan as he walked back in some sweats.

" how do you know it is not a female friend?"asked Sara raising her eyebrows. Ryan just put a arm around Natalia's waist and glared at Sara. Who was now eating Ryan's sunny side up eggs.


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